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Valdor: Birth of the Imperium
A Horus Heresy Characters novelConstantin Valdor is the chief of the Emperor's Custodian Guard and among the closest of His companions. As the wars of Unity come to their end, he faces his greatest challenge, as dark deeds are required to pave mankind's road to the stars.READ IT BECAUSEDelve into the era of the Unification Wars and discover Constantin Valdor's role in bringing about the Imperium of Mankind in an unmissable novel by Chris Wraight.THE STORYConstantin Valdor. It is a name that brings forth images of heroism, honour and peerless duty. For it is he who commands the will of the Legio Custodes, that most esteemed and dedicated cadre of elite warriors. He is the Emperor’s sword, His shield, His banner and he knows no equal. Clad in shining auramite, his fist clenched around the haft of his guardian spear, he is the bulwark against all enemies of the throne, within or without. Nearing the end of the wars of Unity, Valdor’s courage and purpose is put to the test as never before. The petty warlords and tyrants of Old Earth have been all but vanquished, and the Emperor’s armies are triumphant. What now for the nascent Imperium and what fate for its forgotten soldiers, its Thunder Warriors and armies of Unity? A new force is rising, one which shall eclipse all others and open the way to the stars. But change on Terra is seldom bloodless and for progress to be ensured darker deeds are necessary.Written by Chris Wraight
193 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 1, 2020
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Chris Wraight
202 books312 followersChris Wraight is a British author of fantasy and science fiction.
His first novel was published in 2008; since then, he has published books set in the Warhammer Fantasy and Stargate:Atlantis universes, and has upcoming titles in the Warhammer 40K setting.
He is based in the south-west of England.
His first novel was published in 2008; since then, he has published books set in the Warhammer Fantasy and Stargate:Atlantis universes, and has upcoming titles in the Warhammer 40K setting.
He is based in the south-west of England.
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August 1, 2023
Re-read, August 2023
I think this will be a book I will be returning to every so often. Very nature of early Imperium period, world exiting millennia of heavy war-fighting filled with mad warlords and people wielding miraculous powers of bio-engineering and knowledge of [hardware] technology, armies developed along such lines that even mighty Custodes are seen as just one of many formations created and armed using exotic technologies, maybe more powerful and motivated than those before it but in general just one more in the sea of others.
To read about the remnants of mercenaries and Thunder Warriors marching to the Palace, gullibility of the good-intended people [in that eternal attempt to save the Republic, although Republic was never to be], Valdor's thoughts on the new (at the time) war-gear of the Custodes and need for such symbols, recalling how in beginning they fought with what was then standard field equipment, subterfuge of people with manias of grandeur (although they might have a reason for it mind you, since they were maybe second only to the Emperor in their fields) and finally emergence of the new Legions on the battlefield........
Excellent read, so much elements from the early period.
Highly, highly recommended.
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Original, review, February 2020
I have not read a book that teased so much about the lore as this one. There simply isn't part of the book that does not give reader glimpse of the Imperium at the very beginning - but only limited dose. And I want to read about it in its entirety :)
Although rather short we are given some of the details on Valdor himself (although in very very tiny bits, ah those teasers), some scraps of information on what did actually happen at Mount Ararat (battle on Maulland Sen) and how did the Emperor progress with further genetic experiments that resulted in the creation of Space Marines.
About Valdor ... And Custodes. If you thought they were the tip of the spear after reading this novella you will put them into completely different category. These humanoid weapons are the ultimate protectors of the Imperium of Man. I liked how Custodes are treated by the people at this time (High Lords especially) - they are seen as just yet another military formation built using latest technology and gene splicing. I do not have to say how big mistake it is to underestimate them.
Author gives a great portrayal of society rocked for so long with never-ending war that they always look at everything through the prism of tribal conflict and fight for power and dominance. So when events get put into motion (as they say road to Hell is paved with the good intentions) it comes as no surprise that Emperor is still keeping a lot of secrets even from his closest political associates - High Lords of Terra. There are wheels within wheels at work here and not everything can be taken at the face value. Soon everybody realizes that although Emperor is benevolent he is not aiming for a democracy. He is aiming to form a benevolent dictatorship.
I followed the forums when limited edition book was published and I have to say one thing - Mount Ararat story is only mentioned here, there are no details on what happen at this place except the few words from Valdor (his description of the Unity army progressing to the fortress of the Priest-King is great) and the remains dug up by one of the High Lords.
What is detailed though is a magnificent introduction of our Space Marines in perhaps first full defense of what will become Imperial Palace.
Thunder Warriors play the role in the story but theirs is eternal role of the First and the Flawed. Warriors supreme that were condemned by their genetic traits and instability. It is very clear that Valdor holds them in high esteem but is aware that they have no place in Imperium's future.
Valdor is portrayed as a man that knows his task and path ahead of him. He is fully dedicated to the Emperor's project but also feels sad because he knows how others - no matter how intelligent and benevolent they are - will see the actions of Emperor - almost always in negative light. And he can tell them nothing because to do that would undo a lot of work already done or in progress. So what can he do but his best to make sure no harm comes to innocent or mislead, do the cleanup after they make hasty action without much thought and hope Emperor will soon decide to fully share his plan for advancement of humankind. Secrets breed discord and hardest duty falls to those tasked with guarding the secrets.
Sad story of lonely guardian standing everlasting vigil in order to protect the humanity.
I hope they give us more books with Unity or early Imperium period setting. And soon :)
Highly recommended to fans of Warhammer 40K and especially Horus Heresy.
I think this will be a book I will be returning to every so often. Very nature of early Imperium period, world exiting millennia of heavy war-fighting filled with mad warlords and people wielding miraculous powers of bio-engineering and knowledge of [hardware] technology, armies developed along such lines that even mighty Custodes are seen as just one of many formations created and armed using exotic technologies, maybe more powerful and motivated than those before it but in general just one more in the sea of others.
To read about the remnants of mercenaries and Thunder Warriors marching to the Palace, gullibility of the good-intended people [in that eternal attempt to save the Republic, although Republic was never to be], Valdor's thoughts on the new (at the time) war-gear of the Custodes and need for such symbols, recalling how in beginning they fought with what was then standard field equipment, subterfuge of people with manias of grandeur (although they might have a reason for it mind you, since they were maybe second only to the Emperor in their fields) and finally emergence of the new Legions on the battlefield........
