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A New Quest Begins in the sequel to DragonSpell


A dragonkeeper of Paladin, Kale is summoned from the Hall to The Bogs by the Wizard Fenworth to serve as his apprentice and tend his newly hatched meech dragon, Regidor. But Kale isn't going alone. The Hall is sending a student to monitor her performance and report back to the scholars. Worst of all, it's Bardon- an older boy Kale finds irritating, but who at least can hold his own in a sword fight.

New Friendships Are Forged

Meanwhile, the Wizard Risto has seized another meech dragon, bringing him dangerously close to gaining the power he seeks. So with only a motley band of companions, Kale sets out on a desperate quest to rescue the second meech, to free those dragons already enslaved, and to thwart Risto's devious plans. It's up to Kale to lead the search and to embrace the role that's rightfully hers. But will her efforts be enough to save the land of Amara from the dark future that awaits at Risto's hands?

355 pages, Paperback

First published June 7, 2005

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Donita K. Paul

36 books1,046 followers
I am an author of Christian Fantasy. My first 7 books were Christian Romance, but I came over to the Dark Side when I heard there were cookies.

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October 16, 2022
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The second in Ms. Paul's Dragon allegory series, this has everything that made the first one in the series great.  Anyone who enjoyed DragonSpell should definitely read this one.  The story, the writing, the fantastical world...what's not to like?



Score: 4/5
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87 reviews
November 25, 2015
This is by far my favorite book of the series. Why? Let me indulge you in the greatness of this book.

DRAGONS!



There are little dragons called minor dragons which remind me of the Terrible Terrors from How to Train Your Dragon. But better. I mean, different colors mean different abilities! Purple = singing. Green = healing. Orange = laughter. And so on. They're adorable! I want some...

GOOD WIZARDS!



All I can say is, I think Mr. Gandalf in this gif is under the spell of TobyMac. Just saying. Anyway, when I say wizards, I mean specifically Wizard Fenworth who is my dream grandpa. He is adorable! And, he turns into a tree if he stays still for too long, so how is that not cool??? Now, I know when wizards get brought up, the automatic thought is, "Harry Potter." I assure you, these wizards are nothing like the Harry Potter wizards. I would classify these awesomely good wizards under the Lord of the Rings wizard category. :)

DEVIOUSLY DARK AND EVIL WIZARDS!



Seriously, these evil wizards are bad to the core. Mrs. Paul can write some really awesome villains.

And most importantly...

A REALLY HANDSOME KNIGHT WITH BLUE EYES AND BLACK HAIR AND ABS AND MUSCLES AND SECRETS WITH A SLIGHTLY STUCK UP YET LOVEABLE ATTITUDE.



Yes. It is love. I ship me and Bardon *cough* I mean Kale and Bardon. Bardon's really secretive nature is really attractive. I absolutely adore his character development. And...yes he's perfection.



Case closed.

Please do yourself a favor and pick up this book. It is the second book in the DragonKeeper series, so if you have not read the first book, DragonSpell, I highly recommend reading that one as well. You will not be disappointed. These characters will live with you forever and ever in your heart. Especially Bardon... :)
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Author 19 books321 followers
April 7, 2024
Updated RTC to Come



DragonQuest is the delightful follow-up to DragonSpell. I thoroughly enjoyed every part of this book, from the faith scenes to the action and battles and everything between. My favorite characters are--and this will come of no surprise if you've read my Dragons of Chiril review--Wizard Fen, Librettowit (spelling is likely incorrect), and Wizard Cam. Their humor, clashing personalities, and wisdom really add depth to this tale. The antagonists are well-crafted as well. I know some readers were confused by their motives and intentions, but I didn't have that issue.

