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Falling in love with her was wrong. But that’s nothing compared to what I’m about to do…

I’m a walking contradiction.
Renowned psychiatrist. Devoted single father. A seemingly good man. But underneath it all?
I’m a monster.
I’ve always kept my inner darkness in check. Until now.

Until her.

Leighton is my daughter’s best friend. She’s young. Innocent. But I can’t stay away.
Neither can she.
The real problem, though? I’m not the only monster in my family. And to save Leighton from my daughter’s deadly wrath, I did something drastic.

I kidnapped her.

Now, Leighton’s my captive. She resents me for stealing her freedom.
But I can fix that.
See, I’m going to hypnotize her. Force her to accept that she’s loved me all along. I’ll break her so I can put her back together again.
And when all is said and done, she’ll be mine. No matter how hard she fights it.

Or how hard she fights me

Breaking the Girl is a best friends dad dark romance. Please check for full content disclaimer at the beginning of the book or on my website.

433 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 8, 2024

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Eva Marks

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1,215 reviews2,137 followers
August 8, 2024
5/5 this book is delicious & SO HOT

TROPES:
~dark best friends dad
~age gap
~Hypno kink because why not?
~J/P Hero to the extreme!

EVA MARKS DID IT AGAIN! Her book are unhinged but man oh man, they're SO worth reading! This may be my favorite book by her so far. I hate picking favorites but this book was absolutely insane and SO hot!! This is a twist on Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. I. ate. it. up!

The hero, Marcus, is a a psychiatrist and falls for the heroine, his daughter's best friend. This is a twisted book of course but the romance was sweet. He does crazy things for her - birth control tampering, throwing her in the pool when she can't swim, and has sex with her while hypnotized. Like I said, it's UNHINGED but you literally can't stop reading a book like this because it's so good. I felt hypnotized by the hero the whole time I read it, lmao.

If you're wanting to read this, know that it's crazy. But it's an Eva Marks novel so expect the craziness!! It's dark, depraved, HOT, and oh so good. I would recommend this to anyone who likes dark books. I looooved Marcus in this one. Something HAS to be in the book for me to eat it up like this. Eva's books are like crack, lmao. I can't stop reading her books!!

SAFETY:
Ages: 22h, 41H
Virgin/celibate: virgin heroine
OM/OW drama: no
Cheating/sharing: no
Triggers: drowning, birth control tampering, kidnapping, guns & violence, mentions of murder, drugging, dub/noncon
Kinks: dub/noncon (he has sex with her while she's hypnotized), sex toys, voyeurism, somnophilia, hypno and doll kink, breeding, branding, drowning (yeah.. he tosses her into the pool when she can't swim, praise and degradation, bondage, forced and denied orgasms, anal play, humiliation, cockwarming
HEA?: yes :)

My bookshelves may contain spoilers.
Profile Image for Darlene I read WAY to many books.
3,464 reviews2,024 followers
August 8, 2024
4.5 ⭐️

Eva makes me question myself whenever I read her books. I kid you not I was like?! Is this a new kink??? Now, hands down, she surprised me with this one. She wrote a red flags OTT alphahole that had me question myself. Like, really question myself, lol. Please don't take it seriously.

Marcus has been obessed with his daughters best friend for ages, but he knows it can never happen because one she's younger than him, and it's his daughters bestie. It's complicated, like really complicated. But that doesn't stop them both from watching each other from afar. But things take a turn when Rylan, the daughter, finally catches on the little hints between the two, which has Marcus kidnapping and Drugging Leighton to protect her.

Yup, you read that right. Taking her away and keeping her is what he does he uses his hypothesis therapy and other delicious and dirty ways to break and put back together his little doll. And I swear some scenes made me squirm in my seat when I read.
And GASP!! YES GASP!! We see the ups and downs the way Marcus flips from good to dark grey.. he'll have you wanting to strangle him and toss your panties at him.
Let's not forget Leighton she was in a sticky situation with all this and her emotions on what to do and what to feel. I loved it for her, plus she taught and challenged him to.

