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Lila’s life is almost perfect.

She’s finally opened her luxury sex shop and wellness center in a rehabilitated ancient temple. The painted faces are lining up to buy the new alchemical vibrators and unwind in the spa and baths. And she gets to work with her two best friends every day.

So why is there an empty place in her chest?

Enter Avisse, the delivery woman, a single mom with a quick smile and eyes that flash from hard to soft in an instant. There’s a spark, and a kiss, and a promise of dinner next time Avisse is in town.

Until then, Lila’s got her hands full with the shop, not to mention the mystic portal she’s discovered in the temple basement. What lies beyond will turn their lives—and the World Within—inside out.

This steamy sapphic fantasy romance stars a transfeminine heroine and includes meditation magic, alchemical trans healthcare, and family lost & found.

The World Within is intended for an adult audience. Content warnings include explicit, consensual sex scenes, societal transphobia, and child peril.

It’s set in the Weirdwater universe and includes some characters from The Living Waters and Unpainted but is meant as a standalone.

200 pages, ebook

First published September 14, 2024

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Dani Finn

23 books28 followers
Dani Finn (they/them) is a nonbinary fantasy romance author who occasionally writes fantasy without romance as well.

They favor high-steam love stories that crisscross the gender spectrum, from swords and sorcery to sword-free fantasy with meditation magic and everything in between.

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Profile Image for Chloe Allan.
Author 1 book26 followers
September 14, 2024
I received an eARC from the author in exchange for an honest and unbiased opinion.

I have never read a book so spicy and I knew going in what to expect from the summary, the author and other reviews. Yet I took the risk because I loved the last book I read from Dani and I know that they are a tremendous talent. I actually absolutely adored the sex scenes and the relationship and gosh just so many of the little details. I loved Lila so so much and I think a lot of it comes down to the fact that I am a trans woman myself.

This book is racey, both in sex scenes and in pacing. I absolutely flew through it even though I only intended to read a chapter or two at first. It was totally unputdownable and moreish. You just have to know what happens next between Lila and Avisse and read on to reach their next steamy scene. What started as an experiment to see how I would go turned into a really great time. I'm certainly going to read all of Dani's books now to see what else they have to offer. They've pulled of non-binary and now trans characters with such skill.

The World Within can be read as a standalone - which is how I read it - or it can be read in conjunction with the other Weirdwater Confluence books - which I'll read next. There are some details which don't come through as well without explanation, but everything makes sense in time. I am very excited to get the backstory of this wonderful world.

There are so many superlatives that I could throw around, but it all boils down to one: excellent! There was literally nothing that I didn't like, from the beatiful author-created cover to the words themselves. Dani Finn is an author who deserves more attention and I'm going to do my part and I highly recommend that you do the same.

The World Within is a trans sapphic steamy romance with so much hope and love. It makes me so hopeful for my own journey of being accepted and loved as who I am. I want so much more of this exact thing. If you have any similar reccomendations let me know!
Profile Image for Cat Bowser.
Author 4 books41 followers
July 2, 2024

I receive an ARC copy and am leaving my thoughts voluntarily.

I really liked all the other books in this series and it was so nice to see characters I loved again while being introduced to some new faces that I can to love just as much. And I love seeing that some development has occurred! It’s not vital to the story but still nice to see.

The idea of a romance with one character being a single mom isn’t something I see too often. And it’s done so well here. There’s genuine interest in not only the mom but the child as well and becoming a true family, with all feelings considered. I adored seeing the interactions with Theo. And one character is also trans, with some societal pushback they have to struggle though, which makes life all the harder and the sweet scenes all the sweeter.

The spice here is high. But the thing I love about all Dani’s books is the strong emphasis on consent. It’s not there as an afterthought, it is as important as aspect as the physical act! And I adore it. Anyone that argues consent can’t be sexy should read Dani’s books.

The world building is woven into the plot with exploration of history, discussion of the “he said, she said” of historical events, and how knowing the truth is important. I loved seeing the characters uncover and process everything.

That’s probably a huge trait of Dani’s books I adore—there’s room to breathe. They give you the space to really process which adds to the realism. These are character driven books and I love getting to know each one.

Recommend this one and all the ones before it! Just make sure you can handle the spice and the nastiness of how cruel people can be because it pulls no punches.
Profile Image for Lianne Dubbs.
43 reviews3 followers
August 24, 2024
3.5 stars rounded up

This novel takes place in a world Dani Finn had created. The story of Lila, our protagonist, was one of self-acceptance, romance, and finding her place in the world.