Excellent read, so much elements from the early period.
Highly, highly recommended.
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Original, review, February 2020
I have not read a book that teased so much about the lore as this one. There simply isn't part of the book that does not give reader glimpse of the Imperium at the very beginning - but only limited dose. And I want to read about it in its entirety :)
Although rather short we are given some of the details on Valdor himself (although in very very tiny bits, ah those teasers), some scraps of information on what did actually happen at Mount Ararat (battle on Maulland Sen) and how did the Emperor progress with further genetic experiments that resulted in the creation of Space Marines.
About Valdor ... And Custodes. If you thought they were the tip of the spear after reading this novella you will put them into completely different category. These humanoid weapons are the ultimate protectors of the Imperium of Man. I liked how Custodes are treated by the people at this time (High Lords especially) - they are seen as just yet another military formation built using latest technology and gene splicing. I do not have to say how big mistake it is to underestimate them.
Author gives a great portrayal of society rocked for so long with never-ending war that they always look at everything through the prism of tribal conflict and fight for power and dominance. So when events get put into motion (as they say road to Hell is paved with the good intentions) it comes as no surprise that Emperor is still keeping a lot of secrets even from his closest political associates - High Lords of Terra. There are wheels within wheels at work here and not everything can be taken at the face value. Soon everybody realizes that although Emperor is benevolent he is not aiming for a democracy. He is aiming to form a benevolent dictatorship.
I followed the forums when limited edition book was published and I have to say one thing - Mount Ararat story is only mentioned here, there are no details on what happen at this place except the few words from Valdor (his description of the Unity army progressing to the fortress of the Priest-King is great) and the remains dug up by one of the High Lords.
What is detailed though is a magnificent introduction of our Space Marines in perhaps first full defense of what will become Imperial Palace.
Thunder Warriors play the role in the story but theirs is eternal role of the First and the Flawed. Warriors supreme that were condemned by their genetic traits and instability. It is very clear that Valdor holds them in high esteem but is aware that they have no place in Imperium's future.
Valdor is portrayed as a man that knows his task and path ahead of him. He is fully dedicated to the Emperor's project but also feels sad because he knows how others - no matter how intelligent and benevolent they are - will see the actions of Emperor - almost always in negative light. And he can tell them nothing because to do that would undo a lot of work already done or in progress. So what can he do but his best to make sure no harm comes to innocent or mislead, do the cleanup after they make hasty action without much thought and hope Emperor will soon decide to fully share his plan for advancement of humankind. Secrets breed discord and hardest duty falls to those tasked with guarding the secrets.
Sad story of lonely guardian standing everlasting vigil in order to protect the humanity.
I hope they give us more books with Unity or early Imperium period setting. And soon :)
Highly recommended to fans of Warhammer 40K and especially Horus Heresy.
April 22, 2020
Chris Wraight's, 'Valdor: Birth of the Imperium', is a novella that I have been looking forward to reading for a very long time. #valdor is one of my favourite characters from the Warhammer 40k universe and this is the first novel where he takes centre stage.
Set at the end of the Unification Wars on Terra, it's not so much an origin story, but more a glimpse into the captain-general's mind at a certain point in his life. Valdor is already 'old' at this point. He has fought by the Emperor's side for over a century. Surprisingly, he has a lot less page time than I expected but captivates whenever he does appear. He also has the best lines and moments which every warhammer fan will remember for years to come. Personally I found the quiet moments with Valdor the most interesting. It is here that we get a deep insight into what it means to be a custodes. This question lies at the heart of the story.
There are a number of supporting characters, each of which make for fascinating characters in their own right, considering the little space and time we get with each. By far the most interesting is Kandawire whose interactions with Valdor are the hightlight of the book, and whose own goal is justifiable.
In terms of setting, the entire novella is set amid the foundations of the Imperial Palace. Having recently read 'The Lost and the Damned' and 'The First Wall' in the Siege of Terra arc, it was fascinating to see the Imperial Palace durimg its construction from the skelethon of the Lion's Gate to the Imperial Dungeon and the original purpose it served. Most of the novella takes place during a storm. A fitting event considering the book is chock-full of answers to questions that have teased warhammer fans for decades.
'Valdor: Birth of the Imperium' is a must read for all 40k fans. Considering the mahor success of the Horus Heresy, I really hope that they continue to explore this earlier period in subsequent books.
Set at the end of the Unification Wars on Terra, it's not so much an origin story, but more a glimpse into the captain-general's mind at a certain point in his life. Valdor is already 'old' at this point. He has fought by the Emperor's side for over a century. Surprisingly, he has a lot less page time than I expected but captivates whenever he does appear. He also has the best lines and moments which every warhammer fan will remember for years to come. Personally I found the quiet moments with Valdor the most interesting. It is here that we get a deep insight into what it means to be a custodes. This question lies at the heart of the story.
There are a number of supporting characters, each of which make for fascinating characters in their own right, considering the little space and time we get with each. By far the most interesting is Kandawire whose interactions with Valdor are the hightlight of the book, and whose own goal is justifiable.
In terms of setting, the entire novella is set amid the foundations of the Imperial Palace. Having recently read 'The Lost and the Damned' and 'The First Wall' in the Siege of Terra arc, it was fascinating to see the Imperial Palace durimg its construction from the skelethon of the Lion's Gate to the Imperial Dungeon and the original purpose it served. Most of the novella takes place during a storm. A fitting event considering the book is chock-full of answers to questions that have teased warhammer fans for decades.
'Valdor: Birth of the Imperium' is a must read for all 40k fans. Considering the mahor success of the Horus Heresy, I really hope that they continue to explore this earlier period in subsequent books.
November 18, 2019
There have been very few stories set in the Unification Era thus far, and Valdor: Birth of the Imperium is the first such novel. The book itself is effectively set effectively at the climax of Unification, but we do get some glimpses further back. As implied by the blurb, there is a particular focus on the fate of the Thunder Warriors, and the age of transition between those warriors and the Legiones Astartes. The actual nature of what the Thunder Warriors /are/, and why they needed to exist regardless of their flaws, is examined in detail. The story is told from a variety of perspectives, and uses a fairly effective method to examine the topic of the Thunder Warriors. As for Valdor himself, despite the book being named for him he has comparatively few pages dedicated to his perspective. Every moment he is on-page, however, is illuminating. Despite the comparatively short nature of the story, it reveals much about Valdor, and about his perspective on and relationship with the Emperor. It's truly a fantastic book.
