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The Stranger's Child by Alan Hollinghurst
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Now I don't read Booker Prize-winning author Alan Hollinghurst for his storytelling. In truth, the lyrical beauty of his flawless writing almost negates the need for a story. So my five-star rating is solely for his penmanship (though he doesn't employ synonyms for the word "said". The repetition of "he said/she said" dialogue tags is hard to ignore).
Alas, the story, such as it is, drags itself along like a beached turtle.
This ambitious (and lengthy) novel is rather difficult to describe; an English upper-class/middle-class love triangle with a smattering of homoerotica thrown in – a Brideshead-meets-Atonement hybrid, but without a plot. I felt as if I was witnessing an evolution, rather than anything resembling a story.
So, in truth, it was tedious. The author, like Ian McEwan, is undeniably one of Britain's finest writers and, as is true of McEwan, it's his elegant prose that steals the show. Hollinghurst is an artist in command of his craft but the whole, unfortunately, was less than the sum of its parts and if I were to rate the actual story, it would only merit a measly two stars.

Still, Hollinghurst is a highly gifted writer. Most authors out there would hate to have him peering over their shoulders while they’re tapping at a keyboard, so who am I to award him anything less than five lustrous stars?

Nonexistent story ... two stars
Top-tier prose .... five stars
Writing wins!
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Reading Progress

September 9, 2018 – Started Reading
September 23, 2018 – Shelved
September 23, 2018 – Shelved as: classic-literature
September 23, 2018 – Shelved as: coming-of-age
September 23, 2018 – Shelved as: family-dynamics
September 23, 2018 – Shelved as: literature-for-grown-ups
September 23, 2018 – Shelved as: modern-romance
September 23, 2018 – Shelved as: morality
September 23, 2018 – Shelved as: quintessentially-english
September 23, 2018 – Finished Reading
August 6, 2019 – Shelved as: sexuality

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message 1: by Susanne (new)

Susanne Brilliant review Kevin! Brideshead meets Atonement? Hmm.. intriguing!!


message 2: by Julie (new)

Julie G A beached turtle! 🐢


Kevin Ansbro Susanne wrote: "Brilliant review Kevin! Brideshead meets Atonement? Hmm.. intriguing!!"

Thanks, Susanne! It's not that intriguing. This is only recommended for those who can read a novel purely for its writing while trying to overlook the fact that the story is almost non-existant.


Kevin Ansbro Julie wrote: "A beached turtle! 🐢"

Thanks, Julie!
My simile is befitting. This does drag.


message 5: by Julie (new)

Julie G Perhaps. . . but, erotica? Erotica always moves plot along.


Cecily Fortunately, "tedious" is too strong for my experience of this book though I agree about the superb writing and its relative lack of plot. McEwan's Atonement is a good call; I hadn't really considered that. But he certainly shows his admiration of Brideshead. Thanks for your excellent review reminding me that I really should read another Hollinghurst. I guess it may be sooner than you!


Kevin Ansbro Julie wrote: "Perhaps. . . but, erotica? Erotica always moves plot along."

Not in this instance, Julie. It's too erotica-lite for smut-seekers.


message 8: by Julie (new)

Julie G Dang it! You know how much I like literary smut.


Kevin Ansbro Julie wrote: "Dang it! You know how much I like literary smut."
That's why I gave you fair warning, lest you got your hopes up, Julie! : )


message 10: by Kevin (last edited Sep 23, 2018 09:13AM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Kevin Ansbro Cecily wrote: "Fortunately, "tedious" is too strong for my experience of this book though I agree about the superb writing and its relative lack of plot. McEwan's Atonement is a good call; I hadn't really conside..."

Thanks, Cecily. I liked The Line of Beauty far more, yet just noticed I only awarded it four stars. I was probably too generous with this one!


message 11: by Nat (new)

Nat K Hmmm...interesting that you found this tedious yet awarded it five stars. You are a man of mystery Kev!


Kevin Ansbro Nat wrote: "Hmmm...interesting that you found this tedious yet awarded it five stars. You are a man of mystery Kev!"