Lila is a trans woman who at the beginning of the novel, is starting a few businesses, including the selling of adult toys. I loved looking into Lila's day-to-day life, and I enjoyed seeing Lila discover things about her business and herself. This story almost seems like a slice-of-life story, in that we focus on Lila, her thoughts, and her dreams. I think my favorite parts of the book were seeing Lila and her interactions with her friends, love interest, and her love interest's son.

I wish that there had been more of a romantic connection between Lila and Avisse. While us readers got to learn a lot about Lila, I feel like I didn't really understand why Avisse was into Lila. I also felt like we mostly saw their physical chemistry, at the expense of their romantic chemistry. However, Avisse's son was very interesting, and I enjoyed seeing his scholarly and boyish side!

Additionally, I also felt like I missed out on parts of the world-building. I wish that a map or a guide before the beginning of the story were present as to get an insight into the world. As an example, I didn't understand the significance of the "Painted Faces" and why they painted their faces like this.

Despite some of the above, I loved reading about Lila, and I loved the care taken into creating her story. I personally recommend that readers read other books written by Dani Finn before starting this story. Fans of sapphic romances, trans sapphics, and character-driven stories should definitely check out this novel!

Note: I received an eARC of this novel and am voluntarily leaving a review.
2 reviews1 follower
July 14, 2024
I received an ARC and these are my voluntary thoughts on this story.

I read it as a standalone book and I think it is very suited for that. The world is very interesting and bright and it is definitely different from most books I have read. The characters are really nice and their interactions are super wholesome. You really start to care for them and also for the strangers that enter the world even if it is just for a brief moment. I think a lot of Queerness is handled very well and adds to this book.

Now you can wonder why 3 stars if this book is so amazing? One star is pretty much because I personally found the amount of spice too much. I preferred if their was some more breathing space especially at the early stages of the book which to me made some of the later ones less impactful while I could see the specialness of some gestures, some words were a bit overused for my opinion which made me detach a bit from the scene. So if you are into a lot of spice, you can up this rating to 4 stars.

The other star for me is due a certain plot point at the end of the book, which felt to me a bit out of the blue in context of the story, and preferred to have seen a bit more through that characters eyes before that event. Furthermore the way it is handled by the full cast of characters I personally did not agree with and left a bit of a sour taste to me. Which made me decide to give it 3 stars.
Profile Image for ASH.
8 reviews
July 10, 2024
This is an ARC review. I have no personal connection to the author nor the publisher.

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Feelgood transpositivity and explicit, blow by blow sex in a loosely defined fantasy world.

Transwoman runs a sex toy shop in fantasylandia. She has an instalove with a courier woman. The courier woman has a son and they start an instafamily. That's basically the entire plot of the book. Some readers obviously aren't going to like this book, but I think that it can occupy the shelf of a select group of readers who will walk away from the book with a mostly positive experience.

I'm rating this book 4 stars because I think it achieves most of what it sets out to do. However, there are a lot of variables that can easily make this an unenjoyable read. I will do my best to explore these issues further on in the review, but I'd like to start by trying to explain how I think the book reaches its core audience.

When I figured out that I was reading cozy fantasy for translesbians this book made a lot of sense. The plot is easy going. All challenges are tackled quickly and without last consequences. Love is immutable, it conquers all, and there's never any doubt as to the happily ever after ending. It's the kind of story you can pick up and read at your pace.

It also centers a main character with fairly sever body dysmorphia and I could see this being a difficult reading experience for transwomen who has been on HRT for several years. Whether or not this world has HRT or some magical equivalent is unclear. What's important is that the main character, Lila, isn't using it. They do not have breasts and they use cosmetics and apparel to present feminine. No one ever misgenders her (in the text; more on that later) but she is uncomfortable with her body to the point that she frequently hides her naked body to her partner.

I wanna state that not every reader will have a problem with any of this as it's presented. It feels believable enough, but the story never gets into the nuances of Lila's mentality. What internal struggle present is there as a passing thought; a thing for her love to quickly overcome. There aren't deep conversations about identity or trauma and I think that will work for some readers. This is very much a feelgood story for transwomen still early in their transitions. It might be comically relatable for some and it might bring back cringe memories for others.

Another thing that I think detracts from the cozy fantasy vibes is the inclusions of transphobia--kind of. It's a little hard to summarize, but Lila frequently cuts down her acceptance by eluding to transphobic moments in her life. The transphobic moments are never seen. Not once. We do not witness her being harassed, insulted, or even given odd looks. The inner monologue tells us this happens, but it never occurs in the story.

