L. A. Fiore

I'd like to start out by saying the plot and basic story outline attracted me too this book. Bad boy meets shy girl, boy loves girl, girl loves boy exc. Who doesn't love a bad boy? But half way through the book I found myself feeling a bit disappointed and surprisingly unable to finish the book. I hate how in the synopsis It led me to believe that the guy would do the chasing when really, it was the female. Now don't get me wrong, girls chasing guys isn't the issue, it's that i feel a bit mislead. I tried, I really did try to finish it believe me...but tell me.

How are you supposed to read a book when you absolutely and utterly HATE the main character??

I don't dislike the main character. I don't tolerate her. The only thing I like about her is...well now that I really think about it...

NOTHING

Now as for the list of things I hate, that's easy.


The main character has NO PRIDE. Hey, i get it, you love him, but i can't even count on my hand the number of times i threw down this book because the main character made me mad. Boiling mad i tell you. Her decisions during the end of the first part left me wanting for more for this character.

During the whole half of the book i read, everyone was saying that the character is shy and lacking and boy they really did have her pegged, then. But towards the end of the first part the side characters were saying how much shes changing when i honestly don't see it. Nothing changed and she kept chasing him even after everything. I wish the character had taken more action instead of sitting around for weeks. If you want change you have to make it happen, and she just wasn't.

All in all everything felt rushed, not descriptive, and lacking. I felt like things were happening to fast and didn't have enough time to build, therefore effecting my connection with the characters. Which as I've ranted about, was none.

Didn't finish this book and at this point i don't plan too. It's just too disappointing.… (more)