May 7, 2024
May 2024 Read using the Horus Heresy Omnibus Project Reading Order Omnibus XVIII Omnissiah II End of Empires (https://www.heresyomnibus.com/omnibus...) as part of my Oath of Moment to complete the Horus Heresy series and extras.
This is unlike anything else and truly shows Wraight's incredible skill at crafting a fascinating narrative that builds to a powerful and foreboding conclusion that is at once a Horus Heresy: Characters novel, while being set during and providing a whole new perspective on the dying embers of Unification upon which the Imperium was founded.
The story follows one of the first High Lords of Terra as she sets out to attempt to get Valdor, Captain-General of the Custodes, on the record confessing to the purging and cover up thereof of the Thunder Warriors and the intrigue and artifce that entails. There is also a thread following a mercenary who is being confronted with a changing Terra, as well as insights from Valdor and other significant figures of the time.
The Horus Heresy Series has revealed much about Thunder Warriors already. We know they came before the Space Marines and were the Emperor's first draft at mass produced transhuman warriors and were his devastating weapon that wreaked havoc upon the people Terra, crushing them with Unification into what would become the Imperium. The Custodes were there, but they were more of a bespoke artifce as the aegis of the Emperor, rather than his bloody, thunderous fists. It has also been revealed that there was a purge with the official story being the Thunder Warriors died to a man at the final battle for Unification, and that a handful of them survived all the way to the Heresy choking on broken dreams of Unity.
What we haven't seen is what that actually meant to those involved and those whose lofty positions and hand in their creation ostensibly meant that they should have had a say or at the very least been given the truth, beyond the open secret. We haven't had an extended narrative set during this period. Beyond oblique references and the Legions who still bear her name, we also haven't seen Amar Astarte, the geneticist who worked on the Primarch Project with the Emperor.
Honestly, I really don't want to say too much more about this novel beyond that it is centered on the emerging face of the Imperium, as hollow and unadorned as the bones of the Imperial Palace, as well the true beginning of the Heresy on Terra side with the scattering of the Primarchs and the bloody epoch of Astartes.
I absolutely loved it and had my classic AuDHD reaction to the slow build and more than worth it pay off. But more than the story it is on the face of it, what it says about the Emperor, his creations, and the Imperium, and the new perspectives and details it contains arewhat makes this special. I don't mean that in a way that it's a vehicle for face-melting moments and and reveals, of which it does have a few, but something Wraight has shown time and again in the unique way he approaches the stories and figures of the Dark Millennia, is in conveying something deeper, and more often than not, something incredibly bleak and tragic in such a well-crafted and beautiful way.
I know Wraight's entries in the Primarchs series have divided people, but I think they are some of the best of that series and the while Horus Heresy, with Sanguinius: The Great Angel being almost definitely my favourite book in the Black Library, and by far the book that captures the essence of the Dark Millennia and the Imperium. This is another work in that vein or sensibility, while being a very different book.
I love all the bolters and Daemons and ridiculous action that comes with Warhammer, but there's something truly special about the Horus Heresy and its grand mystical mythological metaphorical narrative and the weight and care given to it. In my opinion Wraight continues to be one or the most stalwart custodians of that tradition and the gravitas and pathos that pervade his writing are something else.
This instantly joined my own personal retrospective read I plan to do before eventually starting The End and the Death, Omnibus Ω, serving as the opening to the preface with The Wolf of Ash and Fire by Graham McNeill as bright black and gold counterpoint to bleakness of this as they set the board for the opening trilogy, and I'm already excited to read this again!
Through the Horus Heresy Omnibus Project and my own additions, I have currently read 38 Horus Heresy novels (inc. 1 repeat and 4 anthologies), 22 novellas (inc. 2 repeats), 122 short stories/ audio dramas (inc. 8+ repeats), as well as the Macragge's Honour graphic novel, all 17 Primarchs novels, 4 Primarchs short stories/ audio dramas, 3 Characters novels, and 2 Warhammer 40K further reading novels and 1 short story...this run, as well as writing 1 short story myself.
I couldn't be more appreciative of the phenomenal work of the Horus Heresy Omnibus Project, which has made this ridiculous endeavour all the better and has inspired me to create and collated a collection Horus Heresy and Warhammer 40,000 documents and checklists (https://tinyurl.com/ywe8efrf):
Horus Heresy Complete* Checklist [May 2024], Horus Heresy Anthologies & Collections Checklist [May 2024], Horus Heresy Omnibus Project Reading Order Checklist, Omnibus Ω The Flavour Savour (My own essence of the Horus Heresy retrospective omnibus), Horus Heresy Omnibus Project & RatGrrrl Further Reading+ Checklist [Work in Progress May 2024], Horus Heresy and Warhammer 40,000 Fan Works (Focusing of Fan Adaptations and Recordings) [Works in Progress], Chimæra by RatGrrrl (My own Horus Heresy short story) [Rough Draft]
This is unlike anything else and truly shows Wraight's incredible skill at crafting a fascinating narrative that builds to a powerful and foreboding conclusion that is at once a Horus Heresy: Characters novel, while being set during and providing a whole new perspective on the dying embers of Unification upon which the Imperium was founded.
The story follows one of the first High Lords of Terra as she sets out to attempt to get Valdor, Captain-General of the Custodes, on the record confessing to the purging and cover up thereof of the Thunder Warriors and the intrigue and artifce that entails. There is also a thread following a mercenary who is being confronted with a changing Terra, as well as insights from Valdor and other significant figures of the time.
The Horus Heresy Series has revealed much about Thunder Warriors already. We know they came before the Space Marines and were the Emperor's first draft at mass produced transhuman warriors and were his devastating weapon that wreaked havoc upon the people Terra, crushing them with Unification into what would become the Imperium. The Custodes were there, but they were more of a bespoke artifce as the aegis of the Emperor, rather than his bloody, thunderous fists. It has also been revealed that there was a purge with the official story being the Thunder Warriors died to a man at the final battle for Unification, and that a handful of them survived all the way to the Heresy choking on broken dreams of Unity.
What we haven't seen is what that actually meant to those involved and those whose lofty positions and hand in their creation ostensibly meant that they should have had a say or at the very least been given the truth, beyond the open secret. We haven't had an extended narrative set during this period. Beyond oblique references and the Legions who still bear her name, we also haven't seen Amar Astarte, the geneticist who worked on the Primarch Project with the Emperor.