Again I think this can work to help readers relate to Lila. Perhaps they have experienced an awful moment of transphobia in their life before reading the book and hearing that Lila experiences the same can evoke feelings of solidarity without making them relive that trauma. However, I know some readers are looking for a post transphobia story and this isn't that. It is merely a story that talks around transphobia rather than shine a light on its ugliness.

If this book only had these two issues, I would be happy to give this book five stars, but unfortunately the book is a little lacking as a book.

When it comes to romance I don't know if there's anything more important that character and Lila didn't wow me. Despite being the owner of her own business and overcoming a lifetime of oppression, I found her character to be a little flat. Her love interest, the ciswoman butch, Avisse, spends most of the book playing super girlfriend. She's down for everything, never makes any mistakes, and is happy to reshape her life to accommodate Lila. I understand that this was done to keep the easy going vibes, but her dialogue and mannerisms weren't engaging enough for me to like her character. When she finally got mad in what this book has as a climax, I found myself genuinely disappointed that we didn't get more hints of this aspect of her character beforehand.

The supporting cast has an extremely minor impact on Lila's life and I was disappointed that I didn't see her bonding with her friends. Maybe that's a side effect of all the conversations lacking any tension, but it didn't work for me.

Avisse's son, Theo, is a twelve year old prodigy. Some of his interactions with Avisse and Lila were believable, but others I found infantilizing. (An ongoing trait is for Lila to laugh at Theo acting mature and it really turned me off to the idea that she would be his future caregiver.) He frequently felt like a child and not a character for Lila to form a bond with. I'm willing to concede that my reading might be a little biased against this character as my own childhood abuse may have painted these interactions in a negative light.

Another aspect of a cozy fantasy that I'm hoping to fall in love with is the world building and setting. This is a book that takes place within an existing world. I haven't read any of the other books so I can only speak about how the world came off in The World Within.

While there was the hint of a class struggle unlike our own, this book did nothing to explore the nuances of that cultural difference. I was intrigued by the idea of painted and unpainted people being some kind of show of class, but it had no impact on the plot, nor did I ever understand how it impacted people's day to day lives. Lila was a former elite, an unpainted, and the promise of this being a plot point was overcome with love in a quick discussion.

Both magic and technology were abstractly defined. The presence of vibrating dildos is a major aspect of the story, but this technology is never elaborated on. Everything that's there is there and the reader is meant to accept it as presented and expect no explanations or explorations.

I guess this is a good a place as any to discuss the book's style and writer's voice.

Beyond the fantasy elements, descriptions were sparse and rarely used figurative language to paint a vivid scene. While at times an individual description worked, some idioms from our world didn't land well for me. The plentiful sex scenes were given the bulk of the book's narrative flavor.

This is blow-by-blow explicit sex for the most part so readers who can't stomach long descriptions of what goes where and how are going to have a bad time. While I didn't take count of the sex scenes, I can say with confidence that there were over ten and if these couplings ever received a more flowery summary, I'd be surprised if there were more than two. These scenes are meant to be titillating and you are meant to envision what is described. It isn't bad for what it is, but the sex scenes desperately needed more variety in description. Contentwise, no two sex scenes are ever the same and there is some escalation.

I know I'm coming off as negative, but that's because I'm trying to describe the book's failings.

The World Within caters to readers looking to have a good time reading about a transwoman who is finally getting everything she's ever wanted. If none of what I mention bothers you, then you're going to have a good time, but I have no way of know how much these problems will ruin your experience.

I tend to look at reviews as explaining why a book misses the mark, but lemme explain why a reader should buy this.

The World Within isn't that it isn't perfect. It's a feelgood book about a translesbian. Some people desperately want to come home and read a feelgood book about a translesbian. Some readers aren't interested in reading about depressed people crying their way through their problems, they wanna know that everything is gonna work out and imagine some sweet satisfying sex. This is the book for those readers.
Profile Image for Helyna Clove.
Author 3 books30 followers
September 6, 2024
Note: I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

I'm writing this review from the position of someone who barely ever reads romance or spicy books but has been really intrigued by Dani Finn's fantasy world for some time now and also is not opposed to trying out new things! I also really love that this book is joining the club of transfem romance stories, gosh, I think we need these books now so much.

The World Within stands in the established fantasy universe of the author and features characters known from other novels, however, I can attest it can be read perfectly fine even if you know nothing about anything and anyone. There's no lengthy (or even short) exposition in the beginning, so the start might feel a bit quick, but it's very easy to follow where and why and who we are. We get introduced to Lila who is opening her own sex shop and bath/wellness centre in what seems to be a renovated temple in her city's more well-to-do quarter. Very quickly we also meet Avisse, a delivery woman who immediately catches Lila's interest in the chaos of the opening days. Their story doesn't progress more for a little while, but we're caught up with the first days of the centre and getting to know Lila's friends and colleagues, among them a certain, somewhat eccentric scholar very interested in a hidden room belonging to the temple... And when Avisse returns some weeks later, obscure historical research and a whirlwind romance tangle together to create this light, entertaining, sex-positive story that also manages to showcase some interesting ancient lore and magical technology.

