~✡~Dαni(ela) ♥ ♂♂ love & semi-colons~✡~'s Reviews > Coil Me Up

My apologies to the authors because I appreciate how much effort goes into these stories, but this was a near DNF for me.

There were too many ideas here: mythology, family strife reminiscent of Romeo and Juliet, ancient gods, shifters, homophobia, soul bonding, insta love, reincarnation, business rivalry, shady business dealings, and a mystery to boot. I may be forgetting something.

None of the ideas was well developed; the world building was nonexistent, and the characters flat.

The story was convoluted and boring, with a staccato narrative that felt simplistic.

I can't recommend this one.