DragonQuest is a delightful story for readers of every age. But I do recommend you read DragonSpell first.
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Author 8 books142 followers
January 23, 2024
Reread January 2024: I love these books so much, and this remains one of my favorites in the series. I think I enjoy it a little more every time I read it.
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Reread October 2019:

This series is still holding up well! I'm pretty sure either this or DragonKnight was my favorite in the series — I can definitely tell why this one would've been. We have the beginnings of Kale and Bardon, and I think I like them even more as a couple than I did before? As a note on Bardon — I definitely appreciate his character much more than I used to. His backstory has all the ingredients necessary for a Broody Hero, but instead, Bardon's just a person. He doesn't brood; he worries. He's a perfectionist driven by desire for the approval of his mentors (something I can very much relate to) and who, when confronted with new information about himself and his abilities, is understandably shocked and concerned, but isn't stupid about it. And, of course, I love Kale and relate to her a great deal as well, and, honestly? She's the sort of female character we need more of. So, yeah. I remember why I loved these books so much, and I still love them now. Do I recognize a few issues with writing style and technical quality now as well? Yes, but I can overlook those in favor of an exciting plot, engaging characters, and excellent themes.
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Author 11 books123 followers
June 30, 2011
I’ll start off by saying I enjoyed DragonQuest quite a bit more than DragonSpell, the first book. I could see things much more clearly in this book and felt a much stronger bond to the old characters as well as the new.

I think my favorite thing about this book were the new characters. They really added a lot. Toopka, a little doneel girl, was absolutely adorable and made me laugh many times. The meech dragon, Regidor, was fascinating and a very imaginative creature I thoroughly enjoyed. But my most favorite addition was Bardon. He’s wonderfully flawed. I just love characters with secrets and inner struggle, and I can’t wait to read on with his story. I also loved following many of the old characters, particularly Dar and the minor dragons (loved the new additions to them as well). I’m looking forward to seeing more of Kale’s growth. I wasn’t so sure about her in book one, but she is growing on me. :)

DragonQuest has a lot of action and interesting plot twists, and is a great sequel to the first book. A perfect read for any lover of Christian fantasy such as myself. I am now eagerly reading on in DragonKnight, book 3, which has already captured my interest.
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223 reviews
April 9, 2020
What a brilliant addition to the series!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this second book! It had everything I loved about the first one: characters, friendships, adventures, dragons, but also so much more!
I absolutely loved stepping back into the world of Amara and learning more about the species, history and culture. It's a place I'd love to visit, and that's how you it's been brilliantly crafted!
I loved getting to know the new leech dragon Regidor. He was so much fun and I liked his camaraderie with Kale. One of my favourite parts of this book was Bardon! I loved how Kale and Bardon's relationship progressed from mistrust to friendship. The minor dragons were a delight to read about and I can't wait for the rest to hatch.
This novel was kind of like the climax to the first novel so I loved it.
Really looking forward to reading the rest in the series!
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207 reviews10 followers
August 9, 2016
I liked this book even better than the first in the series! The story here picks up just a couple weeks after the events of the previous book, DragonSpell (Dragon Keepers Chronicles, Book 1). Since we already know the characters, the story here is able to take right off without needing to take time to introduce the reader to everything and everyone.

Most of the same characters from DragonSpell are back, with the addition of several new ones as well. I especially enjoyed the addition of Toopka, as she adds a bit of fun and mischief, and also Bardon, who adds a nice layer of mystery/intrigue. These two really added alot of life to the pages, I'm hoping they will be present through-out the rest of the series!

As I said in my review for DragonSpell, this series is not "kids-only". People of many ages can enjoy it, there is something for just about everyone here! The allegory is still present as it was in the previous book, I really like this angle as it gives you a different way to look at certain things. And of course, there's lots of adventure, that seems to be a staple for this series! And don't forget the dragons!

