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This edition of Sweet Girl is the original and features 3rd person, dual POV. Inside the ebook, you'll find the spicy candy heart illustrations at the top of each chapter. In the paperback, there are spicy line art drawings throughout and naughty candy hearts as chapter headings. These drawings are exclusive to this edition of Sweet Girl and cannot be found in any other.

***Follow up novel, Finding You, is available on 4/13/23!***

Gavin has been toying with mortals’ lust and desire for longer than he can remember. He’s ditched the wings and silly bow and arrows in exchange for something more a dating app he designed called Cupid’s Arrow. Valentine’s is Gavin’s favorite night of the year, and Cupid’s Arrow is hosting a singles event at the hottest club in town. Gavin is ready to sit back and watch the fun—until she walks in. Chloe has given her friend an hour at this singles party before she walks out. The naughty candy hearts and gimmicky drinks amuse her, as does each person's attempt at charming their way into her bed, but Chloe isn’t swayed—until a man who calls himself Cupid joins her at the bar.

Sweet Girl is an adult, short one-night smutty Valentine’s Day novella. Please check ‘Look Inside’ or the author’s Instagram for full adult content list.

140 pages, Kindle Edition

First published February 2, 2022

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Jack Whitney

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Female Dark Adult Fantasy writer out of South Carolina, US

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989 reviews1,901 followers
February 5, 2022
4 Are You Ready to Play Stars ⭐

Sweet Girl is the perfect novella for all you kinky dolls out there. Candy and sex have never been so salacious. Featuring a god of a man (well Cupid himself) and a girl ready to let her hair down this Valentine's Day; be ready for a titillating ride! 💘💘

“I’m the god you pray to when your thighs shake and your breaths cease… I’m every wicked fantasy you’ve ever had.“

When Chloe gets wrangled into attending a Valentine's Day party by her bestie, she's already set her an hour timer to get the hell out of there. Armed with cocktails and a dish of heart candies, she's found the perfect way to dismiss would be suiters. But she's quickly changing her mind when she lays eyes on the ginger headed hottie.

“You know… all this begging you’re making me do…” he rasped into her hair, “I might have to punish you for it later,” he whispered. “You’ve been a very bad girl, teasing me all night.”

Gavin is the host in disguise. Except the minute he spots Chloe he's desperate to participate in this party for singles. Also armed with heart candies plus furry handcuffs, this brand of foreplay is by far the sweetest.

“Should I bend you over the front of my car?” he whispered in her hair. “Would you like everyone to watch?”

His tease made her eyes roll, her mouth sag. “Yes,” she answered.

“You’re so wet for me,” he said with a groan. “I could slide inside you so easily… Hold my hand over your mouth… Tease you until tears fall down your beautiful cheeks, and you beg for more…”


An immortal with a hard-on and a girl's inner vixen unleashed for the evening, Gavin and Chloe just about incinerated my kindle. I may have grabbed this book because on this dirty as sin cover, but the contents were so much better!!
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102 reviews612 followers
February 3, 2022
This book was SO GOOD!! And extremely spicy. Like i needed to go touch some grass at one point 😂 such a fun, quick read!
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405 reviews79 followers
January 28, 2022
Shit, i'm done. Yes, i am a feminist until a fictional man says “you’re mine” then im just a whore 🤞 🙇‍♀️ I need more Chloe and Gav! I wasn't ready for it to end i don't want to wait until 2023 🚑

Abi nasıl bir kitaptı ben bile bu kadarını beklemiyodum fenalık geçirdim okurken 🙈 öyle bi yerde bitti ki bi baktım 2023te daha uzun bi kitap geliyo falan diyo noluyo noluyoo hani bulacaktın bizi Gav?? Valla bu kitabın konusundan güzel bir Vi Keeland kitabı da çıkarmış umarım uzun halinde biraz daha duygusal sahne görürüz 🤤🤤
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3,464 reviews2,027 followers
February 3, 2022
This was a good novella I wish it was longer but the author said this couple shall get a longer book next year. 😭😭😭

Chloe made a deal one hour at a club with her friend at a valentines app party she's not interested in these men and playing a game with candy hearts as she turns them away. But she catches the eye of a certain Cupid who is hosting the party (she doesn't know he really is Cupid or the app owner). Gavin and Chloe have some fun at the club with the candy hearts and tease eachother until it's time to go.

