Kevin Ansbro's Reviews > During the Dance
During the Dance
by
by
Kevin Ansbro's review
bookshelves: bereavement, family-dynamics, gritty-realism, heartwarming, human-emotions, inspirational, short-stories, uplifting
Jul 08, 2019
bookshelves: bereavement, family-dynamics, gritty-realism, heartwarming, human-emotions, inspirational, short-stories, uplifting
Read 2 times. Last read July 8, 2019.
"All her bright golden hair,
tarnished with rust.
She, who was young and fair,
fallen to dust."
—Oscar Wilde
For Me-me, the girl who named herself.
Oh, my!
A poignant, hugely emotive short story of a unique little girl (Me-me), whose sparkling imagination elevates her from the grim reality of the London slums in which she resides.
This snapshot of a tale is told from the POV of her older brother, Sammy, who has a rather more jaundiced view of the world they live in. Yet despite himself, his little sis provides him with the spiritual guidance he so sorely needs. She is Sammy's inspiration as well as his entertainment.
In her beautiful spontaneous mind, Me-me pirouettes like a ballerina, living her disadvantaged life to the full and enriching the lives of those around her.
And she enriched mine too for the duration of this soul-stirring story.
Thanks to Angela M for drawing my attention to this touching, almost parabolic, tale.
It would move a statue, so it would.
Fans of Foster, by Claire Keegan, will love this!
And it's a ten-minute freebie on that new-fangled internet thingy... http://www.marklawrence.buzz/story/du...
I applaud you, Mark Lawrence.
tarnished with rust.
She, who was young and fair,
fallen to dust."
—Oscar Wilde
For Me-me, the girl who named herself.
Oh, my!
A poignant, hugely emotive short story of a unique little girl (Me-me), whose sparkling imagination elevates her from the grim reality of the London slums in which she resides.
This snapshot of a tale is told from the POV of her older brother, Sammy, who has a rather more jaundiced view of the world they live in. Yet despite himself, his little sis provides him with the spiritual guidance he so sorely needs. She is Sammy's inspiration as well as his entertainment.
In her beautiful spontaneous mind, Me-me pirouettes like a ballerina, living her disadvantaged life to the full and enriching the lives of those around her.
And she enriched mine too for the duration of this soul-stirring story.
Thanks to Angela M for drawing my attention to this touching, almost parabolic, tale.
It would move a statue, so it would.
Fans of Foster, by Claire Keegan, will love this!
And it's a ten-minute freebie on that new-fangled internet thingy... http://www.marklawrence.buzz/story/du...
I applaud you, Mark Lawrence.
Sign into Goodreads to see if any of your friends have read
During the Dance.
Sign In »
Reading Progress
Finished Reading
July 8, 2019
–
Started Reading
July 8, 2019
– Shelved
July 8, 2019
– Shelved as:
bereavement
July 8, 2019
– Shelved as:
family-dynamics
July 8, 2019
– Shelved as:
gritty-realism
July 8, 2019
– Shelved as:
heartwarming
July 8, 2019
– Shelved as:
human-emotions
July 8, 2019
– Shelved as:
inspirational
July 8, 2019
– Shelved as:
short-stories
July 8, 2019
– Shelved as:
uplifting
July 8, 2019
–
Finished Reading
Comments Showing 1-27 of 27 (27 new)
date
newest »
message 1:
by
Maureen ( NOT RECEIVING NOTIFICATIONS)
(new)
-
rated it 4 stars
Jul 08, 2019 04:46AM
Lovely review Kevin, glad you enjoyed it 😊
reply
|
flag
Cheri wrote: "Excellent review, Kevin, it takes talent to pack so much into such a small amount of space!"
Absolutely, Cheri. We've both read entire novels that don't have as much of a story!
Absolutely, Cheri. We've both read entire novels that don't have as much of a story!
Beata wrote: "What can I say, Kevin, but THANK YOU! Very moving, indeed .................."
You are so welcome, Beata! It was very moving. I read it twice as it carries some easily-missed nuances.
You are so welcome, Beata! It was very moving. I read it twice as it carries some easily-missed nuances.
Another short story you have me interested in!! Excellent review! Well, I loved Foster, so adding this one.
Antoinette wrote: "Another short story you have me interested in!! Excellent review! Well, I loved Foster, so adding this one."
That's fantastic, Antoinette! You will definitely like this little gem. It's free and takes only ten minutes to read. : )
That's fantastic, Antoinette! You will definitely like this little gem. It's free and takes only ten minutes to read. : )
Angela M wrote: "Fantastic review, Kevin. Credit goes to Maureen for bringing it to my attention."
Yes, I saw that on your review, Angela, and thanked Maureen too! : )
Yes, I saw that on your review, Angela, and thanked Maureen too! : )
Kimber wrote: "Lovely review, Kevin! I'm adding this one."
Brilliant! : )
You'll love it, I'm sure, Kimber!
Brilliant! : )
You'll love it, I'm sure, Kimber!
Marialyce wrote: "Moving a statue story...well sign me up! Terrific review, Kevin!"
Thank you so much, Marialyce! I think you'll be rewarded with this poignant short read.
Thank you so much, Marialyce! I think you'll be rewarded with this poignant short read.
Karen wrote: "Excellent review Kevin! I’ve downloaded it and look forward to reading it😊"
Oh, goody! Please let me know when you have, Karen! : )
Oh, goody! Please let me know when you have, Karen! : )
Laysee wrote: "A review as soul-stirring as this touching gem, Kevin. Beautifully written."
Kind as always, Laysee. Thank you! : )
Kind as always, Laysee. Thank you! : )
Nicola wrote: "This was such a wonderful story! I wasn’t prepared for how it would affect me. Lovely review Kevin!"
I had to read it twice to catch every nuance. Thank you, Nicola! : )
I had to read it twice to catch every nuance. Thank you, Nicola! : )
Paula wrote: "Wonderful review, Kevin! I will take a look..."
Please do, Paula. It takes less than ten minutes to read.
: )
http://www.marklawrence.buzz/story/du...
Please do, Paula. It takes less than ten minutes to read.
: )
http://www.marklawrence.buzz/story/du...
Victoria wrote: "Such a beautiful review, Kevin. I should probably check out that inter-web..."
Please do, Victoria. It is but a ten-minute read!
And thank you for your kind words!
: )
Please do, Victoria. It is but a ten-minute read!
And thank you for your kind words!
: )