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During the Dance by Mark  Lawrence
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bookshelves: bereavement, family-dynamics, gritty-realism, heartwarming, human-emotions, inspirational, short-stories, uplifting
Read 2 times. Last read July 8, 2019.

"All her bright golden hair,
tarnished with rust.
She, who was young and fair,
fallen to dust."

—Oscar Wilde

For Me-me, the girl who named herself.

Oh, my!
A poignant, hugely emotive short story of a unique little girl (Me-me), whose sparkling imagination elevates her from the grim reality of the London slums in which she resides.
This snapshot of a tale is told from the POV of her older brother, Sammy, who has a rather more jaundiced view of the world they live in. Yet despite himself, his little sis provides him with the spiritual guidance he so sorely needs. She is Sammy's inspiration as well as his entertainment.
In her beautiful spontaneous mind, Me-me pirouettes like a ballerina, living her disadvantaged life to the full and enriching the lives of those around her.
And she enriched mine too for the duration of this soul-stirring story.

Thanks to Angela M for drawing my attention to this touching, almost parabolic, tale.
It would move a statue, so it would.

Fans of Foster, by Claire Keegan, will love this!

And it's a ten-minute freebie on that new-fangled internet thingy... http://www.marklawrence.buzz/story/du...
I applaud you, Mark Lawrence.
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Reading Progress

Finished Reading
July 8, 2019 – Started Reading
July 8, 2019 – Shelved
July 8, 2019 – Shelved as: bereavement
July 8, 2019 – Shelved as: family-dynamics
July 8, 2019 – Shelved as: gritty-realism
July 8, 2019 – Shelved as: heartwarming
July 8, 2019 – Shelved as: human-emotions
July 8, 2019 – Shelved as: inspirational
July 8, 2019 – Shelved as: short-stories
July 8, 2019 – Shelved as: uplifting
July 8, 2019 – Finished Reading

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Maureen ( NOT RECEIVING NOTIFICATIONS) Lovely review Kevin, glad you enjoyed it 😊


Cheri Excellent review, Kevin, it takes talent to pack so much into such a small amount of space!


Kevin Ansbro Maureen wrote: "Lovely review Kevin, glad you enjoyed it 😊"

Enjoy it, I did, Maureen. Thank you! : )


Kevin Ansbro Cheri wrote: "Excellent review, Kevin, it takes talent to pack so much into such a small amount of space!"

Absolutely, Cheri. We've both read entire novels that don't have as much of a story!


Beata What can I say, Kevin, but THANK YOU! Very moving, indeed ..................


Kevin Ansbro Beata wrote: "What can I say, Kevin, but THANK YOU! Very moving, indeed .................."

You are so welcome, Beata! It was very moving. I read it twice as it carries some easily-missed nuances.


Antoinette Another short story you have me interested in!! Excellent review! Well, I loved Foster, so adding this one.


Kevin Ansbro Antoinette wrote: "Another short story you have me interested in!! Excellent review! Well, I loved Foster, so adding this one."

That's fantastic, Antoinette! You will definitely like this little gem. It's free and takes only ten minutes to read. : )


Angela M is taking a break. Fantastic review, Kevin. Credit goes to Maureen for bringing it to my attention.


Kevin Ansbro Angela M wrote: "Fantastic review, Kevin. Credit goes to Maureen for bringing it to my attention."

Yes, I saw that on your review, Angela, and thanked Maureen too! : )


message 11: by Kimber (last edited Jul 10, 2019 12:09AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Kimber Silver Lovely review, Kevin! I'm adding this one.


Kevin Ansbro Kimber wrote: "Lovely review, Kevin! I'm adding this one."

Brilliant! : )
You'll love it, I'm sure, Kimber!


message 13: by Marialyce (new) - added it

Marialyce Moving a statue story...well sign me up! Terrific review, Kevin!


Kevin Ansbro Marialyce wrote: "Moving a statue story...well sign me up! Terrific review, Kevin!"

Thank you so much, Marialyce! I think you'll be rewarded with this poignant short read.


message 15: by Canadian Jen (new)

Canadian Jen Great review, Kevin!


Kevin Ansbro Jen wrote: "Great review, Kevin!"

Thanks, Jen!


message 17: by Karen (new)

Karen Excellent review Kevin! I’ve downloaded it and look forward to reading it😊


Kevin Ansbro Karen wrote: "Excellent review Kevin! I’ve downloaded it and look forward to reading it😊"

Oh, goody! Please let me know when you have, Karen! : )


Laysee A review as soul-stirring as this touching gem, Kevin. Beautifully written.


Kevin Ansbro Laysee wrote: "A review as soul-stirring as this touching gem, Kevin. Beautifully written."

Kind as always, Laysee. Thank you! : )


Kevin Ansbro Nicola wrote: "This was such a wonderful story! I wasn’t prepared for how it would affect me. Lovely review Kevin!"

I had to read it twice to catch every nuance. Thank you, Nicola! : )


Paula K Wonderful review, Kevin! I will take a look...


Kevin Ansbro Paula wrote: "Wonderful review, Kevin! I will take a look..."

Please do, Paula. It takes less than ten minutes to read.
: )
http://www.marklawrence.buzz/story/du...


message 24: by Victoria (new)

Victoria Such a beautiful review, Kevin. I should probably check out that inter-web...


Kevin Ansbro Victoria wrote: "Such a beautiful review, Kevin. I should probably check out that inter-web..."

Please do, Victoria. It is but a ten-minute read!
And thank you for your kind words!
: )


Sandra Wonderful review Kevin! :)


Kevin Ansbro Sandra wrote: "Wonderful review Kevin! :)"

Thank you, Sandra! It is a moving piece of flash fiction.


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