The SPICE IS EVERYTHING!!!! so much from car sex to handcuffs its so yummy. But feelings are getting involved and they both have to say goodbye... buy they'll meet again. So we end in goodbye.. until next time. Which made me sad.

No ow/om drama (few guys flirted with h, no cheating, slight secondary character, sexy times, no virgins

Recommend-Maybe
Cover-⭐⭐⭐⭐
Heat level-🌶🌶🌶🌶

Slowinsta
Mentions Loss/grief
Implied self harm
Car sex
Praise kink
No condom
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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960 reviews149 followers
February 13, 2023
This is a reread for me, one that I loved! It’s almost time for their full novel, and after reading the first few chapters at the end of this one, I can’t wait! In this book, Gavin is Eros is Cupid, and he’s lived and long, long life. At a party for his dating app, he meets Chloe, and everything else fades away. Chloe, likewise sees Gavin, and finds it quite easy to turn down all the other men who approach her. They find out that they have sizzling chemistry and agree on one wild night together.

And y’all…it’s wild. You don’t become the immortal God of love without having some skills, and my man Eros has the finesse and the filthy mouth to back it up with! Holy PRAISE, I loved every minute! It ended on a really (for me) bittersweet note, but now that I only have a few months until their HEA, it hurt a lot less than a year ago when I read this the first time!
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482 reviews374 followers
December 25, 2022
“Let me guess,” she interjected. “You’ll make me see God?”
“Baby, tonight, I am your god,” he said, squeezing her flesh. “And you’re the woman that’s going to bring Eros to his knees.”


See now that's the shit i don't like.
I fucking hated this
This is a novella and i was internally screaming because i wasn't being able to finish this son of a bitch.


“That’s right, baby,” he practically growled, tongue darting out over her clit. “Say my true name. Call on your lustful god to bring you to your end.”


One of my dialogue icks is this.
No this is not hot to me at all I'm sorry.

“Yours,” she managed, turning her head slightly. “Take me, Eros. Show me my god.”

*sigh*

Also another thing.
You know how we say
"Oh god"
"God that's pretty"
The hero said
Gods
Gods plural.
Every. single. time
“Gods, that’s beautiful,”
“Oh, fuck, like that,” he was suddenly saying. “Holy gods, Chloe—Like that—fuck—”
Gods, she was beautiful


Good god bless me.
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26 reviews47 followers
February 16, 2022
This one definitely took number one spot for spicy novellas. I loooove these characters - Gavin (Eros) is a sexy ginger (not enough of these in romance) and I’m pretty sure every one of us can relate to Chloe on a scary level (she’s into Minotaur smut) of course the spice was amazing, but I was also so into the depth of the characters and little relationship build that began. The best part? They’re getting their own FULL LENGTH praise the spice gods 🙏🏼🙌🏼
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324 reviews114 followers
June 25, 2022
4.5 stars.

A smutty novella perfect for valentine’s season.

I read this after watching an Instagram reel about this book but I didn’t expect it to be this spicy. Damn, it’s too hot in here.
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279 reviews78 followers
February 5, 2022
Well shittt this was definitely spicy 🌶🌶. I didn't realise this was part of a series and was like wtf at the end but worth a read.
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263 reviews73 followers
March 5, 2022
4.5⭐️

OKAY THIS MIGHT BE ONE OF MY FAVORITE NOVELLAS!!!
I’m not giving it 5 stars because the third person dual pov throw me off a lot, I wanted first person. I’m glad this is the beginning of their story and there is a novel coming for them because I wanted more.

I don’t know a lot about greek mythology, I kinda avoid those books because I feel like I could not understand that world to a 100% and that makes me frustrated but this one…I loved it and yes i’m going to read the book when it comes out. It’s a retelling of Eros aka Cupid.