I'll soon be starting the next book in the series, DragonKnight (Dragon Keepers Chronicles, Book 3), and I suspect that more adventure awaits!
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Author 8 books142 followers
December 20, 2018
This series is still holding up well! I'm pretty sure either this or DragonKnight was my favorite in the series — I can definitely tell why this one would've been. We have the beginnings of Kale and Bardon, and I think I like them even more as a couple than I did before? As a note on Bardon — I definitely appreciate his character much more than I used to. His backstory has all the ingredients necessary for a Broody Hero, but instead, Bardon's just a person. He doesn't brood; he worries. He's a perfectionist driven by desire for the approval of his mentors (something I can very much relate to) and who, when confronted with new information about himself and his abilities, is understandably shocked and concerned, but isn't stupid about it. And, of course, I love Kale and relate to her a great deal as well, and, honestly? She's the sort of female character we need more of. So, yeah. I remember why I loved these books so much, and I still love them now. Do I recognize a few issues with writing style and technical quality now as well? Yes, but I can overlook those in favor of an exciting plot, engaging characters, and excellent themes.
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Author 1 book69 followers
November 17, 2021
I couldn't seem to put this book down every time I picked it up, I looked around for chances to read it during the day, etc. It's so good to have a book like that to read.
This book continues the adventures of Kale and her friends. Of course, much of it is centered on the dragons. New, fun characters are introduced!
Let me make this short and put it this way: if you're think about reading this series, and you like dragons, fantasy, and C. S. Lewis Chronicles of Narnia type stuff, just do it already.
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303 reviews
May 16, 2012
I haven't read too much fantasy. But I have family members who really enjoy that genre. So I bought this book on CD, read by Ellen Grafton. She does a good job. Though her voice sounds like a young girl, she is talented and can change it to fit the character she is speaking for. The story, of course, is good-vs-evil. The author invented some quite disgusting creatures to work for the evil wizard. The young heroine must find her way, and must help the quest. I started to look forward to finding out what would happen next time I got in the car to listen. I also liked the positive references to what would be considered noble character, and doing the right thing. So much of our world today tells us to take the easy road - just to do what we want to do or what makes us feel good. This book speaks of consequences. The characters are interesting and likeable. The descriptions of the dragons makes me wish I could see one. Kale's friends are quite a collection of characters. I particularly liked the old wizard who sometimes turns into a tree. I want to be like him when I grow old. Ha Ha There is a lot going on in this story. I would recommend this tale of the land of Amara to anyone.
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167 reviews
November 28, 2008
A dragonkeeper of Paladin, Kale is summoned from the Hall to The Bogs by the Wizard Fenworth to serve as his apprentice and tend his newly hatched meech dragon, Regidor.

But Kale isn’t going alone. The Hall is sending a student to monitor her performance and report back to the scholars. Worst of all, it’s Bardon–an older boy Kale finds irritating, but who at least can hold his own in a sword fight.

Meanwhile, the Wizard Risto has seized another meech dragon, bringing him dangerously close to gaining the power he seeks. So with only a motley band of companions, Kale sets out on a desperate quest to rescue the second meech, to free those dragons already enslaved, and to thwart Risto’s devious plans.

It’s up to Kale to lead the search and to embrace the role that’s rightfully hers. But will her efforts be enough to save the land of Amara from the dark future that awaits at Risto’s hands?
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1,660 reviews76 followers
February 21, 2010
A New Quest Begins

A dragonkeeper of Paladin, Kale is summoned from the Hall to The Bogs by the Wizard Fenworth to serve as his apprentice and tend his newly hatched meech dragon, Regidor. But Kale isn’t going alone. The Hall is sending a student to monitor her performance and report back to the scholars. Worst of all, it’s Bardon–an older boy Kale finds irritating, but who at least can hold his own in a sword fight.

New Friendships Are Forged

Meanwhile, the Wizard Risto has seized another meech dragon, bringing him dangerously close to gaining the power he seeks. So with only a motley band of companions, Kale sets out on a desperate quest to rescue the second meech, to free those dragons already enslaved, and to thwart Risto’s devious plans. It’s up to Kale to lead the search and to embrace the role that’s rightfully hers. But will her efforts be enough to save the land of Amara from the dark future that awaits at Risto’s hands?
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270 reviews36 followers
August 20, 2024
I first read this series as a Freshman in high school after a friend’s recommendation. At the time, I insisted that I didn’t like reading fantasy. With the exception of the Disney Fairies series and the Chronicles of Narnia, of course. I remember changing my opinion after this series. I became a lover of dragons. But really, I already was due to the “How to Train Your Dragon” movie. My only complaint about these books is that they move slowly, despite every chapter being filled with a battle or narrow escape. It takes me a while to get through them. I love the births of the minor dragons and seeing what type is dragon Kale will welcome to her entourage next. I love Fenworth’s quips and quirks. Dar is probably my favorite character but Toopka was a fun addition. I’m so glad that Kale has a family and that she isn’t orphaned as she grew up believing. I know I’ve read this series once but I can’t remember much of it so I’m invested in the chemistry between Kale & Bardon like it’s the first time. On to the next!
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38 reviews1 follower
November 13, 2023
Bro, this book is SO good! And can I just say, Bardon has become one of my favorite characters. I wasn't expecting him to be so funny and witty. I really enjoyed how Donita didn't use all of the same characters that she did in the first, and used new main characters to make the story exciting and fresh. I really enjoyed this book, and am looking forward to the rest of the series!
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106 reviews27 followers
January 8, 2012
This is probably as far as I'm going to get with the DragonKeeper Chronicles. If after two books I find that I can't care any less what happens to the characters, it's going to be a waste of my time to continue with the series.