The ending was great. We have everything wrapped in a black bow!

No ow/om drama (unless you count the daughter), no cheating, drama, Sexy times, virgin gal and no manwhore (he talks about his past but that's it)

Recommend-yes
Cover-⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Heat level-🌶🌶🌶🌶

Prologue
Age gap
37H/18h (Prologue) nothing sexual happens
Time jump
22h/41H
Voyeurism
somno
Hypno kink (he loves making her helpless), dr jekyll/mr hyde trope
Branding
Messing with birthcontrol
Drugging
Mentions of murder
Tiny drowing
Praise kink
Masturbation
Light bondage
Sex toys
Fear play
Force orgasms
Tiny humiliation
Degradation
cockwarming
Dubcon
Non-con
No condom
Mentions of SA
Hea
Epilogue
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 12, 2024
*insert long drawn out sigh*

Chosen for the 2024 reading bingo challenge ✧˖°.🎧📖

You know what I love? »-♡→ An OTT obsessed hero
You know what I love? »-♡→ A heroine that fights instead of being a doormat
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You know what I don't love? »-♠→ OW drama
You know what I don't love? »-♠→ 250 pages of the same dialogue, same thoughts, same smut


»-♡→ The Good

This book started out so strong. There's the intro to the situation, the taboo-ish aspect of the heroine's BFF's father, the reason he's been holding out, etc.

What came out of nowhere was how much of a perv the heroine was. Sneaking around the house when the friend wasn't there. Doing some self-enjoyment watching the hero sleep or doing some self-enjoyment himself.

I've been getting a bit sick of the overly innocent, clueless virgins. This one at least wasn't clueless and her innocence was sort of biologically only.

The hero takes her suddenly, though, and she's not having it. She fights him every step, including letting herself drown. I was actually cheering for her.

He does everything to possess every part of her and I was there for it.

The main kink in this book, which I'm calling somno on crack™ was too much for me. But that's mostly because I've always been afraid of marionettes. I also don't see how it's sexy when I picture the hero pawing and licking at the immobile form... It looked kinda ridiculous in my head.

From her POV it was a bit better since she does feel good, but still, no doll kink for me ✋ (I mean that literally, they tie her up like a broken doll at one point, I think? I was skimming the steam by then)

»-♠→ The Bad

※ First, there was the OW drama... which was the sickest OW drama I've ever read. And this book was already sick enough, it didn't need it and took away form the enjoyment of the good.


»-♠→ His daughter is the OW

Don't worry, neither he nor her crossed the dread i-line, but they got as close to it as they could.

We’ll make it through. As a family. No more trail of corpses left behind us.

The gruesome sight had me choking. Understanding who was behind it felt like someone was carving my heart out.

I called in sick for a week. Showered my daughter with love. Loathed myself for the world I brought my daughter into.


Let me explain. The daughter is so possessive of her dad, she's killed twice before. Both time the dad's gfs. The father found out after the second and stopped dating. When he started to fall for the heroine, he hid it, because
Years of friendship mean nothing to my daughter when it comes to me.


So the reason he takes the heroine is because he saw the daughter realized how they felt about each other and was getting ready to murder her.

So, the daughter is deranged. Ready to kill the love of his life. So what's his plan?

“She’s a grown woman, Leighton. Soon, she’ll move out. She’ll have her own family. And you and I will have ours.”

“We’ll have one big family.” I hope to God I can make good on this promise. I’ll do anything to make good on it. “Us, our kids, Ry’s husband, and their kids. Trust me that we will.”

“Rylan will have to see reason.” Please, God, or whoever’s up there, let that be true.


📢You heard right, ladies and gentlemen, his grand plan is prayers ❗

Let us all put our hands together and bow our heads so that this poor, misguided girl with two body counts sees the light 🙏🙏🙏

As if that wasn't bad enough, why tf do I have to read something like this:
“I love Rylan with my whole heart.”