It’s a smutty novella, no plot BUT it was super sweet at the same time. The TEASING WAS AMAZING and their chemistry *cue the fireworks.*
I really liked it a lot, looking foward to their book :)
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602 reviews123 followers
February 21, 2022
★4 sugary stars★

What a sugar rush this ride was! Woah I’m still flossing my teeth to get all the sweetness stuck there… those naughty candies were pleasurable but the aftermath is a bitch…

First book by new to me author, I know this isn’t her only jam and I definitely want to check her other works out.

~𝑩𝒂𝒃𝒚 𝒕𝒐𝒏𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕, 𝑰 𝒂𝒎 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒈𝒐𝒅. 𝑨𝒏𝒅 𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒓𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒘𝒐𝒎𝒂𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕'𝒔 𝒈𝒐𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒕𝒐 𝒃𝒓𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝑬𝒓𝒐𝒔 𝒕𝒐 𝒉𝒊𝒔 𝒌𝒏𝒆𝒆𝒔~

Back to 𝑺𝒘𝒆𝒆𝒕 𝒈𝒊𝒓𝒍 the chemistry between Gavin and Chloe is real and I connected with both of them from the get go. The teasing and build up was an adrenaline filled trip, I was also pleased to savour what came afterwards, well done Ms Whitney for fully exploring their passionate encounter. I don’t like when authors wrap things up right after the two main characters are together, I have a need for said bond to be explored and see what happens afterwards. That’s why I enjoyed to experience Gavin and Chloe after they finally rip their clothes off each other.

I was gutted to find out this is just a short novella so my sugar rush was literally just that, over before I could sample its inner sinful core. On the bright side the author leaves us with hope as in her afterwards she promised to bring us the full complete novel. Thankfully these two have mouths for miles and won’t shut up until their story is written.

~"𝑰 𝒎𝒊𝒔𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒅 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒓𝒐𝒐𝒎,. 𝑯𝒆𝒓𝒆 𝑰 𝒕𝒉𝒐𝒖𝒈𝒉𝒕 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒘𝒆𝒓𝒆 𝒂 𝒅𝒂𝒎𝒔𝒆𝒍 𝒊𝒏 𝒏𝒆𝒆𝒅 𝒐𝒇 𝒔𝒂𝒗𝒊𝒏𝒈. 𝑻𝒖𝒓𝒏𝒔 𝒐𝒖𝒕 𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒓𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒇𝒖𝒄𝒌𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒌𝒏𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕“~

There were a few things that left me questioning the logic behind certain scenes, but the chemistry between these two was so scorching hot they were easily overlooked. If you like retelling, we’re talking about Love and Psyche, and you are looking for some well written smut sprinkled with some kink and a lot wetness don’t go any further this is the right stop 💕

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614 reviews823 followers
October 5, 2022
This was such a great novella! I absolutely devoured it. I felt like the theme was so unique and intriguing. I loved how going into it I totally did not expect it to have a God/Gods in it and it has Gavin who is actually Eros also known as CUPID. This would be a great book to read around Valentine’s Day, but I’m so thankful that I received an arc and was able to read it extra early.

I really loved how hard these two totally fell for each other even if they didn’t say it themselves, you could just tell that they connected so well and the sexual tension and chemistry between the two was OFF THE CHARTS. 📈

This was HOT. 🥵 I ate it up.
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1,456 reviews114 followers
February 16, 2023
Una novella di San Valentino che si legge velocemente, sexy e piccante.
Una notte passionale all'insegna dell'eros (o di Eros😉) e della fantasia più erotica che il famoso e ricercato dio dell'amore farà vivere a Chloe (fortunata lei🔥).

*Ringrazio la CE per la copia ARC in Anteprima e la collaborazione
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2,309 reviews929 followers
February 13, 2022
This novella was a DELIGHT! The hero Gavin is actually a god (Cupid/Eros) and meets Chloe the heroine at a bar. They are instantly into one another and decide to take their chemistry back to her place. So much fun and steam packed into this read, I loved that he is an uber successful app developer with a popular dating app, I loved how they used some sexy valentine’s conversation hearts to decide what they do for the night, I loved that she’s a strong successful business owner and is open and honest with the fact that she doesn’t have time for dating right now. And that ending and the fact that it’s going to be a full length book, umm next year cannot come soon enough! I need more and can’t wait!
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960 reviews149 followers
February 5, 2022
Holy shit, Gavin-Cupid-Eros has destroyed me for other book boyfriends. This novella was absolute fire and I cannot believe we have to wait until 2023 for their full length novel! Dying!! Loved it, and if you’re into PRAISE then read this baby, STAT.
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318 reviews
January 30, 2024
Omg I loved this! Spicy cute valentines novella! Mmc being Cupid himself 😉