The good stuff : I like very much how religion and magic can exist side-by-side in this series. The wizard Fenworth for instance, corrects Kale when she called him a great & powerful wizard. He says there is no worth in being that. He is a devoted & trustworthy servant [to God], as Kale would be one day.

The not-so-good stuff: This is a minor complaint, but I don't like the names. O'rant (a race of people) , Wulder [God] , Pretender [Devil] .... Pretender, seriously? Can't there be a better name? I get that he pretends to be God, but still =_=

Major complaint: the very anti-climax showdowns. The books' endings [for DragonSpell & DragonQuest] feel glossed over. The good wizard faces the bad wizard. The good wizard casts ONE spell. The bad wizard dies. The end. This is LITERALLY how it happened in the book. Lacks excitement.

Ah yes, I must point out that in this book we are TOLD things instead of being SHOWN them. I understand that Kale isn't actively involved in certain very important events but to be told, in dissipated manner, how the last batch of good dragons who left to join the bad side was only pretending! and they're brought back many many deluded dragons! yay! The twist that was supposed to be exciting, I found boring. And that's sad.

Conclusion:
There are certain parts of the books that I really like. A quote here, a quote there - but they are kinda few and far between. Like gems in a haystack. I'm bored with this series; I want to read something else now.
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221 reviews
June 23, 2015
This is book 2 in the series and it was a very good sequel!

Though, same as book 1, there are just way too may characters to follow and sometimes the action happens so fast that you barely notice it happened at all. For instance, some characters are walking along and suddenly they're in the middle of a fight (quite a few of these short battles in this one) and then suddenly it's over and someone is missing. It goes by so fast that you barely have time to register what is happening and don't even realize someone is missing til they start talking about going after them.

But all that aside, the story is very well written, very imaginative and the author does a very good job of weaving Christian truths into the story. Plus, it's very entertaining!

Also, I am having trouble imagining what some of these characters look like. If anyone knows where I might find some fan art or something that can help me out, I'd love to know! :)

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Author 5 books35 followers
July 20, 2019
DragonQuest is the second book in Donita K. Paul’s DragonKeeper Chronicles. It follows Kale on another adventure with her old friends and a few new ones.
DragonSpell was a good introduction; this one takes the story to a whole new level. The action starts immediately, and an air of mystery permeates the whole book. And the new characters are excellent additions. Toopka, the adorable doneel, will steal your heart as easily as she steals pickles, and Bardon will leave you both irritated and bemused. Kale has grown as a character, but she remains the reluctant heroine from the first book. This is definitely a great installment in the series.
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103 reviews26 followers
December 5, 2014
DragonQuest is a great book. The main reason for this is: BARDON. He's awesome. And really cool. Bardon. <3 This was a very enjoyable book and I found Kale a much better, more likeable character than in the first book. :)

I find it a little creepy that I only read it like four months ago and I can only remember like eight scenes...Which for such a large book is really weird.
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586 reviews4 followers
November 8, 2013
Lot's of cute ideas.
Lot's of cute ideas strung together in a sequence.
Unfortunately, just stringing ideas together, no matter how cute, doesn't automatically create an engaging plot. This story could have used a little more scaffolding.
1,339 reviews22 followers
November 2, 2020
My name is Toopka, and I'm thankful that Kale has agreed to be my guardian. It's exciting to leave my life on the streets to go on a real adventure. Kale is the Dragon Keeper, and she's become the Wizard Fenworth's "princess", or is it apprentice? We've traveled to The Bog, so Kale can tame Regidor, the new meech dragon. We narrowly escaped an attack by giant spiders, and Fenworth wants us to go on a quest to understand the evil Wizard Risto's plans. We've been joined by two of Paladin's other followers, and they say we need to rescue one of Risto's prisoners first. Can it really be Kale's mother? Although I've loved being part of Kale's quest, none of us imagined we'd find ourselves in the middle of an all-out war. And how can our little force stand up to an army of dragons?