There’s no other person I’d aid in covering up not one but two motherfucking murders. “She’s my entire world,” I reassure Leighton. “Nothing will ever change that.”

when I'm reading about an obsessed hero?

What sort of weird, sicko OW drama is happening here?!

※ Second, this book is too long.

Like I said at the beginning, I was loving the heroine not letting herself become a doormat, but her biggest issue was not knowing why she was taken so suddenly. He doesn't want to tell her his daughter is insane because "he wants her to love him for him?" wtf?

Instead she keeps coming back to "but you kidnapped me and are being mean for no reason" and he keeps thinking "I'm saving you".

It. got. old. reallyyy fast


»-♠→ Final Thoughts ←♡-«

The idea was there. The execution not so much.

I think if the author's writing skill were better, the book wouldn't have felt so interminable. Once the first few days of resistance had passed, I just wanted the whole confrontation with the daughter to be over. It loomed in a bad way. The constant repetition and every step of their progress being interrupted by steam became an annoyance.

The conclusion was also so underwhelming. ig the author wants to write the daughter's story? That's not my problem, though. If I'm reading a certain book, I'm not caring about the ones not yet written/read (if I am, it's a bad book).

Don't sacrifice one book for a possible future one.

TLDR: Good idea, good beginning. Long, repetitive middle. Boring, underwhelming conclusion.



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137 reviews41 followers
August 9, 2024
4.5⭐️

I finished this book in a day and loved every second of it. Eva creates the most intense and possessive men, and Marcus is the most unhinged of them all. His obsession with Leighton, especially when she's in danger, is next-level.🤭

I must admit, I never thought hypnosis would be my kink, but here I am, all into it now.🤣 Marcus could say “moon” and “cloud” to me, and I would instantly drop to my knees without any hesitation.🤷🏽‍♀️🙂‍↕️


Safety info:

OWD: There's no OWD, however, we get information about his past and he's not a manwhore. He's been celibate for 8 years after his last 2 relationships with OW were murdered by his daughter and he never entertained the thought of OW when he became obsessed with the h.

OMD: Nothing major, but there's an OM who’s in love and pining after the h, however, she rejects him many times. There's also another incident where the h almost got assaulted but she was saved by Rylan, the H’s daughter.

There's no cheating and it ends with a HEA.
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985 reviews49 followers
August 12, 2024
This one started off well but went downhill for me.

My main issue with this was the execution- This story had a great premise and plot, but the fact that the MCs already had such established feelings for each other at the very beginning, made it feel like we were starting the story from halfway through the book.

It also felt like they made absolutely no progress in their relationship because they were already in love with each other 😭 Reading this actually made me feel nothing. The more that I read the lower I wanted to rate it because it just became so unserious to me 💀.

From the confrontations to the dialogue- it was so unbelievably hard to take anything seriously and it just didn't hit its mark🤷‍♀️.
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37 reviews
August 14, 2024
The spiciest, most taboo, but most delicious book I've ever sank my teeth into. It had a hold on me from beginning to end, while making me feel things I should probably see a therapist about.
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187 reviews149 followers
September 24, 2024
You might wonder how I have the audacity to give this twisted dark romance 4.5 stars, when I've ranted about comparatively milder sins from characters in other books?

Well... the thing you gotta remember is, my moral compass is a roulette wheel. 🤷‍♀️ 🚩🚩🚩

➞ MMC is inspired by Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.
➞ I've never seen dollification or hypnosis kink in a romance before, so big points for originality!
➞ It sometimes felt like a psychological thriller with a dash of horror. Actually, maybe psychosexual is a better term, because after Marcus kidnaps Leighton, not much happens besides sex. And yet it still had me in a chokehold.