I found the magic and history side of the story, alongside the concept of the Thousand Worlds very captivating, and thus loved the characters of Theo (Avisse's "old soul" son) and Sylvan. The romance between Lila and Avisse was probably a bit far from my taste, but they were both enjoyable characters with a great dynamic, and the sex scenes are written well and never became boring (made me blush a few times!). Lila herself struggles with a few challenges originating from her (previous) social caste and transition, and these are all introduced gently and thoughtfully, but never eclipse the general joyfulness of the book. And by the end, even though the genre is not close to me, I felt even more interested in the world and not at all discouraged from trying out the other books in the series (or connecting series)!

If you'd like a joyful, light, verrry spicy (cozy spice?) fantasy with great representation and some awesome worldbuilding tidbits, don't hesitate to try this novel!
Profile Image for Sophia Turner.
59 reviews
July 2, 2024
I received an ARC of this book for review. These are my unbiased thoughts.

I'd give this 4.5 stars.

It's a lovely story woven into a world that you can tell is large and rich. The book can be read standalone, which is what I did. I didn't feel like I was missing *too* much of the background by reading it this way, and it didn't take away from my enjoyment.

The main focus is a trans sapphic romantic pairing. This kind of pairing is exceedingly rare, as of today, in romance/romantasy. That certainly caught my attention.

The couple is believable, and I caught myself thinking more than once "I feel like I've met this couple before" with how they acted around each other. It does have strong NRE vibes, though I think Dani handles this deftly as the book goes on, thankfully.

Very much worth a mention is how carefully trans-ness is treated throughout the story. Never once did I feel robbed as a trans woman of the trans lived experience. We have a trans woman living in her power and also being fully human at the same time. She has the same fears and struggles. How exactly this plays out took very delicate planning so that it doesn't fall victim to dozens of potholes that would make this feel very much not true to itself. Again, Dani handles this deftly.

I did have a few struggles through the book. One is that sometimes there's - I daresay - too much sex. Which, if you know me, is quite laughable as I write smut. Something about the NRE and the intensity of their early attraction left me little room to breathe between spice sessions. I would have loved just a bit more refractory narrative.

One other struggle I had relates to a spoiler, so I won't give details, but I'll only mention that the cosy feeling comes and goes for various reasons. I would have loved just a little more cosy so I wasn't tense at certain points of the plot. That's a relatively minor thing.

All in all, well worth the read.
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78 reviews
July 17, 2024
A delightfully quirky read. There were some parts where I felt like I was missing something and that might have been because I'm not familiar with the universe its set in, but overall it was an entertaining story.
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56 reviews2 followers
August 19, 2024
I continue to appreciate the unique fantasy elements in the newest installment of the Weirdwater series. The staples of swords and dragons from the genre don’t feature, but the world that author Dani Finn is able to build still feels very much fantastical. The World Within also incorporates many elements of steampunk, and not just in the form of an “olli,” an in universe and sometimes vibrating sex toy.

Continuing on after Unpainted, the story can be read as both a stand alone or as part of the larger series. The title shares a name with the new business returning characters have opened. Though, business doesn’t really do the complex they’ve built justice. High end sex shop meets consultation and education meets mind and body health spa. The location features so prominently, it’s almost like another character. It also serves as the impetus behind the romantic leads of the story first meeting.

I very much enjoyed reading the books that came before this one in the series, but I think I would have enjoyed reading The World Within more as a stand alone. Enough detail and world building is given that fresh readers shouldn’t be confused joining with this as the first chapter. As a returning reader though, I felt that some of the continuing characters didn’t completely match up with themselves in the new story. Some of the terminology also seemed to change a bit from one novel to the next.

Rich description and immersive world building continue to be highlights of the Weirdwater series. In a way, it’s almost too good because when the veneer slips even a little, it’s made more apparent by comparison. A few modern colloquialisms slip in with this one that I don’t remember happening much in the previous novels. This and a personal preference for romances that don’t seem like instant love also contributed to my rating.

Readers looking for a high spice story involving fantasy elements with LGBTQ+ characters will enjoy The World Within. If fantasy only involves high, world-ending stakes and sword slinging, this isn’t the read for you. Compelling characters, a sweet romance, and a lavish world make this a book worth grabbing!
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