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The Stranger's Child
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bookshelves: classic-literature, coming-of-age, family-dynamics, literature-for-grown-ups, modern-romance, morality, quintessentially-english, sexuality
Sep 23, 2018
bookshelves: classic-literature, coming-of-age, family-dynamics, literature-for-grown-ups, modern-romance, morality, quintessentially-english, sexuality
Now I don't read Booker Prize-winning author Alan Hollinghurst for his storytelling. In truth, the lyrical beauty of his flawless writing almost negates the need for a story. So my five-star rating is solely for his penmanship (though he doesn't employ synonyms for the word "said". The repetition of "he said/she said" dialogue tags is hard to ignore).
Alas, the story, such as it is, drags itself along like a beached turtle.
This ambitious (and lengthy) novel is rather difficult to describe; an English upper-class/middle-class love triangle with a smattering of homoerotica thrown in – a Brideshead-meets-Atonement hybrid, but without a plot. I felt as if I was witnessing an evolution, rather than anything resembling a story.
So, in truth, it was tedious. The author, like Ian McEwan, is undeniably one of Britain's finest writers and, as is true of McEwan, it's his elegant prose that steals the show. Hollinghurst is an artist in command of his craft but the whole, unfortunately, was less than the sum of its parts and if I were to rate the actual story, it would only merit a measly two stars.
Still, Hollinghurst is a highly gifted writer. Most authors out there would hate to have him peering over their shoulders while they’re tapping at a keyboard, so who am I to award him anything less than five lustrous stars?
Nonexistent story ... two stars
Top-tier prose .... five stars
Writing wins!
Alas, the story, such as it is, drags itself along like a beached turtle.
This ambitious (and lengthy) novel is rather difficult to describe; an English upper-class/middle-class love triangle with a smattering of homoerotica thrown in – a Brideshead-meets-Atonement hybrid, but without a plot. I felt as if I was witnessing an evolution, rather than anything resembling a story.
So, in truth, it was tedious. The author, like Ian McEwan, is undeniably one of Britain's finest writers and, as is true of McEwan, it's his elegant prose that steals the show. Hollinghurst is an artist in command of his craft but the whole, unfortunately, was less than the sum of its parts and if I were to rate the actual story, it would only merit a measly two stars.
Still, Hollinghurst is a highly gifted writer. Most authors out there would hate to have him peering over their shoulders while they’re tapping at a keyboard, so who am I to award him anything less than five lustrous stars?
Nonexistent story ... two stars
Top-tier prose .... five stars
Writing wins!
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modern-romance
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morality
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Sep 23, 2018 08:28AM
Brilliant review Kevin! Brideshead meets Atonement? Hmm.. intriguing!!
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Susanne wrote: "Brilliant review Kevin! Brideshead meets Atonement? Hmm.. intriguing!!"
Thanks, Susanne! It's not that intriguing. This is only recommended for those who can read a novel purely for its writing while trying to overlook the fact that the story is almost non-existant.
Thanks, Susanne! It's not that intriguing. This is only recommended for those who can read a novel purely for its writing while trying to overlook the fact that the story is almost non-existant.
Fortunately, "tedious" is too strong for my experience of this book though I agree about the superb writing and its relative lack of plot. McEwan's Atonement is a good call; I hadn't really considered that. But he certainly shows his admiration of Brideshead. Thanks for your excellent review reminding me that I really should read another Hollinghurst. I guess it may be sooner than you!
Julie wrote: "Perhaps. . . but, erotica? Erotica always moves plot along."
Not in this instance, Julie. It's too erotica-lite for smut-seekers.
Not in this instance, Julie. It's too erotica-lite for smut-seekers.
Julie wrote: "Dang it! You know how much I like literary smut."
That's why I gave you fair warning, lest you got your hopes up, Julie! : )
That's why I gave you fair warning, lest you got your hopes up, Julie! : )
Cecily wrote: "Fortunately, "tedious" is too strong for my experience of this book though I agree about the superb writing and its relative lack of plot. McEwan's Atonement is a good call; I hadn't really conside..."
Thanks, Cecily. I liked The Line of Beauty far more, yet just noticed I only awarded it four stars. I was probably too generous with this one!
Thanks, Cecily. I liked The Line of Beauty far more, yet just noticed I only awarded it four stars. I was probably too generous with this one!
Hmmm...interesting that you found this tedious yet awarded it five stars. You are a man of mystery Kev!
Nat wrote: "Hmmm...interesting that you found this tedious yet awarded it five stars. You are a man of mystery Kev!"
I am verily an enigma wrapped up in a conundrum, Nat.
As a writer, I have to acknowledge the eminence of great writing, even if the storytelling leaves something to be desired!