Marcus lost points with me towards the end when it became clear he was

This felt medium-dark to me, but that's subjective so check CWs. Other reviewers have already tackled the lists of tropes/kinks/CWs, so I'll just link to Darlene's review and Kailynn’s review.
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212 reviews16 followers
August 11, 2024
MCs:
Marcus ~ psychiatrist (41)
Leighton ~ fresh out of college (22)

Tropes:
Age gap (19 years)
Best friends dad
DARK romance (I mean dark)
Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde MMC

Info:
Prologue
Dual POV
No ow drama
Slight om drama (see note)
No cheating
Virgin h (H celibate 8 years)
Violence
Mentions of murder
Mentions of SA
Dub-con
Non-con
Drowning (tiny bit)
BC tampering
Kidnapping
Drugging
Somnophilia
Hypo kink (sex w/ h while she’s hypnotized)
Doll kink
Sex toys
Voyeurism
Bondage
Forced & denied orgasms
Humiliation
Praise & Degradation
Branding
Breeding
No third-act breakup
Epilogue
HEA


I read 55% of this book on the verge of passing out for the night, so the first half was a little confusing for me. That’s probably just my fault though.

In the end, it just didn’t keep my attention as much as I wished. It may also be because one of the recent books I read was SO good, and I was comparing the two (not on purpose). The funny thing is that book was also about a psychiatrist.

I do recommend it. This was just a me thing.


Safety

OMD: There is a guy “friend” who is in love with h. She rejected him every time. H even witnessed it a few times.

**note**
H has been into h for 5 years meaning he was into her when she was 17, but nothing happened.

**note**
H’s baby mama was an on-again-off-again girlfriend who he never loved, and died in childbirth. He had only two short-lived relationships before his celibacy started. He said he hadn’t entertained the thought of other women for 5 years.
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274 reviews31 followers
September 3, 2024
ARC for an honest review

Breaking The Girl by Eva Marks

Genre: Dark Psychological Romance

Pages: 377

Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

Tropes:
•Age Gap
•Best Friends Father
•Forces Proximity
•Touch Her and ☠️
•Obsessed Toxic Love
•Breeding Kink
•BC Manipulation
•S3xual Mind Manipulation / Gr00ming


I was lucky enough to read this as an ARC. And let me just say, this was a deliciously, dark book! I was surprised by how much I was drawn into the story line and where the author was going with it. I love a good psycho MC and when he’s your best friend’s hot father… yes, please. The only reason why I didn’t give this a 5-star rating was because of Ry… I just felt her character was unrealistic. I won’t go into details because I can’t give anything away, (that would ruin the plot twist) but I didn’t like her from the start. There were also a few things unexplained regarding her as well. BUT the storyline was original and so damn good!
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499 reviews95 followers
August 9, 2024
Leighton has always had a crush on her best friend's dad Marcus. She's been trying to hide it from her best friend though. Leighton goes out into the garage with Marcus to grab groceries but that never happens... What happens next is much worse. What do you do when you're taken by the one man you loved?

I love every single nickname Marcus calls Leighton. Anything that comes out of his mouth is heaven. I can't believe he would wait for Leighton to stand outside his room and do that! When Marcus knew they messed up it was too late so he had to save Leighton. I wasn't expecting how he ladynapped her. Honestly Marcus gave me whiplash but I loved every minute. I wanted to help Leighton figure out her real emotions so badly. That ending was NOT what I expected at all.

Eva wrote another masterpiece. This brilliant woman knows how to write a story. I couldn't get enough. She writes hard topics so tastefully. It was up and down but came together perfectly. I'm so excited to see what she has coming next.
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314 reviews113 followers
August 14, 2024
Excuse the short review… but this book has left me in a daze 🤤 my brain is not at full capacity since half of it seems to still be hypnotised by Dr. Marcus Kingston and all I can think of is going back in for a second round of this book

So let’s try this.
How do I feel about this book…
let’s see… this ——> 🥵😍🤤🥹😏🤯😱🫠
…just about scratches the surface but I’d need the XXX rated emoji keyboard for the levels this Doctor reaches

My advice: BUCKLE IN 🫡
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1,198 reviews232 followers
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August 10, 2024
DNF @ 25%

Despite the age gap, the story was enjoyable until it wasn’t anymore. The H kidnaps the h and kinda forces her to have sex with him. Plus, the h and her body betraying syndrome was sorta overdone.