You can probably read this book without reading book one, but you'll miss the back stories. The meech dragon was different from dragons found in other books. Regidor was five weeks old with a tail and scaly skin, but he walked, talked, and dressed like a regular character. He provided unexpected surprises as the book moved along, and the conflict focused on finding a second meech dragon. Religion was at the core of the book, as the characters put their trust in Wulder, their god. Kale often doubted her own abilities and worth, but she was reminded that Wulder had put his faith in her. Her misgivings conflicted with Wulder's judgement and plan. Kale's interactions with Bardon were the most entertaining, as they hadn't gotten along well back at The Hall. He was not accepted into knight training, so he was more bitter from the start. However, he began to display new abilities and developed a close connection to Kale. Kale didn't understand it either and felt uncomfortable. This led to awkward and funny situations. Toopka was another wonderful character, as her enthusiasm to help created mixed emotions from Kale. Overall, some readers find the religious focus of the plot hard to accept, but I haven't found it to be a problem. The adventure includes some fighting and killing, but it's not overly described. There's no goriness. I recommend you give the book a shot.
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Author 4 books10 followers
November 19, 2023
"Dragonquest" makes good use of the world, characters, and momentum of "Dragonspell," improving upon many things and running with the storyline. New and creative enemies, locations, and allies expand the already impressive world, giving it depth and making it feel alive. Conversely, individual characters suffer many of the same problems as before. Most fit neatly into fantasy race and gender stereotypes with only the main characters breaking the mold. Paladin, one of the most important yet rarely seen characters, is fleshed out nicely, but this introduces inconsistencies in the book’s allegory. Is he a god-man (similar to Jesus in our world) or simply a man? I’m not sure the book knows the answer to this question. The writing style and mechanics of the novel are once again nearly flawless. The plot is much tighter and focused than the first which improves pacing and quality of the story as a whole. Largely consistent and logical across its length, there is one glaring contradiction. Kale faces a dilemma which I found to be incredibly obvious, even before all the information had been presented (this is super cryptic to avoid spoilers). The solution is played as a major twist, but because it is so obvious, the reveal falls flat. Critiques aside, one thing Ms. Paul did very well was the relationship between Kale and Bardon. It is obvious from the first page they share that they will be love interests, but though the conclusion is all but guaranteed, the situation which brought them together and their gradual transition from irritation and dislike to respect and friendship is one of the best I’ve seen in writing in quite some time. In conclusion, "Dragonquest" is an interesting tale with a creative world, exciting plot, and interesting character arcs and is worth reading for children and adults alike.
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55 reviews1 follower
January 22, 2021
DragonQuest truly is a satisfying, humorous, and adventurous sequel to DragonSpell. I greatly enjoyed every chapter and was eager to start the third book, DragonKnight. However, my review of this book will be brief for it simply built upon the positive attributes given to it in my previous review. It was not better or worse than DragonSpell, and I was very pleased with that.

The existing characters were as equally as enjoyable as they were in the first book and some newer characters were also enjoyable. Though this book is also written from Kale's perspective, her intricate perception of those around her help flesh out the characters, bringing the reader a better understanding and enjoyment of each one. However, I found Kale to be altered in some ways. She seemed grumpier much of the book, but in no way was she unpleasant or annoying...just grumpier. I can't say this was due to a poor character arc, for it remained true to her character.

The storyline, however, I found to fail a bit. Though the adventure and anticipation one receives from reading this book is thrilling, the most climactic part takes place in the second to last chapter. The conclusion of the book happens very fast. I didn't like it very much and am hoping that the last two books have a better climax than the first two.

Triggers: Scary imagery of monster, violence in association with the said monsters, and magic. There is less "evil magic" described in this book than in the last book. Similarly, it contains an equal balance of "good magic".