I am verily an enigma wrapped up in a conundrum, Nat.
As a writer, I have to acknowledge the eminence of great writing, even if the storytelling leaves something to be desired!
Kevin, I loved your review, and you have piqued my interest in this author - but not this particular book!
Kevin wrote: "Nat wrote: "Hmmm...interesting that you found this tedious yet awarded it five stars. You are a man of mystery Kev!"
I am verily an enigma wrapped up in a conundrum, Nat.
As a writer, I have to ac..."
That you are Kev, fair call. Great writing should indeed be acknowledged.
I am verily an enigma wrapped up in a conundrum, Nat.
As a writer, I have to ac..."
That you are Kev, fair call. Great writing should indeed be acknowledged.
Cheri wrote: "Kevin, I loved your review, and you have piqued my interest in this author - but not this particular book!"
Thanks, Cheri.
Hollinghurst has ninja writing skills. Skills that would put most modern authors to shame. He doesn't, however, have the storytelling virtuosity of the likes of Charles Dickens or Victor Hugo.
Thanks, Cheri.
Hollinghurst has ninja writing skills. Skills that would put most modern authors to shame. He doesn't, however, have the storytelling virtuosity of the likes of Charles Dickens or Victor Hugo.
Nat wrote: "That you are Kev, fair call. Great writing should indeed be acknowledged..."
Thanks, Nat! : )
Thanks, Nat! : )
Awesome review, Kevin! I'm glad to see you place writing above plot. My aim is to read both, but if one has to fail, it's probably better it be story rather than quality of writing. :)
Jaline wrote: "Awesome review, Kevin! I'm glad to see you place writing above plot. My aim is to read both, but if one has to fail, it's probably better it be story rather than quality of writing. :)"
I agree! I can forgive a weak plot, but not poor writing.
Thanks, Jaline! : )
I agree! I can forgive a weak plot, but not poor writing.
Thanks, Jaline! : )
I agree, Kevin. Writing wins! I’ve yet to read Hollinghurst. That he writes impeccable prose makes me want to read him sooner. Thanks, Kevin.
Omg I thought you said “most authors out there would hate him PEEING over their shoulder” which had me repulsed, intrigued, and at attention. And then, thank Harold, I reread. Pshew!
Now that I’ve calmed down—I admire your ability to appreciate beautiful prose without a plot. I can’t do it. No plot, no pogo stick. But, anyway, wonderful review, as always!
Now that I’ve calmed down—I admire your ability to appreciate beautiful prose without a plot. I can’t do it. No plot, no pogo stick. But, anyway, wonderful review, as always!
Laysee wrote: "I agree, Kevin. Writing wins! I’ve yet to read Hollinghurst. That he writes impeccable prose makes me want to read him sooner. Thanks, Kevin."
Laysee, it's true that his majestic prose is beyond criticism. He'd be up there with my most favourite authors if only he would cut loose and leap onto the stage!
Laysee, it's true that his majestic prose is beyond criticism. He'd be up there with my most favourite authors if only he would cut loose and leap onto the stage!
Debbie wrote: "Omg I thought you said “most authors out there would hate him PEEING over their shoulder..."
Oh, Debbie, you caused me to chuckle in the manner of Muttley, from Wacky Races!
If the truth be told, I wouldn't like Alan Hollinghurst to pee over my shoulder either! So it's a good job I gave him five stars. : )
Oh, Debbie, you caused me to chuckle in the manner of Muttley, from Wacky Races!
If the truth be told, I wouldn't like Alan Hollinghurst to pee over my shoulder either! So it's a good job I gave him five stars. : )
Jennifer ~ TarHeelReader wrote: "Wow, Kevin! Loved this review!"
Thanks, Jennifer. That's very kind of you! : )
Thanks, Jennifer. That's very kind of you! : )
Paula wrote: "Love good prose! Superb review, Kevin. A turtle though? 🐢"
Thanks, Paula! And I stand by the turtle comment! : )
Thanks, Paula! And I stand by the turtle comment! : )
Kimber wrote: "Kevin, yet again you hit it out of the park with your review!
"...beached turtle." You do make me laugh. :-)"
Thanks, Kimber! It is odd that I should award five stars to a book I describe as "dragging itself along like a beached turtle", but there is method in my madness! : )
"...beached turtle." You do make me laugh. :-)"
Thanks, Kimber! It is odd that I should award five stars to a book I describe as "dragging itself along like a beached turtle", but there is method in my madness! : )
Writing wins! I love it!
I felt similarly when I read William Gay's The Lost Country. The plot was really secondary to the writing. So delicious when it can overcome a weak storyline.
Fab review, Kevin!