I knew what I was getting into (kinda 🤷🏻‍♀️)so it was a 50/50 whether I was going to enjoy it. Sadly, this wasn’t for me.
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23 reviews2 followers
August 8, 2024
✨ARC REVIEW✨

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

🖤 Dark Romance
🖤 Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde inspired MMC
🖤 Age Gap
🖤 Best Friends Dad
🖤 Kidnapping
🖤 Somnophilia Kink
🖤 Hypno Kink
🖤 Noncon
🖤 Praise and Degradation
& SO MUCH MORE

✨My Thoughts✨

Wow...that is my honest reaction to the whole book...just WOW!😱💕

I loved it so much💖 Right when I finished, i literally thought “this book got me fucked up”🤭

Marcus (MMC) is such a psycho and I absolutely love it. He is so obsessed with Leighton (FMC), like girl had no chance of ever escaping this mans clutches (and I mean why would you when a man is that OBSESSED with you😏)
But surprise surprise... girl was just as obsessed✨

There were parts throughout this book where I was like “woah ok that got dark” understandable, its a dark romance, but sometimes you have to think like damn that is dark! Like the fucking flower garden!!! IYKYK, that got me fucked up!🤯🫣

I will never look at the words “moon” and “cloud” the same ever again...like dayum 🌙☁️😏🥵 but like you know…Marcus could say “☁️” to me ALL DAMN DAY (not even sorry🤭)

I love how Leighton developed to fully and completely trust Marcus towards the end, like she knew that man would do ANYTHING for her🖤 With everything they went through throughout this book, they were made for each other!

Eva...you did it again girl! I am 100% obsessed with your books! You officially became an auto buy author for me and I am so grateful you sent me this ARC. It was such a dream come true honestly! Can’t wait to see what you have coming next!💕🥰✨🖤
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107 reviews12 followers
August 4, 2024
EVAAAAAAA. Seriously we slammed this book down. You never disappoint me with the unhinged men in your stories. Marcus, can I just say, the perfect modern day Dr.Jekyll & Mr.Hyde. He played his part so well. He is just so obsessed with our girl and nothing will stop her from being Hɪs. My girl Leigh, LOVE her. Totally all about her best friend’s dad from a young age, but she would never ruin her friendship with Rylan. Little does she know her best friend is a bit cray cray. There wasn’t a second I was bored. Heck I was even shocked through some of it haha but I would expect nothing less. The whole ride was a wild one and I was here for it. Just 🤌🏻
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28 reviews3 followers
August 19, 2024
When I say that I want dark romance, THIS IS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!
- Taboo relationship (bff's dad, age gap)
- Taking of a woman: don't call it k!dnapp!ng
- Breeding k!nk
- Angst
- Suspense
- Questionable/lack of morals
- Equally possessive/obsessive lovers
- And so. Much. More.

The plot of the story is SO GOOD & had me on the edge of my seat while I was still able to indulge in the spicy, forbidden smut. The writing was just exceptional and you can tell that the author put in a lot of passion & effort into this book. I highly recommend this book to anyone who loves this genre and wants to kick things up a notch.

Overall Rating: 5/5
Characters: 5/5
Spice: 5/5
Fave Quotes:
"And I love his brand of unhinged. What does that say about me? A psycho. I’m a psycho."
“'I’ll show you how good it feels to be mine.'”
"Truth is, when the right person comes along, all of these so-called wrongs are the exact things that make him so, so, so right."
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91 reviews4 followers
August 24, 2024
10 out of 10 would definitely recommend.
Deliciously dark and depraved.
Marcus is the best Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. He is seriously unhinged and deranged and I am obsessed with him. This book is just wow. I’m at a loss for words. It’s so good and I honestly can’t wait to dive into the rest of Eva’s books.