Honestly, I really don't want to say too much more about this novel beyond that it is centered on the emerging face of the Imperium, as hollow and unadorned as the bones of the Imperial Palace, as well the true beginning of the Heresy on Terra side with the scattering of the Primarchs and the bloody epoch of Astartes.
I absolutely loved it and had my classic AuDHD reaction to the slow build and more than worth it pay off. But more than the story it is on the face of it, what it says about the Emperor, his creations, and the Imperium, and the new perspectives and details it contains arewhat makes this special. I don't mean that in a way that it's a vehicle for face-melting moments and and reveals, of which it does have a few, but something Wraight has shown time and again in the unique way he approaches the stories and figures of the Dark Millennia, is in conveying something deeper, and more often than not, something incredibly bleak and tragic in such a well-crafted and beautiful way.
I know Wraight's entries in the Primarchs series have divided people, but I think they are some of the best of that series and the while Horus Heresy, with Sanguinius: The Great Angel being almost definitely my favourite book in the Black Library, and by far the book that captures the essence of the Dark Millennia and the Imperium. This is another work in that vein or sensibility, while being a very different book.
I love all the bolters and Daemons and ridiculous action that comes with Warhammer, but there's something truly special about the Horus Heresy and its grand mystical mythological metaphorical narrative and the weight and care given to it. In my opinion Wraight continues to be one or the most stalwart custodians of that tradition and the gravitas and pathos that pervade his writing are something else.
This instantly joined my own personal retrospective read I plan to do before eventually starting The End and the Death, Omnibus Ω, serving as the opening to the preface with The Wolf of Ash and Fire by Graham McNeill as bright black and gold counterpoint to bleakness of this as they set the board for the opening trilogy, and I'm already excited to read this again!
Through the Horus Heresy Omnibus Project and my own additions, I have currently read 38 Horus Heresy novels (inc. 1 repeat and 4 anthologies), 22 novellas (inc. 2 repeats), 122 short stories/ audio dramas (inc. 8+ repeats), as well as the Macragge's Honour graphic novel, all 17 Primarchs novels, 4 Primarchs short stories/ audio dramas, 3 Characters novels, and 2 Warhammer 40K further reading novels and 1 short story...this run, as well as writing 1 short story myself.
I couldn't be more appreciative of the phenomenal work of the Horus Heresy Omnibus Project, which has made this ridiculous endeavour all the better and has inspired me to create and collated a collection Horus Heresy and Warhammer 40,000 documents and checklists (https://tinyurl.com/ywe8efrf):
Horus Heresy Complete* Checklist [May 2024], Horus Heresy Anthologies & Collections Checklist [May 2024], Horus Heresy Omnibus Project Reading Order Checklist, Omnibus Ω The Flavour Savour (My own essence of the Horus Heresy retrospective omnibus), Horus Heresy Omnibus Project & RatGrrrl Further Reading+ Checklist [Work in Progress May 2024], Horus Heresy and Warhammer 40,000 Fan Works (Focusing of Fan Adaptations and Recordings) [Works in Progress], Chimæra by RatGrrrl (My own Horus Heresy short story) [Rough Draft]
February 3, 2021
This one is excellent! Going back into the closing days of Unification right before the launching of the Crusade. Like all WH40K it teases more glimpses than it reveals but it is really excellent AND gives you more on the birth of the Space Marines.
June 28, 2024
“Valdor Birth of the Imperium” by Chris Wraight is exactly what you think it would be. We get a story about Valdor and his “exploits” against the Thunder Warriors, we see the birth of the imperium most notable the first emergence of the Astartes and get to see what happened in the years before the Great Crusade really began.
This was just a quite fun read and if you know a bit of the lore before going in you will get a lot out of it. My two favorite things were learning about the creation of the Astartes and how they got their name. Big E loves a bit of irony. I also just enjoy that because of the events in this book we learn how the war games came about. Just an enjoyable read. The beginning is a little slow, but the ending is very good.
This was just a quite fun read and if you know a bit of the lore before going in you will get a lot out of it. My two favorite things were learning about the creation of the Astartes and how they got their name. Big E loves a bit of irony. I also just enjoy that because of the events in this book we learn how the war games came about. Just an enjoyable read. The beginning is a little slow, but the ending is very good.
August 5, 2020
Well, to be honest, this book is not actually about the titular character Valdor, but rather about a significant event that happens near the end of the Unification Era. It details an attempted palace coup, and details some very interesting lore regarding the early age of the Imperium. ‘Chris Wraight’ once again does a brilliant job, creating a captivating prose telling a story of an almost unexplored time of the Warhammer universe through the viewpoints of some fascinating characters.
As I mentioned before, this novel takes place at the time of the ‘palace coup’, during which a group of dissatisfied member of Imperium tried to remove Constantin Valdor from power and put him on trial for the events of Mt. Ararat. A large part of the story is told from the perspectives of these perpetrators, including Grand Provost Kandawire and Amar Astarte, and we find out their specific reasons for the attempt. We also get a glimpse into the mind of Valdor and other Adeptus Custodes, which was a rare treat fr Warhammer fiction.
Don’t come to this book expecting lots of action, as there is not much action at all except at the last few chapters. This book is rather a slowly unfolding tale of an interesting bit of the history of the Empire, told from the viewpoints of some very important characters responsible for the literal birth of it.
The reader also gets to witness the introduction of the much beloved Space Marine into their first battle, gets a glimpse into the creation of these powerful beings and also very interesting information regarding the legendary Thunder Warriors and the Adeptus Custodes among other delightful tidbits.
Among the characters I really loved Kandawire, she gives a human perspective in this setting full of the demi-gods and I really loved her courage and determination despite facing such huge odds in her struggle. Amar Astarte, despite having only a few chapters dedicated to her also stole the show, with her presence and dialogues, and I for one would have loved to read a lot more regarding her exploits. And lastly, the glimpse into the mind of Constantin Valdor was really engrossing and left a rather enthralling aftertaste.
For the negatives, I for one, would have loved to know the real truth about what happened on Mt. Ararat. I also really wanted to know more about the method of creation of the Space Marines and would have really liked more information regarding the origins of the Primarchs and how they were scattered; and most of all I just wish this book had much longer length opposed to what is on offer.