I heard this book has a follow up full length novel and now I need to read that haha
I love these characters!!!
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70 reviews23 followers
February 27, 2022
Alexa, add Eros to the growing list of Greek gods I desire. And while you’re at it, add custom candy hearts to my shopping cart…heavy on the “good girl” hearts.
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511 reviews192 followers
February 19, 2023
Re-read this book in prep for the next book, which was Finding You!

In this world Eros aka Gavin, is a developer or creator for a dating app and he has his fair shares of great fucks, but one girl captivated his attention tonight at a singles Party.

Chloe just dabbled with the app, but didn't really go through with it. She became a plus one for a Single's party and then she noticed an alluring man who can't take his eyes off her.

This is definitely one of my recommended novellas for Spicy, hot, delish fun.

Rating 5/5 ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐
Spice Level 3/5🌶️ 🌶️ 🌶️


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779 reviews145 followers
February 7, 2022
I blame me not enjoying this novella on my reading slump. It has hit me hard… but honestly I was quite bored. The games took too long, the writing feels chaotic at times and I simply am not enjoying this pairing. Fortunately for me, it has been a short ride so I didn’t feel like I wasted my time.

Happy Valentine’s Day everyone!
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304 reviews37 followers
August 2, 2022
look, this shit right here? was fucken hot. lol.
i have never wanted to play cupid's game with naughty candy hearts more than i did reading this... (and i don't even like those gods damn candies hahaha.)

this was short, sweet, and insanely steamy. i love it.

I. NEED. MORE.
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1,630 reviews126 followers
February 14, 2022


Genre/Tropes: Valentine’s Novella, Erotic
POV: 1st, Dual
Standalone
STEAM LEVEL: 🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Hot damn, this was one sexy, cute, amazing little erotica novella. I wouldn’t quite call it a romance because this is a one night stand with a hint of a full length novel next year and I’m here for it!

Gavin, aka Eros, aka Cupid is the God of Love and the creator of Cupid’s Arrow, a matchmaking app. On Valentine’s Day, he spots Chloe across the bar and the games begin.

“𝚂𝚠𝚎𝚎𝚝 𝚐𝚒𝚛𝚕, 𝙸’𝚖 𝚗𝚘𝚝 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚘,” 𝚑𝚎 𝚛𝚊𝚜𝚙𝚎𝚍. “𝙸’𝚖 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚐𝚘𝚍 𝚘𝚏 𝚕𝚞𝚜𝚝… 𝚍𝚎𝚜𝚒𝚛𝚎… 𝙸’𝚖 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚑𝚊𝚍𝚘𝚠 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚜𝚎𝚎 𝚒𝚗 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚍𝚊𝚛𝚔 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚔 𝚜𝚘𝚖𝚎𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚒𝚜 𝚠𝚊𝚝𝚌𝚑𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚝𝚘𝚞𝚌𝚑 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛𝚜𝚎𝚕𝚏, 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚋𝚕𝚊𝚗𝚔 𝚏𝚊𝚌𝚎 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚜𝚎𝚎 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚛𝚎 𝚊𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚠𝚊𝚕𝚕𝚜 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚒𝚖𝚊𝚐𝚒𝚗𝚎 𝚜𝚘𝚖𝚎𝚘𝚗𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚝𝚠𝚎𝚎𝚗 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚜. 𝙸’𝚖 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚐𝚘𝚍 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚙𝚛𝚊𝚢 𝚝𝚘 𝚠𝚑𝚎𝚗 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚝𝚑𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚜 𝚜𝚑𝚊𝚔𝚎 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚋𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚝𝚑𝚜 𝚌𝚎𝚊𝚜𝚎… 𝙸’𝚖 𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚢 𝚠𝚒𝚌𝚔𝚎𝚍 𝚏𝚊𝚗𝚝𝚊𝚜𝚢 𝚢𝚘𝚞’𝚟𝚎 𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛 𝚑𝚊𝚍.”