This book is VERY dark so please check triggers warnings and take them seriously. If you don’t love your men morally grey unhinged and deprived this book is probably not for you. If you don’t love non-con, dub-con and somno kink this book is definitely not your cup of tea. If you read all of those and thought HELL YEAH..welcome to the dark side my friend😈😈
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128 reviews19 followers
August 9, 2024
“I’m a greedy man, Leighton. A possessive one. I want all of you. Your laughter, your tears. The words coming out of your mouth. Every single thought that runs through your head.”

𝔹𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕜𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕘𝕚𝕣𝕝 by @evamarkswrites
⭐⭐⭐⭐
🌶️🌶️🌶️

God this was HOT! Eva sure knows how to get your heart racing and feeling all tingly with her books! I couldn't put this down!

Marcus & Leighton are perfect for eachother but they have a few obstacles to overcome before they get their ending 😏

Leighton wasn't supposed to fall for Marcus her best friend's dad but she couldn't help herself, the magnetic pull towards him kept her sneaking back for more. Creeping around in the night to fulfil her desires she though she was alone in her fantasys but Marcus was right there with her, fulling the fire that burned brighter the longer Leighton kept her feeling in the dark.. or so she thought.

Marcus is an expert in his field and he uses his hypnosis to his advantage, he knows he shouldn't crave sweet little Leighton but he can't stop the deprived thoughts that run through his mind whenever he is near her. He can't stop the darkness within him screaming to be let out to claim her the way she's claimed him, his methods might not be for everyone but he will use everything in his disposal to his advantage to claim Leighton for himself.

𝘔𝘪𝘯𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦. 𝘔𝘪𝘯𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘧𝘢𝘯𝘵𝘢𝘴𝘪𝘻𝘦 𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘳. 𝘔𝘪𝘯𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘵𝘦𝘤𝘵. 𝘔𝘪𝘯𝘦.

This book has a few twists that will have you rushing to find out more 😏 it will keep you on your toes and will have you questioning if Marcus and Leighton will make it out the other side 👀
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Author 5 books70 followers
August 24, 2024
Definitely dark please check the TWs!! What a great book and oh my gosh the spice…. This isn’t for the faint of heart. If you aren’t a “go in blind” girly do not test the waters with this one
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26 reviews29 followers
August 4, 2024
I read this in a few hours! This story was so captivating, beautiful, sad and just damn right delicious.

From being lady-napped, to a loving family.

Beautifully written, great story plot and great characters.

Eva is one of my favourite Authors.

I had the absolute privilege of reading the ARC for Breaking the girl.

He may of broken her, but he pieced her back together 💖
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91 reviews2 followers
August 30, 2024
I absolutely loved this book🤍

“𝑨𝒏𝒐𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒓 𝒎𝒂𝒏 𝒘𝒐𝒖𝒍𝒅 𝒑𝒖𝒕 𝒉𝒊𝒔 𝒇𝒊𝒍𝒕𝒉𝒚 𝒉𝒂𝒏𝒅𝒔 𝒐𝒏 𝒉𝒆𝒓. 𝑴𝒂𝒓𝒓𝒚 𝒉𝒆𝒓. 𝑷𝒖𝒕 𝒃𝒂𝒃𝒊𝒆𝒔 𝒊𝒏𝒔𝒊𝒅𝒆 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒘𝒐𝒎𝒃 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒃𝒆𝒍𝒐𝒏𝒈𝒔 𝒕𝒐 𝒎𝒆. 𝑼𝒏𝒂𝒄𝒄𝒆𝒑𝒕𝒂𝒃𝒍𝒆.”