In the end, despite the false categorization (this is not a book about the Horus Heresy at all) and the short length, this book is a must read for any fan of Warhammer 40k or Black Library. ‘Chris Wraight’ once again sets the bar with his elegant writing and strong grasp of the characters. I just hope he keeps on writing such beautiful fiction.
Rating – 9 out of 10.
Find other reviews and stuff for 'Black Library' fiction on my blog - https://theoctedpath.wordpress.com/
As I mentioned before, this novel takes place at the time of the ‘palace coup’, during which a group of dissatisfied member of Imperium tried to remove Constantin Valdor from power and put him on trial for the events of Mt. Ararat. A large part of the story is told from the perspectives of these perpetrators, including Grand Provost Kandawire and Amar Astarte, and we find out their specific reasons for the attempt. We also get a glimpse into the mind of Valdor and other Adeptus Custodes, which was a rare treat fr Warhammer fiction.
Don’t come to this book expecting lots of action, as there is not much action at all except at the last few chapters. This book is rather a slowly unfolding tale of an interesting bit of the history of the Empire, told from the viewpoints of some very important characters responsible for the literal birth of it.
The reader also gets to witness the introduction of the much beloved Space Marine into their first battle, gets a glimpse into the creation of these powerful beings and also very interesting information regarding the legendary Thunder Warriors and the Adeptus Custodes among other delightful tidbits.
Among the characters I really loved Kandawire, she gives a human perspective in this setting full of the demi-gods and I really loved her courage and determination despite facing such huge odds in her struggle. Amar Astarte, despite having only a few chapters dedicated to her also stole the show, with her presence and dialogues, and I for one would have loved to read a lot more regarding her exploits. And lastly, the glimpse into the mind of Constantin Valdor was really engrossing and left a rather enthralling aftertaste.
For the negatives, I for one, would have loved to know the real truth about what happened on Mt. Ararat. I also really wanted to know more about the method of creation of the Space Marines and would have really liked more information regarding the origins of the Primarchs and how they were scattered; and most of all I just wish this book had much longer length opposed to what is on offer.
In the end, despite the false categorization (this is not a book about the Horus Heresy at all) and the short length, this book is a must read for any fan of Warhammer 40k or Black Library. ‘Chris Wraight’ once again sets the bar with his elegant writing and strong grasp of the characters. I just hope he keeps on writing such beautiful fiction.
Rating – 9 out of 10.
Find other reviews and stuff for 'Black Library' fiction on my blog - https://theoctedpath.wordpress.com/
April 12, 2024
My first Warhammer book. Not disappointed.
May 5, 2020
Loving Adeptus Custodes, I was looking forward to finding more about their leader. This book truly blew me away with the sheer background knowledge of what the Imperium was like prior to the Primarchs. Great character building as by the end I liked both sides of the war and felt their reason for it. An amazing twist at the end . Overall a must-read and will now be looking for more books by Chris.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 9, 2020
It's a novella where almost everything in it is a spoiler. Chris Wraight is in my top three Black Library authors along with Dan Abnett and Guy Haley.
April 4, 2020
A little dry, but mostly exciting.
June 23, 2024
The worker makes things work.
I don’t think Valdor will stick in my head, but Valdor will. Character takes a back seat to the plot and a wider theme of trust. I quite like what Wraight has achieved with Valdor - it is a Horus Heresy story that powers the main plot indirectly.
I fought the Lore and the Lore won
You will know the name, of course – I am speaking of Astarte.
Part of what annoyed me about Rogal Dorn’s Primarch book was awkwardly spinning lore out of thin air to create a character study. In contrast, Valdor ties itself to existing events. It is a detail filler that (mostly) fits into and expands the existing canon. The characters are workmanlike rather than outstanding but Wraight employs their workmanship to both create the structure of the plot and drive it forward to bigger ideas. Wraight’s characters transcend line reading from a prepared script but they do know they have a job to do, right down to the mercenary’s perception of his forthcoming doom.
Is the new lore interesting in itself? – Sort of. I feel Valdor provides the scaffolding to further explore concepts – it is the base that could launch a thousand novellas. In addition, while I did not find the characters exceptional they in their totality make the interesting point of how the EMPEROR OF MANKIND is reliant on the foibles of lesser beings. Worse, even those who (mostly) help him can turn against him, which leads to an interesting point – who is the true betrayer?
Eat or be Eaten
‘He is of the belief that our enemies indulge in games . Indeed, it is his judgement that they are bound by such things, which is both a weakness and strength to them. If we are to guard against them, we must do likewise. Generate threats, respond to them. Place our minds in the situation of those who wish to do Him harm. Let them in close, accepting the risk in return for the knowledge we gain. The stronger we become here, the more they will wish to bring us low. They have infinite facility – we must work to match that.’
I have no idea as to how far Valdor is meant to parallel the Horus Heresy. Nonetheless, I consider there is a deliberateness in basing the story around those afraid of being sidelined or their vision being distorted. As a twist, there is the the slightly spicier involvement of those surviving Thunder Warriors, where “sidelining” meant a boltergun to their faces. Valdor confronts the reader with the question as to just what the EMPEROR OF MANKIND plan to do with their successors. Sure, the Space Marines were more genetically stable, but they had their issues (the Red Thirst, turning into werewolves, sprouting unexpected appendages). Knowing how the Thunder Warriors ended up, is there a fair argument for Horus to have got his licks in first?
In support of this, in Valdor the rebellion is just slightly too late – mankind reaches the next stage of development and the new Space Marines crush the rebellion. Their deployment is hasty and initial combat skills shaky. Valdor creates a sense of urgency that does not exist in the main plot line of the Horus Heresy. If Horus (well, ok, Erebus) had left it any later, their forces would have been crushed via loyalists using the Eldar Webway.
I note this is alot of head canon on my part – there’s no explicit linking of the timing of the Horus Heresy with any deliberate attempt by the EMPEROR OF MANKIND to move against his Primarchs. However: several Primarchs in the novels do talk about their uncertain futures; we know Magnus’ tinkering with the Warp overthrew some major plans (including virtual enslavement powering the Webway); and there was an explicit time limit on Angron’s usefulness post Butcher’s Nails. Finally, the Thunder Warriors’ individuality and desire to carve out their own fiefdoms formed part of their downfall, and they were mere emotional midgets compared to the Primarchs’ Shakespearean turmoils.
