Y'ALL NEED JESUS BUT JESUS AIN'T GONNA HAVE SHIT TO DO WITH Y'ALLS NASTY PERVERTED ASSESY'ALL NEED JESUS BUT JESUS AIN'T GONNA HAVE SHIT TO DO WITH Y'ALLS NASTY PERVERTED ASSES...more
Sub-par writing and zero style only make the arguments in this book worse. Even Hitler could write with charisma. This was a chore to get through and Sub-par writing and zero style only make the arguments in this book worse. Even Hitler could write with charisma. This was a chore to get through and I only managed to finish because halfway through I realized I was reading a book written by two conflicting personalities of the same person. That's kinda interesting, but the author never took that plot anywhere. Instead, the reader is blasted from both sides by "God made women by mistake and really messed up when he gave them brains" and "submission and subservience is exactly what God created women for, you uppity sluts" It's a tennis match and your brain is the ball. If this sort of philosophy is your bag, that's cool. You do your thing, baby. But this garbage book is not the way to draw new members into your freaky Women Suck cult....more
Ew. I feel like this should be called "Raping Angel" instead. No amount of creative writing is going to get me to like this dude.Ew. I feel like this should be called "Raping Angel" instead. No amount of creative writing is going to get me to like this dude....more
Quite possibly the most disturbing sex scene I've ever read in my life. That might be the worst thing I've ever read outside of a straight up horror sQuite possibly the most disturbing sex scene I've ever read in my life. That might be the worst thing I've ever read outside of a straight up horror story.
Right up front there's a truly nauseating soulmate "mating urge" where the H calls the h disgustingly ugly and grotesque as they fuck. Like, they haaate each other and are vocal about it. Oh, and then he tries to rip her pelvis open with his claws to free his ginormous shifter cock because he doesn't want to cum in this horrendous excuse of a cunt... I AM NOT KIDDING!!
Then there is also this weird "confessions of a princess" thing at the beginning of each chapter that basically gives away the plot points of the whole chapter. I dunno why the author did that, but it was stupid.
The writing was bad. All of this is stupid and bad. Don't read it. I would have copy + pasted the atrocious sex scene right here for you, so you would know how awful it truly is, but I literally finished the scene, closed the app, and deleted the file. I refuse to bring that filth out of my recycling bin. Just take my word for it on this one....more
She flees an abusive relationship by moving into an isolated cabin without any preparation and gets molested by the hero on her first night there. I lShe flees an abusive relationship by moving into an isolated cabin without any preparation and gets molested by the hero on her first night there. I like neither character right now, though for vastly different reasons....more
The hero rapes the heroine. Straight up rapes her. Then lets her be violently tortured for hours by a sadistic murderer. And I'm supposed to like thisThe hero rapes the heroine. Straight up rapes her. Then lets her be violently tortured for hours by a sadistic murderer. And I'm supposed to like this guy? I'm flabbergasted. If I had a physical copy of this book, I would burn it....more
He drugs and kidnaps her. Then he jacks off in his pants while watching her dance. Then he dry humps her sleeping body and cums in his pants again. AnHe drugs and kidnaps her. Then he jacks off in his pants while watching her dance. Then he dry humps her sleeping body and cums in his pants again. And then he's like "I'll eventually tell her I kidnapped her, but only after I've bred her." Is this supposed to be sexy? IT IS NOT....more
I legit did not read far enough to get into spoiler territory. You know from the blurb that Fee's past has come back to haunt her and I made it two chI legit did not read far enough to get into spoiler territory. You know from the blurb that Fee's past has come back to haunt her and I made it two chapters in, so... no spoiler tags.
Fee was stalked and raped - it says so five times in two chapters. This is one of those "sexual-assault-changed-everything-about-the-way-I-live-my-life" chicks. Which is FINE. You wanna go all Sidney Prescott in Scream 3, that's cool.
Fee moved to a Bumfuck Nowhere little town to hide, she's changed her number repeatedly, she's gone the full nine yards - I'm willing to bet she has an unreasonable number of deadbolts on her front door. So then...
She sighed. Time to change her number again. Eventually Stall would give up. He’d find a new victim; hopefully, one who could make a case against him and have it stick.
Oh my god, what?
She knows Crazy Rapist is stalking her again, so she's like "I'll just change my number and he'll get tired of chasing me. Find somebody else to stalk and rape." Because that's not the stupidest thing ever or anything, right? "As long as it's not me being raped, no big!" This is nothing more than an inconvenience for her!
"No need to tell my Special Ops brother and his SSI operative BFF that could probably help me with this, nooope!"
WHOA WTF?! Literally 10 seconds after meeting her patient, she's making out with him? And he came to see her for an emergency that only required tapinWHOA WTF?! Literally 10 seconds after meeting her patient, she's making out with him? And he came to see her for an emergency that only required taping his ankle? "Despite what you might think, I'm not a whore." Nah, you're just the least professional professional I've ever read and kind of a slut.
What is this trash and how did it end up on my Kindle?! My eyebrows actually hurt from the face I made the entire time I read all of... chapter one. I couldn't even get past chapter one. Blech!...more
Ugh. This one left a bad taste in my mouth. "I know I degraded and humiliated you, made you get on your knees and beg, turned everyone against you, anUgh. This one left a bad taste in my mouth. "I know I degraded and humiliated you, made you get on your knees and beg, turned everyone against you, and kicked you out in the cold rain... but here's a really expensive necklace, so everything's okay now!" BARF....more