“𝒀𝒐𝒖’𝒓𝒆 𝒏𝒐𝒕 𝒈𝒆𝒕𝒕𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒂𝒘𝒂𝒚 𝒇𝒓𝒐𝒎 𝒎𝒆. 𝑵𝒐𝒕 𝒊𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒔 𝒍𝒊𝒇𝒆𝒕𝒊𝒎𝒆. 𝑵𝒐𝒕 𝒊𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒐𝒏𝒆𝒔 𝒕𝒐 𝒇𝒐𝒍𝒍𝒐𝒘. 𝑵𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒓.”

*𝐈’𝐕𝐄 𝐁𝐄𝐄𝐍 𝐖𝐀𝐈𝐓𝐈𝐍𝐆 𝐅𝐎𝐑 𝐀 𝐃𝐀𝐑𝐊 𝐑𝐎𝐌𝐀𝐍𝐂𝐄 𝐁𝐎𝐎𝐊 𝐓𝐎 𝐈𝐍𝐂𝐋𝐔𝐃𝐄 𝐒𝐋𝐄𝐄𝐏 𝐓𝐎𝐊𝐄𝐍’𝐒 𝐌𝐔𝐒𝐈𝐂!!*

This checked off every single trope/theme that I look for, and love in dark romance novels. The ones I loved the most were (trigger warning, because I know these aren’t everyone’s cup of tea): Dub-con/non-con, Breeding, Somnophilia, Kidnapping, Praising, Birth control tampering, and a walking red flag as the MMC. Also, SLEEP TOKEN in the playlist? Perfection.

Marcus (MMC) is in love with his daughter’s best friend, Leighton (FMC), and will stop at nothing to make her officially his. He’s been in love with her for years but never acted on his feelings until the “right time” (you’ll understand the meaning behind this right time after reading this). Aside from their relationship being potentially frowned upon by society due to their age gap, there is a real threat to the couple’s happiness. This added a thriller aspect to the plot that I enjoyed. Definitely a must read for those who love unconventional dark romance stories!

Other content warnings for this book include Hypnosis, An age gap (MMC is 41, FMC is 22), Bondage, Torture (not involving the MC’s), memories of SA, Gun Violence, and Degradation.
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175 reviews8 followers
September 20, 2024
OMG! I am questioning my own sanity for not being completely horrified and turned off by this story but it was just SO FUCKING GOOD!!!! 😱


A play on the Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde tale, the depravity of Marcus and Leighton’s romance was top notch! I loved how possessive and obsessed Marcus was and then seeing the little pieces of Leighton’s own possessiveness come out was so perfect! These two feed off each other so well and it just created an absolutely amazing connection!

It was written so well that I felt like I was just as captivated by the story as Leighton & Marcus were with each other! The taboo nature of it all made it that much more intriguing to me as well.

I also loved how the author wove in the bit of suspense with Rylan’s part. Had me holding my breath waiting for the show to drop at multiple points!!

Highly recommend this for all the dark and twisty, taboo romance fans out there!

Content/Tropes:
• age gap
• best friend’s dad
• questionable use of psychiatry
• hypnosis
• breeding kink
• insanely possessive & obsessive
• cnc
• unhinged mmc
• virgin fmc
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75 reviews13 followers
August 4, 2024
This book was so unhinged, but oh so good. There were times I’m like “I don’t know what Eva is doing here but.. no way this works out in a good way” just for me to be surprised every time.

The writing is phenomenal. The story is taboo and not for everyone, so read trigger warnings and LISTEN to them. I was so on the fence about the hypnosis but the way Eva wrote it was just too perfect. The story ended on such a good place but I still have my doubts about the daughter. The story Eva spins for each character just comes to life in this book and I couldn’t put it down. I had to know more. Had to know how it ended. I was not disappointed!! Eva knows what she is doing with her twisted, taboo, outside the box romances and I will read them until the end of time!!
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111 reviews8 followers
August 3, 2024
Oh my goodness where do I start with this rollercoaster ride?!?! I would literally read the phone book if Eva has written it.
I love a best friend’s dad romance but making it dark with unhinged, flawed and depraved characters who blur the lines between love and obsession makes this a masterpiece!

