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401 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 1, 2011
For me, very few aspects sours a book faster than the Hs having smex time with OW/OM; still, if the author must include such, it HAS to be a fade to black.
Unfortunately, the reader's first glimpse of, Griffin, our H, is of him having a romp with a married woman. Worse is that he was found in flagrante by none other than the heroine, Hero.
Bad intro for sure, yet I held out hope that the rest of the book would slough away that awkward scene.
Except, it got worse.
• Hero was engaged to Griffin's brother
• Griffin finds he's falling in love with Hero
• Neither of them do the right thing
• Eventually they have sex.
• Bibi was not a happy camper.
Overall, I think the author introduced too much forced angst which made the plot convoluted and dreary.
DNF @ 80%.
"I dare," he muttered, "because I'm selfish and black-hearted and vain. I dare because you are what you are and I am what I am. I dare because I cannot otherwise. I've lived too long without bread or wine, crawling desperate in a lonely, barren desert, and you, my darling Lady Perfect, are manna sent directly from heaven above."
He wanted to imprint himself upon her. To make her acknowledge that he was more than simply a friend or a potential brother-in-law. To ensure she never forgot him. He wanted to engrave himself upon her very bones.
"You say my name like a lover, so soft, so sweet. I want to lick the word from your lips, sip the exhaled breath from your mouth. I want to possess you utterly. Right now. Right here."
“Then you’ve never been in love?”
“Never.”
She nodded. “Nor have I.”
“A pity,” he said, pursing his lips. “I wonder how it would feel? To be swept away by a grand passion? To give everything for only one person in the world?”
Her lips curved wryly. “So idealistic for a rake. Really, you do spoil my prior understanding of what the word entailed.”
“This is my social face,” he said lightly. “Don’t confuse it with the animal beneath.”
He sneered his words, but she looked at him wonderingly. “Areyou jealous, Thomas? I can’t think why, since you’re the one who broke it off when you decided to marry Lady Hero.”
He looked away from her too-perceptive face. “I never said we had to quit, only that we wait a decent amount of time after the wedding. A year at most. I could’ve bought you a bigger house if you wanted it. A carriage and team.”
“The money never had anything to do with it.”
“Then what did?”
She sighed. “However provincial it might seem to you, I don’t wish to carry on a liaison with a married man. It’s rather sordid, don’t you think? Besides, I’ve seen your Lady Hero and she seems a nice girl. I shouldn’t like to hurt her.”
He grit his teeth, feeling the beginnings of a headache. “Are you saying you care more for my fiancée than me?”
Lady Hero Batten, the beautiful sister of the Duke of Wakefield, has everything a woman could want, including the perfect fiancé. True, the Marquis of Mandeville is a trifle dull and has no sense of humor, but that doesn't bother Hero. Until she meets his notorious brother . . .
Lord Griffin Reading is far from perfect - and he likes it that way. How he spends his days is a mystery, but all of London knows he engages in the worst sorts of drunken revelry at night. Hero takes an instant dislike to him, and Griffin thinks that Hero, with her charities and faultless manners, is much too impeccable for society, let alone his brother.
"We meet again, Lady Perfect," Lord Griffin drawled.
There seemed to be an invisible line between them now an awareness drawn taut by sensuality and basic sin.
"What god gave you the right to sit in judgment over me?" he asked low and awful.
"Oh, but I forget: You consider yourself more virtuous than the rest of us mere mortals. You are Lady Perfect, arbitrator of other people's sins, an incorruptible maiden colder than graveyard granite in January."
"Most men at least pretend to be abashed when caught in wrongdoing, but you - you strut about like a feckless cockerel."My historical kick continues with the fabulous Elizabeth Hoyt!
"For me, true love would be a complete and utter catastrophe."As the sister of a Duke, Lady Hero is the very picture of a poised and dignified woman. She knows her role and plays it to perfection . . . unless she's in the same room as her fiance's brother, Griffin, who would try the patience of any sane woman.
She tilted her chin, feeling a thrill of excitement - she'd never before argued with a gentleman.These two were awesome together! The way their relationship went from trading insults...
"Is your wig growing tight?" she asked politely....to passion...
"What?"
"Because I would think your swelled head would make it quite uncomfortable."
She should leave. Except...she wanted with all her heart to stay. To meet him on equal ground - just this once. To be a woman to his man....to love...
It was a terrible sorrow, a welling joy, as if all the emotion she'd ever held in check or pushed away was suddenly rising to the surface....was masterfully done. I honestly loved every minute I spent reading this book. One moment I was laughing, the next holding my breath, and the next gasping, "No!