There would never be room for two Legios – the Cataegis and the Custodes – and Valdor was ruthless enough to ensure that it was his own kind that endured.
Valdor suggests that the consequences of letting events unfold is a fatal loss of control, no matter how powerful you are. You actually do have to move early and ruthlessly, which goes a long way to explaining the Horus Heresy. Valdor doesn’t quite have the charismatic central character or set of characters to make that point, but I still see it (or have alternatively made it up – trust no one).
I don’t think Valdor will stick in my head, but Valdor will. Character takes a back seat to the plot and a wider theme of trust. I quite like what Wraight has achieved with Valdor - it is a Horus Heresy story that powers the main plot indirectly.
I fought the Lore and the Lore won
You will know the name, of course – I am speaking of Astarte.
Part of what annoyed me about Rogal Dorn’s Primarch book was awkwardly spinning lore out of thin air to create a character study. In contrast, Valdor ties itself to existing events. It is a detail filler that (mostly) fits into and expands the existing canon. The characters are workmanlike rather than outstanding but Wraight employs their workmanship to both create the structure of the plot and drive it forward to bigger ideas. Wraight’s characters transcend line reading from a prepared script but they do know they have a job to do, right down to the mercenary’s perception of his forthcoming doom.
Is the new lore interesting in itself? – Sort of. I feel Valdor provides the scaffolding to further explore concepts – it is the base that could launch a thousand novellas. In addition, while I did not find the characters exceptional they in their totality make the interesting point of how the EMPEROR OF MANKIND is reliant on the foibles of lesser beings. Worse, even those who (mostly) help him can turn against him, which leads to an interesting point – who is the true betrayer?
Eat or be Eaten
‘He is of the belief that our enemies indulge in games . Indeed, it is his judgement that they are bound by such things, which is both a weakness and strength to them. If we are to guard against them, we must do likewise. Generate threats, respond to them. Place our minds in the situation of those who wish to do Him harm. Let them in close, accepting the risk in return for the knowledge we gain. The stronger we become here, the more they will wish to bring us low. They have infinite facility – we must work to match that.’
I have no idea as to how far Valdor is meant to parallel the Horus Heresy. Nonetheless, I consider there is a deliberateness in basing the story around those afraid of being sidelined or their vision being distorted. As a twist, there is the the slightly spicier involvement of those surviving Thunder Warriors, where “sidelining” meant a boltergun to their faces. Valdor confronts the reader with the question as to just what the EMPEROR OF MANKIND plan to do with their successors. Sure, the Space Marines were more genetically stable, but they had their issues (the Red Thirst, turning into werewolves, sprouting unexpected appendages). Knowing how the Thunder Warriors ended up, is there a fair argument for Horus to have got his licks in first?
In support of this, in Valdor the rebellion is just slightly too late – mankind reaches the next stage of development and the new Space Marines crush the rebellion. Their deployment is hasty and initial combat skills shaky. Valdor creates a sense of urgency that does not exist in the main plot line of the Horus Heresy. If Horus (well, ok, Erebus) had left it any later, their forces would have been crushed via loyalists using the Eldar Webway.
I note this is alot of head canon on my part – there’s no explicit linking of the timing of the Horus Heresy with any deliberate attempt by the EMPEROR OF MANKIND to move against his Primarchs. However: several Primarchs in the novels do talk about their uncertain futures; we know Magnus’ tinkering with the Warp overthrew some major plans (including virtual enslavement powering the Webway); and there was an explicit time limit on Angron’s usefulness post Butcher’s Nails. Finally, the Thunder Warriors’ individuality and desire to carve out their own fiefdoms formed part of their downfall, and they were mere emotional midgets compared to the Primarchs’ Shakespearean turmoils.
There would never be room for two Legios – the Cataegis and the Custodes – and Valdor was ruthless enough to ensure that it was his own kind that endured.
Valdor suggests that the consequences of letting events unfold is a fatal loss of control, no matter how powerful you are. You actually do have to move early and ruthlessly, which goes a long way to explaining the Horus Heresy. Valdor doesn’t quite have the charismatic central character or set of characters to make that point, but I still see it (or have alternatively made it up – trust no one).
October 18, 2022
This is probably one of the first books somebody should read to understand the general timeline of the Imperium of Man.
Valdor speaks of an interesting period of the Unification Wars of Terra, when the Emperor himself was still on the battlefields, uniting the separate kingdoms of Earth. It is the time of the flawed gene manipulated proto-Astartes called the Thunder Legion.
At first the Emperor simply did not replace their numbers as they fell to battle or insanity, but then decided to take more active measures. According to Arik Taranis, the final culling of the Thunder Warriors took place following the victory of the last battle of Unity, and was carried out by the Legio Custodes led by Valdor, the only soldiers in the Imperial armies capable of defeating the Thunder Legions. Accompanied by several thousand prototype Astartes of the I Legion of the newborn Space Marines.
Valdor speaks of an interesting period of the Unification Wars of Terra, when the Emperor himself was still on the battlefields, uniting the separate kingdoms of Earth. It is the time of the flawed gene manipulated proto-Astartes called the Thunder Legion.
At first the Emperor simply did not replace their numbers as they fell to battle or insanity, but then decided to take more active measures. According to Arik Taranis, the final culling of the Thunder Warriors took place following the victory of the last battle of Unity, and was carried out by the Legio Custodes led by Valdor, the only soldiers in the Imperial armies capable of defeating the Thunder Legions. Accompanied by several thousand prototype Astartes of the I Legion of the newborn Space Marines.
October 17, 2023
I lived, […] It was short, and it was painful, but by the nine hells, I lived. I'd rather have it that way than yours - no joy, no hate, no fear. Unbreakable without growth, immortal without passion!’
It would be quite offensive to give this book any less than 4 stars. If The Outcast Dead was a loregasm, this was a loregy.
4.5
It would be quite offensive to give this book any less than 4 stars. If The Outcast Dead was a loregasm, this was a loregy.
4.5
April 30, 2024
Valdor: Birth of the Imperium is an interesting story that I was not necessarily the biggest fan of during the first half of the book but quickly came around and ended up really loving by the latter half and final pages.