I am verily an enigma wrapped up in a conundrum, Nat.
As a writer, I have to acknowledge the eminence of great writing, even if the storytelling leaves something to be desired!


message 13: by Cheri (new)

Cheri Kevin, I loved your review, and you have piqued my interest in this author - but not this particular book!


message 14: by Nat (new)

Nat K Kevin wrote: "Nat wrote: "Hmmm...interesting that you found this tedious yet awarded it five stars. You are a man of mystery Kev!"

I am verily an enigma wrapped up in a conundrum, Nat.
As a writer, I have to ac..."


That you are Kev, fair call. Great writing should indeed be acknowledged.


message 15: by Kevin (last edited Sep 24, 2018 02:36PM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Kevin Ansbro Cheri wrote: "Kevin, I loved your review, and you have piqued my interest in this author - but not this particular book!"

Thanks, Cheri.
Hollinghurst has ninja writing skills. Skills that would put most modern authors to shame. He doesn't, however, have the storytelling virtuosity of the likes of Charles Dickens or Victor Hugo.


Kevin Ansbro Nat wrote: "That you are Kev, fair call. Great writing should indeed be acknowledged..."

Thanks, Nat! : )


message 17: by Jaline (new)

Jaline Awesome review, Kevin! I'm glad to see you place writing above plot. My aim is to read both, but if one has to fail, it's probably better it be story rather than quality of writing. :)


Kevin Ansbro Jaline wrote: "Awesome review, Kevin! I'm glad to see you place writing above plot. My aim is to read both, but if one has to fail, it's probably better it be story rather than quality of writing. :)"

I agree! I can forgive a weak plot, but not poor writing.
Thanks, Jaline! : )


message 19: by Suz (new)

Suz Writing wins, Mr writer. Good review Kevin :)


Kevin Ansbro Suzanne wrote: "Writing wins, Mr writer. Good review Kevin :)"

Aww, so kind, Suz! : )


message 21: by Laysee (new)

Laysee I agree, Kevin. Writing wins! I’ve yet to read Hollinghurst. That he writes impeccable prose makes me want to read him sooner. Thanks, Kevin.


message 22: by Debbie (new)

Debbie Omg I thought you said “most authors out there would hate him PEEING over their shoulder” which had me repulsed, intrigued, and at attention. And then, thank Harold, I reread. Pshew!

Now that I’ve calmed down—I admire your ability to appreciate beautiful prose without a plot. I can’t do it. No plot, no pogo stick. But, anyway, wonderful review, as always!


Jennifer ~ TarHeelReader Wow, Kevin! Loved this review!


Kevin Ansbro Laysee wrote: "I agree, Kevin. Writing wins! I’ve yet to read Hollinghurst. That he writes impeccable prose makes me want to read him sooner. Thanks, Kevin."

Laysee, it's true that his majestic prose is beyond criticism. He'd be up there with my most favourite authors if only he would cut loose and leap onto the stage!


message 25: by Kevin (last edited Sep 25, 2018 05:05AM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Kevin Ansbro Debbie wrote: "Omg I thought you said “most authors out there would hate him PEEING over their shoulder..."

Oh, Debbie, you caused me to chuckle in the manner of Muttley, from Wacky Races!
If the truth be told, I wouldn't like Alan Hollinghurst to pee over my shoulder either! So it's a good job I gave him five stars. : )


Kevin Ansbro Jennifer ~ TarHeelReader wrote: "Wow, Kevin! Loved this review!"

Thanks, Jennifer. That's very kind of you! : )


message 27: by Paula (new)

Paula K Love good prose! Superb review, Kevin. A turtle though? 🐢


Kevin Ansbro Paula wrote: "Love good prose! Superb review, Kevin. A turtle though? 🐢"

Thanks, Paula! And I stand by the turtle comment! : )


Kevin Ansbro Kimber wrote: "Kevin, yet again you hit it out of the park with your review!
"...beached turtle." You do make me laugh. :-)"


Thanks, Kimber! It is odd that I should award five stars to a book I describe as "dragging itself along like a beached turtle", but there is method in my madness! : )


message 30: by Robin (new)

Robin Writing wins! I love it!

I felt similarly when I read William Gay's The Lost Country. The plot was really secondary to the writing. So delicious when it can overcome a weak storyline.

Fab review, Kevin!


