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Now You See Us
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Catherine (alternativelytitledbooks) - so very behind!'s review
bookshelves: widget-received, netgalley
Mar 08, 2023
bookshelves: widget-received, netgalley
**Many thanks to NetGalley, Scene of the Crime, William Morrow, and Balli Kaur Jaswal for an ARC of this book! Now available as of 3.7!!**
A slow-burn, character driven commentary on class distinction...with just a dash of mystery thrown in!
Three maids (Corazon 'Cora", Donita, and Angel) have been stationed by Merry Maids on the luxurious island of Singapore, but they are all in vastly different situations. Cora has come out of semi-retirement in order to protect a dangerous secret, which she is determined to keep from her employer, Elizabeth....and keep Elizabeth's wealthy daughter Josephine in the dark as well. Donita is brassy, sassy, and isn't afraid to act like the impetuous 20-something that she is...but some romantic rendezvous with an Indian construction worker have not gone unnoticed by her boss, the uppity Mrs. Fann. Angel is recovering from heartbreak after losing her girlfriend, Suzan, but she doesn't have much time to dwell when a new in-home care worker threatens her position in the household.
These women are about to bond in an unexpected way, however...yet another maid, Flordeliza, has been accused of murder...and murdering her EMPLOYER, no less. The trio jump into action, convinced of her innocence, and Donita in particular swears that it could not have been Flordeliza....she SAW her the very same evening. But with their voices stifled by their ma'ams and society itself, can strength in numbers save an innocent woman from a terrible fate?
I was sold on this premise pretty quickly, and from early chapters narrated by Cora, I felt as though I was instantly a part of this intriguing (and sometimes maddening) culture in Singapore. Cora's voice is clear and wise, and it was easy to root for her early on as well. As the narrative moved to some of the other perspectives, however, I'm not sure if some of the other personalities were as intriguing or easy to relate to as hers. Angel's character development seemed to center almost solely around the fact that she had a lesbian relationship and Donita, being a bit of a wild child, also felt redundant in a lot of her sections.
I appreciated the aspect of social commentary on the wealthy vs. the maid class, and the author made some solid points...but after a while, they got a bit repetitive. For instance, the maids discover a Facebook group where many of Singapore's elite with workers in their homes tell story after story about how they are convinced their maid was stealing, cheating with the husband of the house, etc. and after a while, these just got tiresome to read. They were also always placed at the end of a chapter, so it took an already slow-moving narrative and slowed it down even further.
The mystery angle itself is also probably the least important part of the book (in some ways) so if you're eager to play detective, I'd look elsewhere. Not saying you can't put your detective cap on and have a go at it but the perp is a bit predictable and even the eventual discovery isn't really the meat and potatoes of this story. The title alone is honestly enough to give you a sense of the overarching theme of this one, however, so in some ways I didn't feel like I needed to actually READ the book to 'get the point'.
Despite a strong and promising start, this trio of empowered females lacked the oomph I was hoping to find in these pages and left me feeling unfulfilled as a reader. And in a sad parallel to the real-life circumstances that inspired this book? In both instances, there is still a LONG way yet to go.
3.5 stars
A slow-burn, character driven commentary on class distinction...with just a dash of mystery thrown in!
Three maids (Corazon 'Cora", Donita, and Angel) have been stationed by Merry Maids on the luxurious island of Singapore, but they are all in vastly different situations. Cora has come out of semi-retirement in order to protect a dangerous secret, which she is determined to keep from her employer, Elizabeth....and keep Elizabeth's wealthy daughter Josephine in the dark as well. Donita is brassy, sassy, and isn't afraid to act like the impetuous 20-something that she is...but some romantic rendezvous with an Indian construction worker have not gone unnoticed by her boss, the uppity Mrs. Fann. Angel is recovering from heartbreak after losing her girlfriend, Suzan, but she doesn't have much time to dwell when a new in-home care worker threatens her position in the household.