Even though Constatin Valdor is the namesake of this piece, he reserves only a handful of onscreen interactions throughout the book. Those moments are nothing short of incredible interactions and insight to a character that we don't hear from too often in the Warhammer universe. Meshing his moments and the overarching theme of the creation of the Thunder Warriors and their eventual phasing out/extermination to make way for the Adeptus Astartes creates a well written story of what it means to be a creation made for one thing and what happens when that objective is completed?
Overall I give this book a relatively solid 4/5.
"'I am nothing' he countered, finding that he uttered the words with more vehemence than he'd intended. 'An instrument, to be cast aside when its function is performed'"
Even though Constatin Valdor is the namesake of this piece, he reserves only a handful of onscreen interactions throughout the book. Those moments are nothing short of incredible interactions and insight to a character that we don't hear from too often in the Warhammer universe. Meshing his moments and the overarching theme of the creation of the Thunder Warriors and their eventual phasing out/extermination to make way for the Adeptus Astartes creates a well written story of what it means to be a creation made for one thing and what happens when that objective is completed?
Overall I give this book a relatively solid 4/5.
"'I am nothing' he countered, finding that he uttered the words with more vehemence than he'd intended. 'An instrument, to be cast aside when its function is performed'"
September 22, 2022
4.5/5 stars
December 3, 2022
Enjoyed reading about the early stages of the Imperium and valdor, could've focused a bit more on him tho as he seemed to be a side character in his own book. Was a bit dry and slow to read at times.
October 20, 2023
I was really unsure due to how little info we have on the post unification period but it is a fantastically realised era and my only issue is we do not get more of it, could easily have been a full series but I'm happy we even got this
May 16, 2022
Chris Wraight shows why he is absolutely one of the best Horus Heresy authors in this: he weaves not only a good tale of the internal life of a character easily turned into a caricature of the stalwart defender, he brings in themes about how people respond to the accumulation of power, in this case, the time just after the Emperor has “united” Terra but before he has made clear that His vision for a united humanity goes beyond Terra itself.
It’s also a lovely insight into the Unification Wars, even if it is at the extreme tail end of it, a topic that the characters in the Heresy can barely touch on because almost none of them were there for it.
It’s also a lovely insight into the Unification Wars, even if it is at the extreme tail end of it, a topic that the characters in the Heresy can barely touch on because almost none of them were there for it.
July 28, 2021
Constantin Valdor, Captain-general of the Legio Custodes, right hand of the Emperor, wielder of the Apollonian Spear. He is the bringer of the new age, and warden of the old. He is both destroyer and preserver. Valdor: Birth of the Imperium is part mystery, part character study of the greatest companion to the Emperor, but it also has some action sparsely peppered throughout the story.
For me, this is a quality novel considering the setting; the Horus Heresy is rather bloated with filler novels to an extent, so it's refreshing to read one that is focused, well-paced, and intriguing. I do have a few gripes with the novel, but they are minor considering how deftly written this novel is, although it is rather short.
The good! Valdor is without peer in this novel, as he should be considering the foes he faces during this period near the end of Unification. The description of he and his fellow Custodes' abilities are undeniable yet not poorly indulged. The antagonists (especially the main one who is well-rounded) have believable motivations, which Valdor identifies and even seems to respect, or at minimum understands. There's a mystery to be solved, and you as the reader journey with the characters as the book hops perspective to show the facets of the plot. There's some nice foreshadowing too in pieces of dialogue to be had, coupled with the motivations and descriptors of the two main characters present an ending that is not only inevitable but believable. Mr. Wraight has produced a novel that has become one of my favorites in the setting.
The gripes! Yes, I gave this book 5 stars, but I have a few minor issues with it as stated above. I'd liked to have seen more flashbacks to battles of Unification; the story is only 193 pages long! I find the pricing of Black Library's short hardback novels to be absurd. For $19 plus tax I should be getting at least 300 pages, minimum. Another Custodes was also introduced by name, and I would have liked to seen more of him as well.
If you are a fan of the Horus Heresy series, this is a must-read and a quick one at that. I am eager to read more by Chris Wraight.
For me, this is a quality novel considering the setting; the Horus Heresy is rather bloated with filler novels to an extent, so it's refreshing to read one that is focused, well-paced, and intriguing. I do have a few gripes with the novel, but they are minor considering how deftly written this novel is, although it is rather short.
The good! Valdor is without peer in this novel, as he should be considering the foes he faces during this period near the end of Unification. The description of he and his fellow Custodes' abilities are undeniable yet not poorly indulged. The antagonists (especially the main one who is well-rounded) have believable motivations, which Valdor identifies and even seems to respect, or at minimum understands. There's a mystery to be solved, and you as the reader journey with the characters as the book hops perspective to show the facets of the plot. There's some nice foreshadowing too in pieces of dialogue to be had, coupled with the motivations and descriptors of the two main characters present an ending that is not only inevitable but believable. Mr. Wraight has produced a novel that has become one of my favorites in the setting.
The gripes! Yes, I gave this book 5 stars, but I have a few minor issues with it as stated above. I'd liked to have seen more flashbacks to battles of Unification; the story is only 193 pages long! I find the pricing of Black Library's short hardback novels to be absurd. For $19 plus tax I should be getting at least 300 pages, minimum. Another Custodes was also introduced by name, and I would have liked to seen more of him as well.
If you are a fan of the Horus Heresy series, this is a must-read and a quick one at that. I am eager to read more by Chris Wraight.
October 10, 2020
It seems that even from it's onset, the Imperium has always been tenuously held together. Many rulers, warlords, demagogues, and even so called 'emperors' have risen and fallen across the war-torn face of Old Earth-what makes the so called "Emperor of Mankind" any different?
He succeeded where everyone else failed. He brought unity and order to a chaotic world.
So it would seem, anyways. Brewing underneath the surface, tensions stir and boil.
Much foreshadowing is placed throughout the book, the rebellions and tensions are a microcosm of of the even greater Heresy War that will soon befall Terra centuries later. Everything seems cyclical, and history that was in the past will be repeated in the future.
This book was equal parts a joy and frustrating to read. A joy, because Pre-Unity, Pre-Imperial Terra is such a bizarre time in the 40K universe, a time we rarely get to see and is shrouded in so much mystery and hearsay. We only get glimpses and recounts of events after they've long passed. Simultaneously, that's frustrating, as we rarely get to know or hear about these events, how the Emperor of Man led his armies, and how decisive battles were won. For a setting that's known for it's voluminous lore, this is very lacking!