Overall, DragonQuest is a great sequel for all fantasy-loving ages! The world, characters, Biblical allegory, and story are all enthralling!
10 reviews1 follower
April 4, 2018
The book “DragonQuest” written by Donita K. Paul was about a girl named Kale who is on yet another quest. And again, she is looking for another meech, but this time the egg hatched. Kale must find this meech egg with all her friends, and so called “mother”?? Kale never even knew that her mother was alive until now, and now she has two? Kale is going through so much trying to figure out which mother is her REAL mother, she almost can’t deal with taking care of a random child, Toopka, and five minor dragons. Kale’s travels have also lead her to her old home when she was a slave. She can’t wait to show off her knowledge that she has gained and share it with everyone. Will Kale be able to juggle everything she’s going through, or will she crack under the pressure?
I think that “DragonQuest” was a terrific book!! Usually, sequels aren’t that great, but this one was. It still had a complex story-line, large words, and the characters stayed the same. What I did not like was the ending. It felt a little abrupt and didn’t give any hint to the next book. It also wasn’t talking about the main character, it was talking about a side character. That’s my only complaint. Otherwise, it was amazing!!!
I recommend this book to kids ten and up. I also would recommend it to girls who love fantasy, adventure, and believing that they can do amazing things.
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301 reviews2 followers
October 22, 2019
Like most sequels, a few things moved fast, considering I hadn't read the first book. The story was more about relations than magic or battles. I quite enjoyed it. The ending really left my spirits on a high note.

Throughout the book, characters regularly refer to Wulder, a being matching nicely to our loving and wise Heavenly Father. His biggest concern is with their growth and happiness. They need His help, but most times feel like they are muddling through on their own. It's the same with us and our lives, though, isn't it? The characters' faith in him and his eventual blessings is refreshing. For instance, while discussing being afraid in the upcoming great battle, Kale's cheerful and very-spiritual friend comforts her with, "Don't worry. Wulder has given you what you need for this encounter, and He's given you a place to go if you don't live through it." (Chapter 49, page 293)

One aspect that was difficult for me is that Paul includes many characters. She often refers to them by their race ("the ropma" or "the doneel's solid little body" or "his o'rant friend") and there are more than a dozen races. Sometimes I felt like I was reading a Russian novel. But I kept track of them (almost) all the time.
139 reviews5 followers
December 10, 2022
In the world created by Donita K. Paul, seven high species confront the low species twisted by the Pretender in rivalry with the Creator, Wulder. This is a classic good vs evil story, the second in a series of five. However, the struggles of the characters engage the reader with his/her own personal challenges as wise elders advise the young Dragon Keeper/former slave peasant of a rural village.

I loved the proverbs cited from the tomes of Wulder. I relished the passion and sincerity of the characters, and the difficulties the young Dragon Keeper overcame. It was tough! So many unanswered questions! And I loved the unique wizards who kept wisdom and order in the land.

“You said you had no talents of worth to your comrades. In this you mock Wulder’s wisdom.”
“You must not use your sad beginning as an excuse to travel the wrong path. Wulder has given you much. Give back, dear child, give back. Don’t hoard in fear that this is all there is. Give freely.”

As a classic tale of quests and encounters, wizards and dragons unwinds, we are, ourselves challenged to take hold of what is right in front of us and do what we are called by the Lord to do.
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419 reviews2 followers
July 29, 2020
This was nothing more than an OKAY book. The characters felt flat and unimportant. It is never explained why Mother Number One even pretends to be Kale’s mother. It is never explained why Paladin picks Ardeo’s egg to hatch. Also, is Paladin supposed to be a ruler or a god? He seems like he’s everywhere, like a god, but he’s corporeal? Idk. The battle at the end was so anticlimactic. There’s very little description or lead up to the battle and Risto is defeated with almost no effort. Also, how would Cam and Lyll, as master wizards not know they’re fighting a mirror image? All the lead up to the Creemor spiders and the meech dragon just...didn’t happen. There was a lot of potential and very little follow through. And Kale giggles far too much. She’s not really a likeable character and I don’t understand why Bardon is supposed to be so important to her. All I see is a bunch of things started and either hastily wrapped up or ignored altogether.
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