These women are about to bond in an unexpected way, however...yet another maid, Flordeliza, has been accused of murder...and murdering her EMPLOYER, no less. The trio jump into action, convinced of her innocence, and Donita in particular swears that it could not have been Flordeliza....she SAW her the very same evening. But with their voices stifled by their ma'ams and society itself, can strength in numbers save an innocent woman from a terrible fate?
I was sold on this premise pretty quickly, and from early chapters narrated by Cora, I felt as though I was instantly a part of this intriguing (and sometimes maddening) culture in Singapore. Cora's voice is clear and wise, and it was easy to root for her early on as well. As the narrative moved to some of the other perspectives, however, I'm not sure if some of the other personalities were as intriguing or easy to relate to as hers. Angel's character development seemed to center almost solely around the fact that she had a lesbian relationship and Donita, being a bit of a wild child, also felt redundant in a lot of her sections.
I appreciated the aspect of social commentary on the wealthy vs. the maid class, and the author made some solid points...but after a while, they got a bit repetitive. For instance, the maids discover a Facebook group where many of Singapore's elite with workers in their homes tell story after story about how they are convinced their maid was stealing, cheating with the husband of the house, etc. and after a while, these just got tiresome to read. They were also always placed at the end of a chapter, so it took an already slow-moving narrative and slowed it down even further.
The mystery angle itself is also probably the least important part of the book (in some ways) so if you're eager to play detective, I'd look elsewhere. Not saying you can't put your detective cap on and have a go at it but the perp is a bit predictable and even the eventual discovery isn't really the meat and potatoes of this story. The title alone is honestly enough to give you a sense of the overarching theme of this one, however, so in some ways I didn't feel like I needed to actually READ the book to 'get the point'.
Despite a strong and promising start, this trio of empowered females lacked the oomph I was hoping to find in these pages and left me feeling unfulfilled as a reader. And in a sad parallel to the real-life circumstances that inspired this book? In both instances, there is still a LONG way yet to go.
3.5 stars
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Sorry to hear this one lacked in some ways. That premise was definitely promising. A great review Catherine! 💜
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Wonderful review, Catherine! 💙 I had been eying this title because of the premise but it looks like it could have done with some finetuning. It seems to have gone overboard in trying to cover a variety of stories.
I'm not a fan of authors banging me over the head with certain messages... Like I get it!!!! Great review 👍
Tina wrote: "Sorry to hear this one lacked in some ways. That premise was definitely promising. A great review Catherine! 💜"
It had some good moments, but the action sort of got lost in the author’s message and I was hoping I’d get more out of it by the end. Thank you kindly Tina! 💖💖
It had some good moments, but the action sort of got lost in the author’s message and I was hoping I’d get more out of it by the end. Thank you kindly Tina! 💖💖
Rosh [busy month; will catch up soon!] wrote: "Wonderful review, Catherine! 💙 I had been eying this title because of the premise but it looks like it could have done with some finetuning. It seems to have gone overboard in trying to cover a var..."
Thank you Rosh! 💚 I do think there were some good elements and it isn’t a bad read at all, I just wanted more out of it. I think you might potentially like it though, so if you do pick it up, I’ll be curious to hear your thoughts!!
Thank you Rosh! 💚 I do think there were some good elements and it isn’t a bad read at all, I just wanted more out of it. I think you might potentially like it though, so if you do pick it up, I’ll be curious to hear your thoughts!!
