Kelly's Reviews > Better Luck Next Time

Better Luck Next Time is a unique story idea for historical fiction, focusing on a dude ranch for divorcees in 1938. The concept is a breath of fresh air from the glut of World War II novels that fill the shelves right now. That being said it didn't do all that much for me, either in concept or in execution. The story is narrated by Ward, who was a staff member on the ranch, as a now retired folksy small town doctor. Some may find this charming, but the reminiscing periodically interrupted by his medical practice that had nothing to do with the story being told was distracting to me. The story itself isn't particularly redeeming to me either, as Ward as a young man was incredibly naïve and a little bit too agreeable, and the women he spends the most time with - Emily and Nina - are self-absorbed and oblivious to the real world problems of most people while the Depression is going on. Nina, the irrepressible one, takes it upon herself to lighten up the more straight-laced Emily. The two are having a grand adventure with Ward as their wingman when Emily's even more self-absorbed daughter Portia shows up as well as Archer, the husband she plans to divorce. Beyond the fact that a paper mache horse head and fairy wings have already made a significant appearance by this point, why shouldn't things get even messier? I would have liked this story to be more interesting, more redeeming and more engaging, but I just couldn't bring myself to like any of these characters or the rambling storyline.