I felt similarly when I read William Gay's The Lost Country. The plot was really secondary to the writing. So delicious when it can overcome a weak storyline.
Fab review, Kevin!
Robin wrote: "Writing wins! I love it!
I felt similarly when I read William Gay's The Lost Country. The plot was really secondary to the writing. So delicious when it can overcome a weak storyline..."
Thanks, Robin.
Any story with a weak storyline is dead in the water if the writing isn't strong enough to rescue it!
I felt similarly when I read William Gay's The Lost Country. The plot was really secondary to the writing. So delicious when it can overcome a weak storyline..."
Thanks, Robin.
Any story with a weak storyline is dead in the water if the writing isn't strong enough to rescue it!
No plot, no story is forgivable if the writing is as exceptional, lyrical as you say. I’m curious, is the plot nonexistent because this is a character study? (No spoilers, please. Thanks.)
C I N D L E wrote: "No plot, no story is forgivable if the writing is as exceptional, lyrical as you say. I’m curious, is the plot nonexistent because this is a character study? (No spoilers, please. Thanks.)"
No, it's not a character study, Cindle. I just think that some writers are supremely gifted in their writing, but lack the imagination to add pizzazz to the story.
No, it's not a character study, Cindle. I just think that some writers are supremely gifted in their writing, but lack the imagination to add pizzazz to the story.
Pedro wrote: "I read this one ages ago. I hated it. 😳😁"
I do understand, Pedro. The story is boring as hell. Just about anyone could have conjured up a better one. But Hollinghurst's writing skill is up there with the best, so I based my score on that. : )
I do understand, Pedro. The story is boring as hell. Just about anyone could have conjured up a better one. But Hollinghurst's writing skill is up there with the best, so I based my score on that. : )
I know what you mean about good writing, Kevin. But at the time I was too young and all I wanted was a good story. I still want to read ‘The Line of Beauty’ though.
Kevin...A thought provoking review...a window into the way we review books. Thank you for your expertise!
Fran wrote: "Kevin...A thought provoking review...a window into the way we review books. Thank you for your expertise!"
Thanks, Fran! it would be unjust of me, as an author, to skewer Hollinghurst's storytelling skill when his writing is better than that of 95% of writers out there! : )
Thanks, Fran! it would be unjust of me, as an author, to skewer Hollinghurst's storytelling skill when his writing is better than that of 95% of writers out there! : )
Nicola wrote: "I’m glad you appreciated the writing Kevin even if you weren’t exactly gripped by the plot! I enjoyed reading all your thoughts!😊"
Thanks, Nicola! Kind, as always. : )
Thanks, Nicola! Kind, as always. : )
Sometimes it all about the writing. I haven’t read this , but definitely enjoyed your review, Kevin.
Angela M wrote: "Sometimes it all about the writing. I haven’t read this , but definitely enjoyed your review, Kevin."
Apologies for being so late to your kind comment, Angela. Thank you!
The writing, herein, is transcendent, even though the story wasn't.
Apologies for being so late to your kind comment, Angela. Thank you!
The writing, herein, is transcendent, even though the story wasn't.
My impressions that are left after reading this novel are connected with writing, just like yours, and it surprised me that a book with little actual plot, read so well ... 'lyrical beauty of flawless writing' - your words - was what captivated me .. Truly grand review, Kevin ...
Beata wrote: "My impressions that are left after reading this novel are connected with writing, just like yours, and it surprised me that a book with little actual plot, read so well ... 'lyrical beauty of flawl..."
Thank you, Beata! A lovely thing to say! : )
Because there are so many badly-written books out there, I feel it's important to champion good writing when it bares its chest.
Thank you, Beata! A lovely thing to say! : )
Because there are so many badly-written books out there, I feel it's important to champion good writing when it bares its chest.
Martha wrote: "Love you review, Kevin! Now, this book sounds similar to The Heart’s Invisible Furies."
Thanks, Martha!!
As a huge fan of The Heart's Invisible Furies, I would say that this book is nowhere near as entertaining as Boyne's.
But I know that you're reading THIF for the second time and still having problems with it. : (
Thanks, Martha!!
As a huge fan of The Heart's Invisible Furies, I would say that this book is nowhere near as entertaining as Boyne's.
But I know that you're reading THIF for the second time and still having problems with it. : (
Yes, I am. And, when I read the “back page” of this- I said to myself, “No can do another “homoerotica”. :)
Martha wrote: "Yes, I am. And, when I read the “back page” of this- I said to myself, “No can do another “homoerotica”. :)"
At least you gave it your best shot, Martha!
I wouldn't have read a book twice if I didn't like it the first time. : )
At least you gave it your best shot, Martha!
I wouldn't have read a book twice if I didn't like it the first time. : )