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594 pages, Hardcover
First published August 2, 2022
While I found this book to be decent overall, I tend to hold thrillers to a higher standard, expecting jaw-dropping moments and compelling plot twists. Unfortunately, this book didn't quite deliver on that front. With its four points of view (POVs), the narrative structure had its merits, but at times, it became confusing and left me wishing for a more focused exploration of specific characters' thoughts and perspectives. The constant shift in POVs made it challenging to fully connect with the characters, diminishing my overall experience.
In particular, the romantic aspect felt underdeveloped and lacked the emotional depth I was hoping for. The connection between the characters didn't resonate with me, and I sometimes wished the book had foregone the romantic subplot altogether.
To enhance the thriller elements, I suggest refining the plot twists to deliver more impactful and unexpected moments. Consider streamlining the narrative by reducing the number of POVs, allowing for a deeper exploration of the remaining characters. This could help us, readers, form a stronger connection with the protagonists, making the stakes feel more personal.
Additionally, I would recommend taking the opportunity to invest more time in building the romantic relationship. Develop the characters' connection organically, ensuring that we can empathize with and invest in their emotional journey. If the romantic subplot doesn't contribute significantly to the overall narrative, it might be worth reconsidering its inclusion.
Overall, with some adjustments to the pacing, character development, and plot twists, this book has the potential to deliver a more engaging and satisfying thriller experience.