Breaking the girl is a spicy, dark romance with an unhinged MMC roughly based on Jekyl and Hyde and boy does Marcus have too (equally hot) sides to him when it comes to keeping his doll safe.
Leighton is a sweetheart that has spent years pining after her best friend Ryman’s gorgeous dad Marcus and when the moment it could all become a reality she decides that she can’t hurt Rylan in that way and knows it’s wrong. Pity Marcus doesn’t care, with a little kidnapping and a dash of hypnosis Leighton will give into all her deep, dark desires and have the man she’s obsessed with.
I’ve read many best friends dad books but this is top tier, and I’m pretty sure I’m going to blush any time a man says moon to me!
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112 reviews2 followers
August 16, 2024
I absolutely loved this book! Eva is an amazing story teller and I just can’t get enough of her writing! I don’t think she could write a bad book and I will happily read anything she writes.

The plot and character development in this one was incredible with an unconventional HEA.

Leigh had such amazing internal and even external conflict over Marcus. Marcus was absolutely unhinged in the most delicious way. I loved all the taboo in this. All the absolutely depraved scenes and statements. It was SO good! I recommend everyone just run to read this
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522 reviews249 followers
August 8, 2024
I am a forever lover of the best friend’s dad trope, but the hypnosis kink is what sold me on giving this one a try. It was so dark and twisted, but also so very entertaining. As usual with Eva Marks stories, this one is heavy on the spice, but rest assured there is a bit of plot mixed in between on that goodness. I don’t want to give any spoilers, but I do want to mention that if you have any triggers, please please please check the content warnings before beginning. The MMC does a lot of questionable things.


- Dark & Twisted
- Dr.Jekyll & Mr.Hyde inspired MMC
- Best Friend’s Dad
- Age Gap (22h, 41H)
- Ladynapping
- Hypnosis
- “Little Doll”
- Dubcon/Noncon
- Breeding
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269 reviews4 followers
August 10, 2024
The plot for this story was great, our MC has a Dr.Jekyll and Mr Hyde personality which works well with the fact he’s a psychiatrist. Though my brain struggled sometimes with how he handled our FMC, being as she had loved him longer than he had her 🤷🏻‍♀️ Can’t say anymore on that as it will give certain elements away, there are little twists and surprises along the way some you don’t expect.

Overall, it was an enjoyable read.
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69 reviews9 followers
July 28, 2024
Ok, I will read any book Eva Marks sends to me! This is another unhinged dark romance with a ladynapping, hypnotizing, best friend's dad. I love that Eva always has a fully realized story in her books and the spicy is always top shelf.
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208 reviews8 followers
August 2, 2024
Oh. My. God. Eva wasn't kidding when she said dr. Marcus has two sides a bit like dr Jeykell and mister Hyde. The level of possessive of this man is chef's kiss, I also loved the sass of Leighton, like yes gurl, don't give in that quickly, make him work for it. Hahahah so good! The plot was so good, Eva was giving us clues but i didn't catch them... So i didn't get why he was 'taking' her, as he put it ( wink wink) But yeah in the end, thank god he did. And don't even get me started on the spice, UGH... Had me sweating an insane amount! Btw 'Moon' is my new favorite word, if you know, you know!

I said it before but Eva is great in keeping me on my toes, i never know what i'm gonna get with her books, she always finds a new kink, a new level of possessive, a new level of obsessed and i'm so here for it! Thank you Eva!
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12 reviews2 followers
August 11, 2024
Step one, check triggers. Step two, run don’t walk and get this book. I had the pleasure to read this ARC book and was so excited when it talk about it being a Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde type of MMC. I loved getting to see all sides of the character throughout the book. What made this book so intresting was the secrets they were alluding to about other character throughout the book but only gave enough details to keep you wanting more. In the end it is all worth it and the shocking ending was amazing!
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