Kevin Ansbro Robin wrote: "Writing wins! I love it!

I felt similarly when I read William Gay's The Lost Country. The plot was really secondary to the writing. So delicious when it can overcome a weak storyline..."


Thanks, Robin.
Any story with a weak storyline is dead in the water if the writing isn't strong enough to rescue it!


message 32: by Deb (new) - rated it 3 stars

Deb cambria I agree 100%


Kevin Ansbro Deb wrote: "I agree 100%"

Thanks, Deb. Looking forward to your review!


message 34: by C I N D L E (new)

C I N D L E No plot, no story is forgivable if the writing is as exceptional, lyrical as you say. I’m curious, is the plot nonexistent because this is a character study? (No spoilers, please. Thanks.)


Kevin Ansbro C I N D L E wrote: "No plot, no story is forgivable if the writing is as exceptional, lyrical as you say. I’m curious, is the plot nonexistent because this is a character study? (No spoilers, please. Thanks.)"

No, it's not a character study, Cindle. I just think that some writers are supremely gifted in their writing, but lack the imagination to add pizzazz to the story.


Pedro I read this one ages ago. I hated it. 😳😁


Kevin Ansbro Pedro wrote: "I read this one ages ago. I hated it. 😳😁"

I do understand, Pedro. The story is boring as hell. Just about anyone could have conjured up a better one. But Hollinghurst's writing skill is up there with the best, so I based my score on that. : )


Pedro I know what you mean about good writing, Kevin. But at the time I was too young and all I wanted was a good story. I still want to read ‘The Line of Beauty’ though.


message 39: by Fran (new)

Fran Kevin...A thought provoking review...a window into the way we review books. Thank you for your expertise!


Kevin Ansbro Fran wrote: "Kevin...A thought provoking review...a window into the way we review books. Thank you for your expertise!"

Thanks, Fran! it would be unjust of me, as an author, to skewer Hollinghurst's storytelling skill when his writing is better than that of 95% of writers out there! : )


Kevin Ansbro Nicola wrote: "I’m glad you appreciated the writing Kevin even if you weren’t exactly gripped by the plot! I enjoyed reading all your thoughts!😊"

Thanks, Nicola! Kind, as always. : )


Angela M is taking a break. Sometimes it all about the writing. I haven’t read this , but definitely enjoyed your review, Kevin.


message 43: by Kevin (last edited Aug 28, 2019 04:36AM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Kevin Ansbro Angela M wrote: "Sometimes it all about the writing. I haven’t read this , but definitely enjoyed your review, Kevin."

Apologies for being so late to your kind comment, Angela. Thank you!
The writing, herein, is transcendent, even though the story wasn't.


Beata My impressions that are left after reading this novel are connected with writing, just like yours, and it surprised me that a book with little actual plot, read so well ... 'lyrical beauty of flawless writing' - your words - was what captivated me .. Truly grand review, Kevin ...


Kevin Ansbro Beata wrote: "My impressions that are left after reading this novel are connected with writing, just like yours, and it surprised me that a book with little actual plot, read so well ... 'lyrical beauty of flawl..."

Thank you, Beata! A lovely thing to say! : )
Because there are so many badly-written books out there, I feel it's important to champion good writing when it bares its chest.


message 46: by Martha (new)

Martha Love you review, Kevin! Now, this book sounds similar to The Heart’s Invisible Furies.


Kevin Ansbro Martha wrote: "Love you review, Kevin! Now, this book sounds similar to The Heart’s Invisible Furies."

Thanks, Martha!!
As a huge fan of The Heart's Invisible Furies, I would say that this book is nowhere near as entertaining as Boyne's.
But I know that you're reading THIF for the second time and still having problems with it. : (


message 48: by Martha (new)

Martha Yes, I am. And, when I read the “back page” of this- I said to myself, “No can do another “homoerotica”. :)


Kevin Ansbro Martha wrote: "Yes, I am. And, when I read the “back page” of this- I said to myself, “No can do another “homoerotica”. :)"

At least you gave it your best shot, Martha!
I wouldn't have read a book twice if I didn't like it the first time. : )


Alison Kevin I got 3/4 of the way through and gave up. Agree, the writing is beautiful but the story itself - bores rigid. Love your review!


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