Hard candy, public indecency, snow cream. This book was quick and dirty but it still managed to make me want more. These two had an instant connection. I loved how Gavin craved Chloe and how Chloe flirted with him. She wasn’t naive or innocent and that was so sexy! The steam was so freaking GOOD and the ass slaps just kept coming. I could feel their connection and it was incredible! And I seriously can’t wait for more!

Side Note: I LOVE how he mentions her imperfections (stretch marks, etc.) in such a sexy way. So many women are self-conscious about their body so it’s so refreshing to read a smutty novella that celebrates flaws.
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550 reviews86 followers
February 14, 2024
4.5 ⭐️ This was AMAZING!

If you're looking for a spicy Valentine's Day read, look no further. This has literal Cupid -aka the God Eros- falling in love at first sight!

I couldn't have asked for a more entertaining book to read as I finish my mini marathon to Valentine's Day. I loved both Gavin and Chloe and I am 1000% reading book #2 in the series. This ends in a cliffhanger, since this is kind of a prologue of how the MCs meet.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5/ 5
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️/ 5 - This is primarily erotica, so if that's not your vibe, don't read this. The plot is really nice imo, but there's a lot of nsfw scenes. Wonderful scenes, mind you, but yeah...
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78 reviews23 followers
February 28, 2023
4.5 stars

"Baby, tonight, I am your god. And you're the woman that's going to bring Eros to his knees."

If you want a quick, holiday, slice of life with great spice, pick this up. The sequel comes out in April and I can't wait.

"You look like my favorite candy, baby."
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7,270 reviews215 followers
April 12, 2023
Voto - 3,5
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GiusyLap - per RFS
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Carissime fenici, vi faccio una piccola premessa è la mia prima recensione che scrivo e la cosa mi mette un po’ di agitazione, non posso proprio nascondervelo, ma spero di trasmettervi tutto quello che mi ha fatto provare questa storia.

È una novella di poche pagine cariche però di erotismo e di passione tra i due protagonisti. Diciamo che le scene hot non mancano di certo e anzi molto e di più viene racchiuso lì, quindi vi deve piacere il genere altrimenti…

Ho scelto questo libro perché nella trama ho letto: l’angelo caduto, il dio Eros e mi immaginavo già quell’amore proibito, gli déi dell’Olimpo che scendevano sulla Terra… Beh, non è proprio così ecco! La storia è molto più semplice di ciò che pensavo però i personaggi sono ben descritti: lui, il solito ragazzo bello, che non passa certo inosservato, con i suoi segreti, cupo; lei è la classica donna che non vuole più innamorarsi a causa di una storia che l’ha annullata. I due a un certo punto si incontreranno e boom!

Entro un po’ di più nei dettagli.

Gavin che non è altro il dio dell’amore, Eros, l’angelo che è venuto a vivere in mezzo ai mortali e, se vi state immaginando l’angioletto paffutello sulla nuvoletta con arco e frecce alla Pollon, beh, vi sbagliate di grosso, è un uomo alto muscoloso bello come un dio greco con i capelli color fuoco che al posto di arco e frecce usa un’app che fa incontrare le anime gemelle. Ma quella sera nel pub qualcuna lo sconvolgerà come non accadeva da secoli.



Aveva vissuto secoli, e per tutto quel tempo aveva scavato nei desideri e giocato con le emozioni delle persone. Ma questa ragazza… Doveva averla

Poi abbiamo Chloe una ragazza che non crede più nell’amore perché è stata tradita per aver amato troppo e si è buttata a capofitto nel lavoro decisa a non innamorarsi più. Tutto questo però verrà messo in discussione quando incontra Gavin.



“Non sei un serial killer, vero?” chiese mentre la cameriera serviva i loro cocktail.

“E se ti dicessi che sono Cupido?” fece lui, scherzando solo a metà.

“Allora direi che sei peggio di un serial killer” rispose. “Fai innamorare

le persone.”

“L’amore è morte?”

“L’amore è irrealistico e tragico,” rimarcò Chloe. “Per quanto tu possa

amare qualcuno o qualcosa, la morte alla fine te lo porterà via.”