Yet the tidbits we do get are extremely tantalizing. We learn the origins of the Astartes, we see how the Terran populace view the Emperor and his Legion of golden warriors, the Custodes, with both admiration and dread.
He succeeded where everyone else failed. He brought unity and order to a chaotic world.
So it would seem, anyways. Brewing underneath the surface, tensions stir and boil.
Much foreshadowing is placed throughout the book, the rebellions and tensions are a microcosm of of the even greater Heresy War that will soon befall Terra centuries later. Everything seems cyclical, and history that was in the past will be repeated in the future.
This book was equal parts a joy and frustrating to read. A joy, because Pre-Unity, Pre-Imperial Terra is such a bizarre time in the 40K universe, a time we rarely get to see and is shrouded in so much mystery and hearsay. We only get glimpses and recounts of events after they've long passed. Simultaneously, that's frustrating, as we rarely get to know or hear about these events, how the Emperor of Man led his armies, and how decisive battles were won. For a setting that's known for it's voluminous lore, this is very lacking!
Yet the tidbits we do get are extremely tantalizing. We learn the origins of the Astartes, we see how the Terran populace view the Emperor and his Legion of golden warriors, the Custodes, with both admiration and dread.
July 4, 2020
An interesting Unification Era story.
A multi-POV story set around the construction-site of what would become the Emperors Palace of Terra. Tough ostensibly a story about Constantine Valdor, he only appears sparely, with the majority of the pages taken up with side-characters. The main one of these is: Kandawire a female High Lord of Terra on an investigative mission related to the a mysterious battle at the end of the Unification Wars.
Overall this was an interesting novel. It hinted, far more than it revealed, but firmly kept my attention and revealed a number of coole lore-tidbits that made the 40K world better as a whole. story wise it was a mesh of different elements that slowly formed a single tapestry. In all I'd have to say that this novel, despite a decent story, was far more of an set-piece or display of scenery withing the 40K timeline that a true story.
So 4 stars with lots of cool details, but in the end just as much unanswered questions as answered hinted at.
A multi-POV story set around the construction-site of what would become the Emperors Palace of Terra. Tough ostensibly a story about Constantine Valdor, he only appears sparely, with the majority of the pages taken up with side-characters. The main one of these is: Kandawire a female High Lord of Terra on an investigative mission related to the a mysterious battle at the end of the Unification Wars.
Overall this was an interesting novel. It hinted, far more than it revealed, but firmly kept my attention and revealed a number of coole lore-tidbits that made the 40K world better as a whole. story wise it was a mesh of different elements that slowly formed a single tapestry. In all I'd have to say that this novel, despite a decent story, was far more of an set-piece or display of scenery withing the 40K timeline that a true story.
So 4 stars with lots of cool details, but in the end just as much unanswered questions as answered hinted at.
December 13, 2020
A really wonderful read. The characters are not really the focus here - they serve only to tell the story. And what a story it is! Lots of lore from a period of time in the 40K/30K universe that has had very little attention. Most of what we have learned over the years have been hearsay and stories of the past. In Valdor we get a true telling of the events that occured in the final years of the Unification of Terra. This isn't your typical bolter porn, though there is action of course. Read this to learn more about the mindset and ideals of the Emperor, Malcador, and of course Valdor. Read if you want to learn more about Thunder Warriors.
August 11, 2020
As the starter book for a sub series on characters in the Horus Heresy, this was a solid story. Going all the way before the Crusade and the creation of the Space Marines or any Primarch was a great decision. The interplay between Valdor and a High Lord of Terra was handled very well. We got to see the dynamics of Terra before everything goes kit over kettle.
You get a great impression of the duty Valdor holds as a guardian of the Emperor and his motivations.
I am looking forward to the next in this series once it is announced.
You get a great impression of the duty Valdor holds as a guardian of the Emperor and his motivations.
I am looking forward to the next in this series once it is announced.
August 15, 2020
I'm biased, anything Unification Wars and Thunder Warrior is going to go great with me. I'm pretty meh on Custodian's and went into this knowing virtually nothing about them and nothing about Valdor. Author does well giving the normally static; statuesque imperial soldiers giving them some very much needed depth and character and a bit of the 'human' part of transhuman super soldier.
I was genuinely disappointed when the book was over, wanting more. I really hope if BL ever decides to do a 'history' style book Wraight is given or included on the project.
I was genuinely disappointed when the book was over, wanting more. I really hope if BL ever decides to do a 'history' style book Wraight is given or included on the project.
September 16, 2020
Good book. No idea why they keep naming books after characters that don't dominate the narrative, particularly when the story is interesting anyway.
I can't say a lot without dropping spoilers so I'll make these short comments (1) it's a lore whore's paradise - loads of fluff bits, and (2) the premise of the protagonist existing just makes no sense in the context of the story being told - this glaring anomaly brings it down a star
I can't say a lot without dropping spoilers so I'll make these short comments (1) it's a lore whore's paradise - loads of fluff bits, and (2) the premise of the protagonist existing just makes no sense in the context of the story being told - this glaring anomaly brings it down a star
November 7, 2020
A short-ish novel of the early days of the Imperium, focusing on one of the many betrayals which started the Imperium down its - perhaps inevitable - path to the totalitarian dystopian nightmare it is in the 41st millennium. Well worth a read, if you're interested in the Unification Wars, but you have to be pretty deep into the lore to appreciate most of what's going on.
Wraight continues to impress in the decidedly mixed bag of the Black Library stable.
Wraight continues to impress in the decidedly mixed bag of the Black Library stable.
April 11, 2021
An interesting look at the shift between conquering Terra and expanding beyond.
Also insight in to Valdor and other of the Custodes, as well as those involved with creating the Thunder Warriors, Custodes and Astartes.
Finally a look in to the early stages of the Imperial Palace, Highlords of Terra, and the organizational growth of the Administratum.
Also insight in to Valdor and other of the Custodes, as well as those involved with creating the Thunder Warriors, Custodes and Astartes.
Finally a look in to the early stages of the Imperial Palace, Highlords of Terra, and the organizational growth of the Administratum.
July 23, 2020
An engaging history lesson of the demise of the thunder warriors and the birth of the space marines.
March 27, 2021
I feel like this book has laid more lore down in 200-some pages than alot of Black Library books have in the last decade.
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