GirlWithThePinkSkiMask IS SORTA BACK wrote: "I'm not a fan of authors banging me over the head with certain messages... Like I get it!!!! Great review 👍"
Oh trust me she made it so clear from page one that I almost wish she’d written nonfiction about the same topic because I think that piece without all the mystery stuff would have held my attention better. Thank you Pink!! 💕😊
Oh trust me she made it so clear from page one that I almost wish she’d written nonfiction about the same topic because I think that piece without all the mystery stuff would have held my attention better. Thank you Pink!! 💕😊
Kay ❦ wrote: "Repetitive message is tiresome, a terrific review Catherine!🫶"
It was! I wanted more depth of emotion and maybe a bit of a twistier plot but it wasn’t to be…thanks much, Kay!! 🫶 (I didn’t even know that emoji existed until today, it’s so cute!! 😍)
It was! I wanted more depth of emotion and maybe a bit of a twistier plot but it wasn’t to be…thanks much, Kay!! 🫶 (I didn’t even know that emoji existed until today, it’s so cute!! 😍)
Sujoya wrote: "The premise does sound good. Sorry this wasn't a good read. Fabulous review, Catherine!🩷"
It had a lot of potential and wasn’t a bad read, but I think there could have been more going on in terms of plot to amp up the drama and balance the social commentary aspect. Thanks so much, Sujoya!! 💞
It had a lot of potential and wasn’t a bad read, but I think there could have been more going on in terms of plot to amp up the drama and balance the social commentary aspect. Thanks so much, Sujoya!! 💞
Kendall wrote: "Fabulous review Catherine! Sorry this fell flat for you!!"
Aw thank you Kendall! 💖 it was alright and I’d consider another book from this author, but there was a lot of untapped potential here!
Aw thank you Kendall! 💖 it was alright and I’d consider another book from this author, but there was a lot of untapped potential here!
Ceecee wrote: "Great review Catherine - sorry it was a let down! 💜"
Thanks so much, Ceecee! 💞 I would be curious to see if some of the author’s other books would be a better fit!!
Thanks so much, Ceecee! 💞 I would be curious to see if some of the author’s other books would be a better fit!!
Julie wrote: "Very nice, honest review, Catherine! Sorry this one fell flat. 💖"
Thank you kindly, Julie! 💞 while it wasn’t a winner, it wasn’t terrible either, thankfully! I do think the author tackled a solid topic, so I appreciated that aspect!
Thank you kindly, Julie! 💞 while it wasn’t a winner, it wasn’t terrible either, thankfully! I do think the author tackled a solid topic, so I appreciated that aspect!
A well-balanced and thoughtful review, as always, Catherine! I agree with you that sometimes authors' thoughts may work better as non-fiction rather than trying to make a fictional idea work around the things they're trying to illuminate! 💗
Kat *will catch up soon!* wrote: "A well-balanced and thoughtful review, as always, Catherine! I agree with you that sometimes authors' thoughts may work better as non-fiction rather than trying to make a fictional idea work around..."
Thank you very much, Kat! 💖 this was one of those times where I definitely didn’t regret picking the book up, but I just had higher hopes for the plot and felt like they got lost in the shuffle. I would be very curious to read a nonfiction piece on this type of story though and the author did mention her inspiration in the author’s note, so maybe I should look into that soon!!
Thank you very much, Kat! 💖 this was one of those times where I definitely didn’t regret picking the book up, but I just had higher hopes for the plot and felt like they got lost in the shuffle. I would be very curious to read a nonfiction piece on this type of story though and the author did mention her inspiration in the author’s note, so maybe I should look into that soon!!
Dorie - Cats&Books :) wrote: "Sorry this was a bit of a letdown, great review! The cover is gorgeous!"
Thank you Dorie! 💙 I agree, the cover is so beautiful!! 🦜
Thank you Dorie! 💙 I agree, the cover is so beautiful!! 🦜
Jayme wrote: "I am glad I decided to PASS on this one! Fantastic review! 💖"
I should have too! I blame that gorgeous cover (once again) LOL! Thanks so much, Jayme! 💕
I should have too! I blame that gorgeous cover (once again) LOL! Thanks so much, Jayme! 💕
Southern Lady Reads wrote: "Interesting! I don't particularly love character driven books but great review!"
It’s too bad because as much as it was character driven, I don’t feel like I got to know the characters the way I would have liked. Thanks SLR!! 💜
It’s too bad because as much as it was character driven, I don’t feel like I got to know the characters the way I would have liked. Thanks SLR!! 💜