Gavin ha a disposizione una sola notte per farla innamorare, insieme alle sue caramelle a forma di cuore con incisi dei messaggi maliziosi, e sciogliere il cuore freddo di Chloe, riuscirà il nostro il Cupido a fare centro?

Questa novella assomiglia alla favola di Amore e Psiche solo ambientata ai gi0rni nostri, la consiglio per chi vuole leggere qualcosa di leggero e spensierato dove la scrittrice ha saputo descrivere la passione che li unisce ma anche i demoni che li separa.

Personalmente però ho trovato qualche pecca, quel dannato “Baby” mi ha mandata un po’ fuori di testa; altra cosa che mi ha lasciata un po’ dubbiosa è il mancato approfondimento dei personaggi: abbiamo davanti un dio ma non viene valorizzato come tale, e questo mi è dispiaciuto. Questo racconto l’avrei visto più come uno spin off di qualche serie anziché un romanzo autoconclusivo, ma è solo la mia opinione.

Buona lettura
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1,160 reviews376 followers
January 30, 2022
Well, this was crazy hot. 🥵 Excuse me while I buy candy hearts with dirty messages on them. 🔥

"I plan on doing everything that these hearts say. Striping you. Biting you. Sucking you. All of them… One at a time… One command after the other… Over and over until you beg me to stop."

It's singles night at a bar hosted by the dating app Cupid's Arrow, created by Cupid/Eros, also known as Gavin. He's not really looking for anyone, until Chloe enters his line of sight. Chloe works 70 hours a week; she doesn't have time for dating, but to support her friend Lana, she ends up at the bar. To make the night interesting, they start using candy hearts to let down the guys interested in them. 'THANK U, NEXT', 'BOI BYE'

When Gavin approaches Chloe, their connection is instantaneous! The way these two kept bantering and teasing each other had me grinning so hard! One of the things I rarely see in romance or erotica is the verbal teasing, and the way these two went at it was amazing. I could not stop grinning; it made for the sexual tension to build up before my eyes, and when they got together, it was electrifying! And the candy hearts they used... *fans face* They would put them into action. 'TEASE ME', 'TASTE ME', 'GOOD GIRL', 'LICK ME', 'BEG FOR IT'

"Sweet girl, I’m not your hero," he rasped. "I'm the god of lust… desire… I'm the shadow you see in the dark when you think someone is watching you touch yourself, the blank face you see when you stare at the walls and imagine someone between your thighs. I'm the god you pray to when your thighs shake and your breaths cease… I'm every wicked fantasy you've ever had."

While this novella is erotic, I loved that it included some vulnerable moments shared by Chloe. Seeing her strong demeanor let down her walls a little for Gavin to get to know her was powerful. I also loved to see Chloe and Gavin interacting and feeling at home with each other in between their sexy moments. For such a short story, I truly believed the connection these two characters had.

Overall, Sweet Girl is kinky hot and electrifying, filled with teasing, banter, and some vulnerable moments that is perfect to read in one sitting.
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January 31, 2022
I was lucky to get an ARC and this is my honest GLOB review. Okay. HOLD UP. HELL, TO THE FRUCKIN YES! GAVIN AND CHLOE! YAS QUEEN, JACK! The smut was just beautiful from start to finish! EVERYONE NEEDS TO READ THIS! Why am I screaming?! Because this is the most delicious piece of smut I've ever read and it's worth EVERYTHING!

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I was initially intrigued with this novella because it has the Eros/Cupid theme. I am not a fan of themed novellas. I don't think this is a retelling and I may be wrong. Don't quote me on that. I love Chloe she's pretty good at dropping those mic-dropping comments and Gavin. Oh my, Eros...I think I may be on an Eros trip this month...This god...made me:

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And this book is gonna make you:

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It's a short read 137 pages I think? I am super happy that Jack will continue with the characters because I SUPER LOVED the chemistry. This is just perfect. Like I wanna see where it goes with both of them.

The book is like eating a sample of expensive ass chocolate. You feel a bit dirty because you want more. Not gonna lie this is one of my top novellas this year! I don't think I would need a spice meter for this because it broke it, ma'am. I could definitely see myself reading this again and again.

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